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A very great novel. I can imagine the things happening around inside my brain. It gets animated inside my mind. Waiting for the next volume!
First and foremost, congratulations on your debut. The novel's pilot appears to be intriguing. The plot has promise. Okay, here's my critique of the story; I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, so I hope you use this feedback to improve. The dialogue of the characters should be highlighted: quote it in the next paragraph or type it in italics. And for the following scenes, be generous with "spaces" so that the readers are more curious and can feel the excitement of what will happen in the next scene. "Cliff hanger" is the best way to end the chapter. These minor details are necessary because they give the story soul and emotion.
A very great novel. I can imagine the things happening around inside my brain. It gets animated inside my mind. Waiting for the next volume!
First and foremost, congratulations on your debut. The novel's pilot appears to be intriguing. The plot has promise. Okay, here's my critique of the story; I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, so I hope you use this feedback to improve. The dialogue of the characters should be highlighted: quote it in the next paragraph or type it in italics. And for the following scenes, be generous with "spaces" so that the readers are more curious and can feel the excitement of what will happen in the next scene. "Cliff hanger" is the best way to end the chapter. These minor details are necessary because they give the story soul and emotion.