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Leon, a man who tragically died of exhaustion due to his sister's otome game, unexpectedly finds himself reincarnated as a young aristocrat named Leon Bartfort. However, he soon realizes that he is not alone in this body. Another mysterious entity already resides there, its voice echoing in his mind.
Who is this second consciousness? Is it a friend, an enemy, or something far more sinister? Will they be able to come to an agreement to share control over the body, or will a fierce struggle for dominance ensue? Or perhaps their interactions will lead to unforeseen consequences?
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a pretty good fanfiction, if you want to read something like MC stuck with the protagonist and work together, not for beta webnovel reader who think with their lower brain.
Don't mind the negative comments which outrights dismiss your story. You have a lot of potential keep up an please don't abandon this fan fic.
Hope you'll like my fanfic, I'm trying my best and won't drop it.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
k... Its good, but author... How do you want to attract readers and not receive backlash and be whipped by readers if you don't have a synopsis and you don't explain properly at the early chapters or even at the synopsis that you will fuse both of their souls completely later?. I recommend you go read the "Book of Authors" here in WN so you can at least learn the basics. As for the novel, you lack worldbackground, you don't describe the surroundings at all but rather gloss over them. You also do not physically describe the characters. The story development also feels rushed. (Went there, did that). You gotta describe what the character is doing, show their thought process to flesh out their character. I would give this a 5.5/10
I've been looking for a normal story about mobusek for a long time. Thanks to the author. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
la รบnica razรณn por la que no tiene 5 estrellas es por quรฉ va en el cap 12 hasta que escribรญ esto y creo que la seguirรฉ dรญa a dรญa, ojalรก no acabe como las como 10 historias de mobuseka en 30 caps dropeadas, estรก muy buena, por favor no la botes :D
it's a very good fanfic I hope to read more, pd: the author should delete the bad reviews, those guys I don't think they have read beyond chapter 1.
rather simple english with shorter chapters which is ok since thats a way better quality than most works here ... mc is schizophrenic no other word to out it... kinda ruins the story for me which is why the rating is so low foe character dev. and story dev. also both personalities are rather bad in a lot of ways. could have bee interesting from the preset but well...
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queeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee desepiรงaooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
I loved the uniqueness of your fic. I've never seen this type of character trope used in this type of fic.
Muy malo en general, los capรญtulos no son tan largos pero tiran mรกs para cortos. No tiene nada de entretenida la verdad y para tratarse de mobuseka es raro decirle aburrido
They fuse(ch37) so don't worry about the split personality and chaps are pretty short so you get there fast and besides that it's pretty nice honestly
Definitely a must read, It has quite a unique concept and I think I agree with the author, for people who are spamming the two stars really need to read until chapter 20 to understand whether this fic is suitable for them or not. Here some random GIF to show my emotion while typing this review:
Thanks to the author, it is almost impossible to find an interesting and updated novel on mobuseka, but here it is. And I'm very glad that their personalities will merge because later it would be strange(Google translate)
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thank you for such a wonderful story, I agree with everything regarding your opinion on other fanfics of this work, I liked your decision. I love Leon as a character, honestly one of my favorites, the only thing I don't like about him is his indecisiveness, so your work is akin to a breath of fresh air, since there is humor that is not in other fanfics and the very way to improve the character, not by replacing him but by merging him with a similar person. I assume that Leon 2 is Leon 1 from a parallel universe, like from the Marvel universe. Please do not abandon the story! If there is a patreon and accelerated chapters, I will subscribe as soon as there is money, thank you.
I'm back at Chapter 4 (Reviewers only read upto chapter 2 so I doubled it) and so from what I can see, these bad reviews are utter nonsense hating over the fact that the MC shares a body with another person. I did not see any of the "so called bad writing" nor did I see "author self insert", MC just seems to be a guy really obsessed with the original work as far as I can tell. TLDR; the reviewers have my permission to disappear from existence, please pin this author.