MHA: Bungee Gum

LV 4

Chopstiksman

Twenty chapters in and I figured it was about time to write a shameless five star review. This is my second fanfic, so there will be a few mistakes, but I try and fix everything that I can. If you don't like it, then, oh well. I'm writing this because I find the concept interesting. The MC will not be an overpowered one, but instead he will use tricks to beat his opponents. It will not be harem, or MCxMomo. I don't even know if I will do romance. That's it from me, enjoy the read. Your Shameless Author, Chopstiksman

LV 4

amaturewriter

"bungee gum has the properties of both rubber and gum" .....................................................................................................

LV 6

InHisName

Interesting premise ruined by the worst of cliches. Cliches by themselves aren't intrinsically bad, but how authors handle them makes all the difference. In this story, it goes without saying...the author handled the cliches extremely poorly. The author uses 'family tragedy' cliche (mother is murdered) in order to develop the MC's character growth. Probably to add some depth to the MC, whilst providing the MC with motivation to grow. Which is all good. However instead of slowly transforming the MC into a mature, strong protagonist the author decides to create a second-personality. This second-personality is basically the cool version of MC, whilst the base version of the MC remains weak. Not just weak in strength, but weak in mentality as well. A sad, unwelcome, development.

LV 4

Miki_Marlo75

the story shits the shit of the split personality just because of a trauma from the death of his mother who is murdered talks about being mature all the first chapters but something happens and the MC changes like this

LV 14

DaoistyQNGiX

Rating may change but idk.... the mc mom dies out of nowhere because she is murdered idk felt forced.... next the mc develops some kind of second personality or something related to that hecause of the incident.... he is a reincarnated person idk how this story went from promising to this in two chapters but it did

LV 12

Ayer52

I honestly liked this novel at first but then too much drama happened. His mom gets brutally murdered, then he mutilates some kid who bullies him and then he has a split personality. It’s all too much and over the top. It started pretty good but then the author just decides to pile on drama as a way to develop the MCs character. Some people might enjoy this but it’s just not for me.

LV 3

kkkkkkkkfn

The author destroyed the story by forcing a tragedy to happen and making this shit plot of having two personality. Like really? The mc parents are rich his father have connection with so many people but he ne thought in hiring bodyguards? Living in a secure community? See? With this you can see the author forced the tragedy to happen without even thinking about the details. In summary a story with good beginning and promising future destroyed by author limited imagination and lacking of care. It best if you simple drop because I can already see you making the story to trash level before chapter 50

LV 12

MalKenDov

i promote this cause i like the idea and want to see where it goes ......... ...................................................... .............................

LV 4

MoldyGuacamole

Awesome premise; awful execution. It was going so well, until the author decide to go for the murdered parent and split personality tropes. Dont let the tags fool you, the mc is neither balanced nor cunning.

LV 11

Kenrio

another mha fanfic destroyed the same way in making a ***** mc being traumatizrled enough to have a second personality. this fic was good until this bulshit plot of second personality happens.

LV 4

Hazy_Eagle

The story was good but then had to get ****ed up

LV 3

GermT

I need more chapters this was a great fanfic to read and I enjoyed and loved the the idea of the quirk .................................. 👍

LV 4

SHOOOX

For me this could've been a good one if the multiple personality was not there Ps. this is just my opinion, different people means different opinions

LV 4

Darius_Chromwell

In my opinion multiple personalities is a Author’s way of coping with a bad story, that and hemophobia hit a little too close to home for me.

LV 2

Poke_verse

Not much to say. It's good. Let's see how it progresses. .........................................................................................

LV 4

Xalminy

Extremely cool idea and well written. The idea of split personalities that are complete opposites adds an intresting touch to the fanfic. Highly recommended

LV 4

AbyssalKage

I actually enjoy this book mostly because of the character i like reading revenge storys like the dxd book the wish of a dragon so i like revenge books that usually have serious stuff and fun stuff to them like this book keep going

LV 2

M7md_Star

I just can't with this author he made the same mistakes as his previous fanfic like first things first for the love of god stop involving the yaoyorzu family every chance you get and secondly it's stupid how you revealed that he had a second personality from the get go you could have made it a mystery and what was that scene where he beat up those other kids badly and momo just stood there didn't even say a single word just stood there that's just bad writing the reaction of the main character to having a second personality is too bland no emotions there at all when the mcs mom died i just couldnt stand it how he was ok with it all his reaction was too weak heck momo reaction to him waking up from a coma was too weak damn dude at that point stop writing

LV 14

Nartleb

Good story, good character development. The author isn’t afraid of making sure their character will impact the story, rather than sticking with making most things the same as canon. Just a shame it got dropped.