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Second Review LOL. I have read the whole MTL Novel (Character names was 60% wrong, but I have read servel worse quality MTL than that) ____Back to the topic, The novel was amazing. He stays single whole time, no Harem, no Waifu, no romance(thankfully) Although ending was bit weird. It was amazing overall. Buykuya literally manipulated everyone. __Spoiler! __ Madara and Buykuya became buddies and bullied Obito verbally. At one point, Even Six paths joined Akatsuki. but the gains weren't that great. that's it, no more spoiling.
Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read.The story itself is good, not perfect, but still good. 🙄🤔🧐🤨🤪😆
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. 🙄🤨😅😆🤪
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. 🙄🤨🤪😆😅
I'll say it briefly. This story is worth reading. There are 444 chapters in total and all of them are very exciting. Also thanks to the translator who tries for us readers
I always hated the fics og ending, any chance you can improve it and include a romance, likely with akane? It would make it much better and improved from a usual cn
A amazing Naruto story. Translation is perfect . Alot of focus on political stuff, but trust me it 's intresting. MC is extremely smart and shameless. He became strong fast, but with logic. he did not randomly did Nsfw with someone and gained power . It is rare to see Good Akatsuki. I loved it!
just the fact that the author listened to readers and stopped using chatgpt even though he used it sparingly, anyway this so far is a good novel and am liking it. keep up the excellent work
Very good Story with stable updates. Like to see how this goes. Hope you keep doing what you do. AkakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakakKkakakakakakakakakaakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakkakakakakkakakakakak
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 😍 It have a great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I think this is the first time I read story where MC join Akatsuki at Yahiko, etc time, and try to make it great organization (although that's because his system).. I like MC/Byakuya characteristic, where he doesn't afraid to killing.. I also liked that he saved Karin mother.. Maybe he can save other character which have tragic death (like Pakura, Kimimaro, Haku, etc)... Can't wait to see what will he do next to strenght Akatsuki.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍😍
read the book on fanmtl but the translation was bad glad you took the book and made it readable, xiaonan and other chinese name made me drop it at fanmtl
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A nice concept with potential, we see stuff from pov of some of the major antagonist of naruto and how the mc changes that. To much useless words added from gpt but overall pace is good
Not a bad story, but the heavily usage of chat GPT to add more words makes the novel very hard and boring to read...you are a writer bro, just write, idk why are so many "authors" afraid of writing...
The story is good but could you provide the name of the original fanfic as I have already read this.
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I read up to chapter 90, and I think the worst thing about this fic is the lack of personality of the MC. Japanese fanfics have this flaw; I don't know why. They create a fanfic with immense potential, plan various scenarios within the fic to make a cool conclusion, but the personality, which is the main aspect, is lacking. And I'm not just talking about this fic; most of the ones I read in MTL are like this. They make the protagonist's dialogue sarcastic. I'll cite an example from one of the chapters I took: "It is senior. Just like Hanzo-sensei, Danzo-senpai is also someone I respect. Danzo-senpai also provided many plans to seize power and helped me become the leader of the Akatsuki organization. He was a friendly and good senior. He ran very fast when we last met, otherwise, I would still like to reminisce with him. After all, he ran away too quickly." Without him, I probably wouldn't be the leader of the Akatsuki organization now." (Yes, this was supposed to be sarcasm from the MC right after Danzo tried to kill him in an ambush, which logically failed.) So I don't need to say much; in terms of personality, the MC is very lacking. He has no motivation to become stronger, no real connection with other characters, and no one he romantically likes. It seems like he only lives for his system. If it weren't for the poor development of the MC, this fic could be first-rate because the details are very good. If the author who is translating would change and create a new fic based on this one, adding more details and better dialogues, it could be better.
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this looks like starting of one of the best naruto. The translation is quite good, tho a sprinkle of chatgpt shows here and there. the chinese jokes have been changed to english jokes which is very well done. The MC believes in mental manipulation and if he was in harry potter verse then he would have surely given dumbdumbdore a run for his greater good. Now we see how he handles naruto world. Give it a try...
This is good fanfic and worth reading ...........................................................................................................................
Warning: this review is based on reading the entire novel on MTL. (End spoiler) Disclaimer: The person who translates this does put in effort so 5 stars for writing quaility! also the fan fiction is good except the ending/last few chapters. in my opinion this novel could have been something amazing, yet the author's plot becomes a mess of an ending. The Author even said it himself that it was supposed to be about developing the organisation, yet transformed into all kinds of POV of different characters causing the MC becomes just the train everyone talks about but doesn't enter. The abrupt and rushed ending was truly sad, the climax was lackluster and the author even admitted that it was rushed and that the passion was gone, instead promoting new books at the end of the last chapter. also no follow up, MC makes the sage of six-paths and Kaguya Talk it out due to misunderstandings in the past as the sage of six-paths didn't know about the family. they make up and end of story, and the end battle was just confusing and forced, making no sense with the other characters just there for emotional expression. the original author:
Reveal Spoiler Second Review LOL. I have read the whole MTL Novel (Character names was 60% wrong, but I have read servel worse quality MTL than that) ____Back to the topic, The novel was amazing. He stays single whole time, no Harem, no Waifu, no romance(thankfully) Although ending was bit weird. It was amazing overall. Buykuya literally manipulated everyone. __Spoiler! __ Madara and Buykuya became buddies and bullied Obito verbally. At one point, Even Six paths joined Akatsuki. but the gains weren't that great. that's it, no more spoiling.
Even though this is a translation work its well done with little to no grammatical errors, story is fun and captivating to read.The story itself is good, not perfect, but still good. 🙄🤔🧐🤨🤪😆
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. 🙄🤨😅😆🤪
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. 🙄🤨🤪😆😅
I'll say it briefly. This story is worth reading. There are 444 chapters in total and all of them are very exciting. Also thanks to the translator who tries for us readers
I always hated the fics og ending, any chance you can improve it and include a romance, likely with akane? It would make it much better and improved from a usual cn
A amazing Naruto story. Translation is perfect . Alot of focus on political stuff, but trust me it 's intresting. MC is extremely smart and shameless. He became strong fast, but with logic. he did not randomly did Nsfw with someone and gained power . It is rare to see Good Akatsuki. I loved it!
just the fact that the author listened to readers and stopped using chatgpt even though he used it sparingly, anyway this so far is a good novel and am liking it. keep up the excellent work
Very good Story with stable updates. Like to see how this goes. Hope you keep doing what you do. AkakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakakKkakakakakakakakakaakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakkakakakakkakakakakak
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 😍 It have a great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I think this is the first time I read story where MC join Akatsuki at Yahiko, etc time, and try to make it great organization (although that's because his system).. I like MC/Byakuya characteristic, where he doesn't afraid to killing.. I also liked that he saved Karin mother.. Maybe he can save other character which have tragic death (like Pakura, Kimimaro, Haku, etc)... Can't wait to see what will he do next to strenght Akatsuki.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍😍
read the book on fanmtl but the translation was bad glad you took the book and made it readable, xiaonan and other chinese name made me drop it at fanmtl
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A nice concept with potential, we see stuff from pov of some of the major antagonist of naruto and how the mc changes that. To much useless words added from gpt but overall pace is good
Not a bad story, but the heavily usage of chat GPT to add more words makes the novel very hard and boring to read...you are a writer bro, just write, idk why are so many "authors" afraid of writing...
The story is good but could you provide the name of the original fanfic as I have already read this.
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I read up to chapter 90, and I think the worst thing about this fic is the lack of personality of the MC. Japanese fanfics have this flaw; I don't know why. They create a fanfic with immense potential, plan various scenarios within the fic to make a cool conclusion, but the personality, which is the main aspect, is lacking. And I'm not just talking about this fic; most of the ones I read in MTL are like this. They make the protagonist's dialogue sarcastic. I'll cite an example from one of the chapters I took: "It is senior. Just like Hanzo-sensei, Danzo-senpai is also someone I respect. Danzo-senpai also provided many plans to seize power and helped me become the leader of the Akatsuki organization. He was a friendly and good senior. He ran very fast when we last met, otherwise, I would still like to reminisce with him. After all, he ran away too quickly." Without him, I probably wouldn't be the leader of the Akatsuki organization now." (Yes, this was supposed to be sarcasm from the MC right after Danzo tried to kill him in an ambush, which logically failed.) So I don't need to say much; in terms of personality, the MC is very lacking. He has no motivation to become stronger, no real connection with other characters, and no one he romantically likes. It seems like he only lives for his system. If it weren't for the poor development of the MC, this fic could be first-rate because the details are very good. If the author who is translating would change and create a new fic based on this one, adding more details and better dialogues, it could be better.
Reveal Spoiler this looks like starting of one of the best naruto. The translation is quite good, tho a sprinkle of chatgpt shows here and there. the chinese jokes have been changed to english jokes which is very well done. The MC believes in mental manipulation and if he was in harry potter verse then he would have surely given dumbdumbdore a run for his greater good. Now we see how he handles naruto world. Give it a try...
This is good fanfic and worth reading ...........................................................................................................................
Warning: this review is based on reading the entire novel on MTL. (End spoiler) Disclaimer: The person who translates this does put in effort so 5 stars for writing quaility! also the fan fiction is good except the ending/last few chapters. in my opinion this novel could have been something amazing, yet the author's plot becomes a mess of an ending. The Author even said it himself that it was supposed to be about developing the organisation, yet transformed into all kinds of POV of different characters causing the MC becomes just the train everyone talks about but doesn't enter. The abrupt and rushed ending was truly sad, the climax was lackluster and the author even admitted that it was rushed and that the passion was gone, instead promoting new books at the end of the last chapter. also no follow up, MC makes the sage of six-paths and Kaguya Talk it out due to misunderstandings in the past as the sage of six-paths didn't know about the family. they make up and end of story, and the end battle was just confusing and forced, making no sense with the other characters just there for emotional expression. the original author:
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