Nice chapter..but u could have keep a bit of a gap between the songs played...it felt a bit monotonous and plain... could have highlighted each songs different vocal parts he used and added the different povs of people in the hall like tom cruise as they relate with one of the songs they like the most... Just my opinion 😅 Also add charlie puth songs to him after this like he releases a single after a gap u know
Well well i am enjoying it...just let him stay with his template and adjust to its complete powers now... don't add anymore new powers now
Nice chs...but don't make him too op by learning true name and shikai without even having a physical strength foundation
Oh shit!!...' he's here...the diddler!!💀💀' Plzzz don't make any story with that guy🙏🙏
Haha take time then release 2-3 together it will be better
A bleach story consisting First generation gotei 13....how awaited I was for this....I DEMAND A MASS RELEASE. Also since he will be part of 1st gen also 1000 yrs old atleast give his shikai and bankai a conceptual level power ....not like those normal elemental powers or how will even survive
Come on its just two chapters filler of 'Are you ready?'😭😭
Really interesting concept and everything is well built...with hard working not op and smart mc...and focus on quidditch too!!......,.........
Finally a Harry Potter story with a focus on the quidditch side...so underrated it is!!
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A guy meets an unfortunate incident and reincarnates in Marvel universe....he notices himself- White hair, blue eyes, pale skin. Getting excited he shouts "Finally!!!! I am INFINI-!!! WAIT WHAT". Only to observe a different phenomenon happening. ....After sometime getting fact checked he realizes he has the powers of cursed speech! getting a bit sad he decides to move forward with his own powers and create his own legacy like honoured one!! "In a world bound by silence and noise, I am the voice that commands all." Hello everyone, first of all as u know i don't own marvel or jjk except the mc. It's my first time writing something, I have been thinking like why no one used this concept like this so i decided to do it myself Upload speed- 1ch/day27 Chs 2k Collections
Yeah the earlier parts were really filler for me tbh of the listening arc..next at this events try to add other povs and their experiences in listening to his song
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