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In this world of Terrapia, myth states that Dragons are caretakers of the chaos wheel, a band of energy that encircles the world, penetrating through the very fabric of the dimension, they tame and convert it, not only to fuel their primal magic, but also to gentler forms that man and beast alike can tap.
But now they have faded away, being sighted less and less the past couple millennia.
With magic weakening, science has taken root and in many cases merged in a symbiosis with magic.
Guppy Bright, a 17 year old young woman, is a technomancer apprentice living in the bustling city of Nolusburg trying to make ends meet.
Apprenticed to the enigmatic and somewhat crazy Technomancer Friedrich BrassTuner, she participates in an experiment meant to tap a new rich source of energy.
However something goes horribly wrong and a rip in the very fabric of reality opens in the workshop, sucking in her mentor and ejecting a dying white dragon.
The dragon, after examining her, takes a gamble and entwines their souls, an act that causes the dragon, Barthurthalomalew Dresnarian Kratomanger Harrowhew Objuslorow, the 5th, aka Batty, to regress into a baby dragon, sealing much of his powers and memories in the process.
This act also has profound effects on Guppy, her own magic is now crazily changed in ways no one, least of all her, understands.
Guppy is suddenly plunged into a world of mystery, intrigue and politics, where everyone either wants to control, or eliminate her.
Armed with little but her courage and unpredictable newfound magic how will she survive and protect herself and those she loves when everyone from techno radicals, magic purists, politicians and guttersnipes are out to get her.
And those may be the least of her problems if Batty's fragmented memories are any indicator.
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*Shameless Review by Author* I cannot promise fast updates, but I can promise good quality characters and writing. For every word I pen in the story there are 5 written in my notes about the world, the characters, and everything in between. I hope you all enjoy reading this story as much as I enjoy writing it. Thank you for all of your support in the past and going forward.
I really admire your tenacity with which you write. It inspires me to keep improving my own writing skills which, after reading almost the entirety of your novel so far, I find I am sorely lacking. As far as criticism goes, there is none. Truly fantastic job. Praise though? No words exist to describe how truly pleased I am, after reading a lot of the garbage this site has to offer, that I found a hidden gem such as this. Thank you author and I wish you good luck in your writing career/hobby (not sure which lol). :)
So I can write a review again. This will push this novel over the threshold to be properly rated. Yay! However there are some people who gave bad reviews to this novel for no reason other than to be dic*s and therefore, the rating this novel receives should be higher.
Hi Everyone I hope you enjoy my novel. What can I say about it? It's a decent novel, I think so, everyone who has read it and given me feedback thinks so. So if you want a more classical and unique fantasy story compared to most novels on this site go ahead and start reading. It starts off a little slow as the world building is unveiled but picks up momentum as it goes. I have two more novels planned in this trilogy and already have outlines and character sketches for them so there is plenty more to come. please note, due to writing and editing everything myself part time after full time work and studies releases will not be fast but they will come.
Plenty of planning has clearly gone into the creation of the world of this web-novel, giving it depth and credibility. Nightdrift's characters draw on fabled creatures of lore and legend, with unique traits and quirky idiosyncrasies which capriate the reader. Some editing of writing is needed polish it, but the plot is unfolding securely and I'm glad Nightdrift is finding time to get the chapters out so quickly. I can't eat for Chapter 7!
My favourite character would have to be guppy her overpowered abilitys are amazing (So far),but all in all this story is just so gripping and I wait and wait for the next chapters because I'm actually hooked๐
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Overall I'm thoroughly enjoying the development of the story, its a great read and the story line is captivating. As someone who has read numerous fantasies I'm looking forward to how this novel will progress and develope
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I am loving the character development so far! This story shows a lot of promise and I am finding it hard to put down. Keep going, I can't wait for more!