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Very interesting book. Kinda reminds me of - In Naruto world with Tenseigan. I like MC'S personality he isn't peace claimer or anything. Love intrest is probably Tsunade. Overall, I just hope he does more experiments or try to create more techniques.
This is a great book. It's moving forward in a good pace, allowing the reader to comprehend everything that is going on while keeping the story interesting. The story is realistic showing that even the best plans are not absolute since the world won't wait for you. Lastly, the character's personalities are quite deep showing how they are affected by their different ideologies, their surroundings and their feelings.
the first fanfic in a while to make me attached and actually feel when a character died or a plot twist is revealed. a great story where the mc isn't a cardboard cut-out of every other isekai mc, and despite being a villain, it isn't an egdy emo
A very good story with a incredible main character and side cast, the end was rush but still very satisfying.Apart from the end there no flaw.
Good story!! the ending was a bit of a let down, however it is understandable since the OG author lost their passion. LOTs of questions being asked, all of which are left unanswered. nevertheless it was fun. ;P
This has got to be one of the biggest flops I’ve seen. 💀 Bro was cooking for 200+ chapters. And then in the last 20 spilled all the beans on the floor like Kevin from the office (if yk yk). I feel like something might have happened to the author that made him rush it, or he got tired and wanted to finish it. Idk what happened, so until then, I’m giving this a 2.5 rating.
great story. It'd say up to 4th war it was amazing. I personally didn't like the ending that much, I think it has become a bit cliche, but it was okay.
honestly a great story. the ending is a bit sudden but its very peculiar and i enjoiyed it
very good book, I enjoyed it so much that I read in I'm about a week. 👍 though sadly, the ending was subpar, the journey there was good.[img=recommend]
I actually enjoyed reading this although it certainly had flaws I'm glad I read it one of the few times I've actually finished a story 10/10 thank you
A good novel with potential to become a masterpiece, but got ruined because of rush ending. btw i enjoyed reading this novel the author did a great job thinking outside the box.
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Extraordinarily good FanFic in all facettes of the work. Top notch Writing, interesting and unique Story, straightforward but captivating characters and the world that we know and love, adequatly mirrored and explored within 260+ chapters. This is one of the few Naruto FF´s i would describe as peak, with everything from fighting scenes, intriguing twists and revelations, to beautifully crafted scenes full of emotional ups and downs. The only criticism i have is the way the ending unfolds, which is rooted in the fact that the original author lost his motivation in continuing it for any longer. Nevertheless it does come to a close and i would advise anyone, who is interested in the Narutoverse and is searching for something incredible to read, to pick this up, and enjoy. Read through this in 3,5 days :)
Even though the original story got dropped, this is still one of the best Naruto fanfics I have ever read. I am dead serious, I can only think of 1 Naruto fanfic that can be compared with it and it’s Wind Calamity, and even that is lacking in some aspects compared this work of art.
Aunque al final le cae un poco debido al problema del autor la verdad el resto de la historia es bastante buena. Irán solo hubieran podido mantenerlo un poquito más y explicar un poco mejor ese final en mi opinión hubiera sido un 100 de 100
I just completed reading the book and am just gonna say that the book was top quality but the ending was rushed(put to end within a few chapters) because the Original Author wasn't going to craft the entire 4th great Ninja war and put an early conclusion to the story. Overall it was superb.
honestly it is the best naruto book i have ever seen and i been reading naruto books for 4 years now but this man was godly. i thank the author for making this book. i feel sad that it is finnaly over but it is something i will rember by when reading other naruto fanfics. THANK YOU~
I readed whole book, and wow... It was best Naruto Fanfic i've read. Period. It went downhill for last 50-ish charpters, in quality of plot, but it was still great read.
Great book about hyuga i have ever read, i didnt like the previous hyuga ff where mc had tensigen like it was weird and hyuga main branch were op as hell , BUT this ff is my fav . I love the way Yuto is portrayed , loving each and every second of this book.
Literally one of the best Naruto fanfic hands down. No questions asked. Anyway onto to the main review/rant.... So this is a Chinese authors work, it is translated I believe, I may be wrong though. The writing quality is definitely good but not the best, so is the romance in it. Just tsunade tsunade .... The real kicker is the story progression and the non broken power scaling. The fight scenes can definitely be improved, heavily. The characters is relatable and not just cardboard cutout. Gg man 4.8 was what I wanna give it but here have a 5 cause no Naruto fanfic goes in depth about chakra nature. They usually just tell the charka theory and make the MC learn it by justifying bs.
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Good fiction with an interesting story. I don't like a few things but that's just my taste. MC seems very mature and you can't relate to many of his decisions.
alright, alright. I'll admit it, the book is amazing. the only problem is the occasional character name error, but besides that, it is amazing. No complaints, I believe the boom is being translated, not written, but still, whoever is responsible takes the time to give justice to a good story, and it shows. I read a lot of Naruto fanfics, and this is solidly in the top 3. what a beauty.
Alright i am practically near the latest chapter so, based on what i read this fanfic done a great job as a fanfic the character personality and power level is consistent with the Cannon, the way the character changes and the main character personality is good, his conflicted feelings between his desire for freedom and morality is very good but i love no matter how sad he is he still can be ruthless. recently I have found a new genre in a fanfic novel, a fanfic where the MC make their own cheat based on the rules inside the canon world, for example this novel and the other example is Dragon Ball Alternative where the MC uses Dragon Ball to construct his own cheat, if any of you have a recommendation i want it
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Great book I’m in love with the plot the way Yuto acts …. It doesn’t come off as cringe or emo and this story also shows the side of Naruto which was unexplained . I also agree with the state Neji made about destiny, what changes Naruto did in boruto? how did how were hyuga put on right track ? The promise he made to neji in chunin exam about changing ninja world is bs. In shupuden we get to know oh Naruto is incarnation of a God like person. Nice Nice. Anyways I’m really excited for the future and translator you did a good job allow me to congratulate you on correcting the mtl to readable form.
Very interesting book. Kinda reminds me of - In Naruto world with Tenseigan. I like MC'S personality he isn't peace claimer or anything. Love intrest is probably Tsunade. Overall, I just hope he does more experiments or try to create more techniques.
This is a great book. It's moving forward in a good pace, allowing the reader to comprehend everything that is going on while keeping the story interesting. The story is realistic showing that even the best plans are not absolute since the world won't wait for you. Lastly, the character's personalities are quite deep showing how they are affected by their different ideologies, their surroundings and their feelings.
the first fanfic in a while to make me attached and actually feel when a character died or a plot twist is revealed. a great story where the mc isn't a cardboard cut-out of every other isekai mc, and despite being a villain, it isn't an egdy emo
A very good story with a incredible main character and side cast, the end was rush but still very satisfying.Apart from the end there no flaw.
Good story!! the ending was a bit of a let down, however it is understandable since the OG author lost their passion. LOTs of questions being asked, all of which are left unanswered. nevertheless it was fun. ;P
This has got to be one of the biggest flops I’ve seen. 💀 Bro was cooking for 200+ chapters. And then in the last 20 spilled all the beans on the floor like Kevin from the office (if yk yk). I feel like something might have happened to the author that made him rush it, or he got tired and wanted to finish it. Idk what happened, so until then, I’m giving this a 2.5 rating.
great story. It'd say up to 4th war it was amazing. I personally didn't like the ending that much, I think it has become a bit cliche, but it was okay.
honestly a great story. the ending is a bit sudden but its very peculiar and i enjoiyed it
very good book, I enjoyed it so much that I read in I'm about a week. 👍 though sadly, the ending was subpar, the journey there was good.[img=recommend]
I actually enjoyed reading this although it certainly had flaws I'm glad I read it one of the few times I've actually finished a story 10/10 thank you
A good novel with potential to become a masterpiece, but got ruined because of rush ending. btw i enjoyed reading this novel the author did a great job thinking outside the box.
Reveal Spoiler Extraordinarily good FanFic in all facettes of the work. Top notch Writing, interesting and unique Story, straightforward but captivating characters and the world that we know and love, adequatly mirrored and explored within 260+ chapters. This is one of the few Naruto FF´s i would describe as peak, with everything from fighting scenes, intriguing twists and revelations, to beautifully crafted scenes full of emotional ups and downs. The only criticism i have is the way the ending unfolds, which is rooted in the fact that the original author lost his motivation in continuing it for any longer. Nevertheless it does come to a close and i would advise anyone, who is interested in the Narutoverse and is searching for something incredible to read, to pick this up, and enjoy. Read through this in 3,5 days :)
Even though the original story got dropped, this is still one of the best Naruto fanfics I have ever read. I am dead serious, I can only think of 1 Naruto fanfic that can be compared with it and it’s Wind Calamity, and even that is lacking in some aspects compared this work of art.
Aunque al final le cae un poco debido al problema del autor la verdad el resto de la historia es bastante buena. Irán solo hubieran podido mantenerlo un poquito más y explicar un poco mejor ese final en mi opinión hubiera sido un 100 de 100
I just completed reading the book and am just gonna say that the book was top quality but the ending was rushed(put to end within a few chapters) because the Original Author wasn't going to craft the entire 4th great Ninja war and put an early conclusion to the story. Overall it was superb.
honestly it is the best naruto book i have ever seen and i been reading naruto books for 4 years now but this man was godly. i thank the author for making this book. i feel sad that it is finnaly over but it is something i will rember by when reading other naruto fanfics. THANK YOU~
I readed whole book, and wow... It was best Naruto Fanfic i've read. Period. It went downhill for last 50-ish charpters, in quality of plot, but it was still great read.
Great book about hyuga i have ever read, i didnt like the previous hyuga ff where mc had tensigen like it was weird and hyuga main branch were op as hell , BUT this ff is my fav . I love the way Yuto is portrayed , loving each and every second of this book.
Literally one of the best Naruto fanfic hands down. No questions asked. Anyway onto to the main review/rant.... So this is a Chinese authors work, it is translated I believe, I may be wrong though. The writing quality is definitely good but not the best, so is the romance in it. Just tsunade tsunade .... The real kicker is the story progression and the non broken power scaling. The fight scenes can definitely be improved, heavily. The characters is relatable and not just cardboard cutout. Gg man 4.8 was what I wanna give it but here have a 5 cause no Naruto fanfic goes in depth about chakra nature. They usually just tell the charka theory and make the MC learn it by justifying bs.
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Good fiction with an interesting story. I don't like a few things but that's just my taste. MC seems very mature and you can't relate to many of his decisions.
alright, alright. I'll admit it, the book is amazing. the only problem is the occasional character name error, but besides that, it is amazing. No complaints, I believe the boom is being translated, not written, but still, whoever is responsible takes the time to give justice to a good story, and it shows. I read a lot of Naruto fanfics, and this is solidly in the top 3. what a beauty.
Alright i am practically near the latest chapter so, based on what i read this fanfic done a great job as a fanfic the character personality and power level is consistent with the Cannon, the way the character changes and the main character personality is good, his conflicted feelings between his desire for freedom and morality is very good but i love no matter how sad he is he still can be ruthless. recently I have found a new genre in a fanfic novel, a fanfic where the MC make their own cheat based on the rules inside the canon world, for example this novel and the other example is Dragon Ball Alternative where the MC uses Dragon Ball to construct his own cheat, if any of you have a recommendation i want it
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Great book I’m in love with the plot the way Yuto acts …. It doesn’t come off as cringe or emo and this story also shows the side of Naruto which was unexplained . I also agree with the state Neji made about destiny, what changes Naruto did in boruto? how did how were hyuga put on right track ? The promise he made to neji in chunin exam about changing ninja world is bs. In shupuden we get to know oh Naruto is incarnation of a God like person. Nice Nice. Anyways I’m really excited for the future and translator you did a good job allow me to congratulate you on correcting the mtl to readable form.