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She was being tortured by her so-called parents and being isolated in their house for 18 years as she can't see what's the beauty lies within outside. It is her dream to achieve the freedom she wants.
The day happen she can now see the face of the World Outside of their walls, will she felt happy and felt the freedom? Knowing she do something that triggered her fear and result to nightmare?
Will she accept the New Dimension that the Fates give to her?
Or will she stay the same Introverted Girl, afraid of giving trust to anyone?
What if she discovers the story of her existence?
Will she excitedly face and dig the truth about it? Or she will stay in the past that stops her in discovering who she was?
It is not just her story but the story also of the people she will meet. And how there lives interconnected to each other.
What will you choose?
The fate that will no longer change because it is already written?
Or The Will to subside the destined happenings of their life?
"A forbidden rule, is forbidden forever knowing it waa the God's who made it. Death is the punishment whoever breaks the rule..."
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This is a great book with utmost potential, I really got familiar with it after reading all the chapters, you're doing great dear, keep it up.
The novel has a good premise and a healthy dose of action and drama in the initial chapters. I spotted a few errors while reading but that doesn't impact the readability of the story. I hope you keep on adding more chapters.
Author I sincerely believe that your story has a lot of potential. You probably need some editing and grammar corrections. But I was really hooked from the first chapters. They conveyed so much, you just had the ability to draw your readers into the flow of the story and feel empathy for Cesia. Keep up the good work author! I can't wait for more releases.[img=recommend]
This work needs to be praised! The MC was suffering in the beginning but she will rise from the ashes in the future! A dialogue that was explicitly laid out. Plot that was wonderful and an amazing world built. The author has brain stormed to creat this work. Amazing![img=update][img=recommend]
I love the small sentences at the starting at the chapters, that is the one thing that made me look forward to the chapter as a whole. Coming to the story, so far I am loving it. Your writing style is beautiful. I am craving for more. I am just gonna add it in my library and will be waiting. This story truly deserve a 5 star but if am looking for more, Maybe when there are more chapters I'll write a review again. Keep it up. Love your story!!
I am very happy with your Author's note, hope you are working to improve your shortcomings. All the best for that. Coming back to the story, I love the impact created by quoting that couplet from the Bible. I loved the narration and the plotline. I wish you good luck with your endeavour. I will keep on reading it.
Hello! Its my first time reading the synopsis lol, and it's kinda intriguing making me read the chaps in one go. I've read the first 3 chapters of your book, and- the violence, the hatred, love seeking, etc. it moved me tbh. I found some errors in terms of capitalization, quotations and grammar. A little edit and this book will be a well polished gem. What I've noticed about this book is that, it doesn't stick on description? Yes, your approach was on the spot and I bet you hate dilly-dallying. But, I was hoping to read more, a little bit of the description ( well, it's still good anyhow some readers do not want to read a book with too much of those things ) I was taken aback with the story behind those abuse and pain that those parents inflicted towards Cesia, I found Cesia's quirk somehow like Kurapika's in Hunter x Hunter. ( His eyes turned scarlet/red whenever he is excited. From the Kurta Clan ). I've been trying to write gore for more than 2 months, but I don't think I've achieved this kind of 'torment' stuffs. Thus, I want to commend you about that. I hate her dad, or was he her dad? Nope. How dare he touch her! Thank God it was interrupted by her kick. lol
Very well, before I start this I have to say the following, after finishing reading, I had but one question "Were is the rest?" like really were is it? This was a good read and when I got to the latest chapter, this was the only thing I could say! Honestly, the world, the setting the characters, it just works, don't believe me? Just go and read it! You won't regret it!
You need to improve your grammar. Other than that, the plot and characters of the book are pretty good. While reading, I constantly wonder about the rest. I mean, read the Book patiently and you will be absolutely satisfied.
I read your novel my dear sister. And I'm so proud of you overcoming your hard works in doing your hobby. Keep on writing Ate! I know you can finish it! Fighting![img=faceslap][img=coins] I will recommend this to my friends and support you as well. I'm happy you made it almost one-fourth of your work![img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=fp][img=update] I love how you made Cesia and I hope she can overcome her emotions and problems.
An admirable story, with a "literary" structure typical of great authors, who exercise power in this medium by writing naturally. Each delivered chapter has a thematic introduction, be it a phrase, a fragment, a word that opens the dialogue between the narrator and his characters and those characters with his activities within the development of the story. Although the synopsis mentions: "the Legends disappeared without leaving any sign", personally knowing the author and the content of the story will make a memorable legend in my memory, like a mysterious book, that I want to reveal by reading over and over again . I would use the auxiliary volume to place the author's note, if you want to put more notes from each volume, use more auxiliary volumes again. The "author's" notes are so important, they clarify the author's purpose. The "volume" notes help the reader understand the volume and therefore the 46 chapters that carry the story. It is an excellent literary production. Invite to continue reading ...
The author can make me feel moved and swayed just by her writings. I know it will be great in the future! Even though english was not her main language, she successfully elaborated the scenes in the novel. An effective author to make us pity the Main lead.
I've read all your chapter's and it's a very intriguing story, but you made a few errors but who doesn't 😁 but regradless of the few errors it was really good.
I love how you describe the FL in your story with such great detail. You have alot of talent and potential here 😇 please keep up the great work.
Dear author I must say it is really intriguing story and your writing style is also so good...👏👏👏 The thoughts of FL you wrote so beautifully that I kept on reading next chapters...❤️❤️ I really loved the characters development...Your writting style and grammar is really great...I am looking forward for more to read...Keep up the good work...👏👏👏
Hi Author! I like the beginning of the story, which makes it interesting and appealing to your readers because of the MC's suffering, we felt her pain and that is a plus for your readers. There are some grammar mistakes here and there but I know that could be improved. =) Great job! Keep up the good work, Author!
It's an interesting story. It starts as a horror (that is how I see it, the first chapters are really worrying), and then it turns into a mystery to find out what creature the MC is. (I have to admit that the title of the book gives a big clue about this, hehe) There are some grammar mistakes, here and there. Overall, it's different from what you usually find on this platform, so it's interesting to read. Keep working on it, author!
I really loved how you set up the story with a quote in the very beginning. You don't see many of those, and when you do appreciate them!!! I definitely appreciated this!!! I did find some grammar mistakes, but what author does have those right? I recommend running it through some grammar error apps. I thought the character development of Cesia was nice, I just wish I had more of that in the beginning. I also thought the background of the Gods was a little vague. I know we all know who the "Gods" are, but I would love to see how you put that into the story. I really love this story and the direction it is heading in. I've added it to my library, and hope to read it soon!!! I want to mention this is the author of Totally In Love, and the user from the forum known as BellsandLexShow!!!!
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The writing is nice so far and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .