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The novel has a good premise and a healthy dose of action and drama in the initial chapters. I spotted a few errors while reading but that doesn't impact the readability of the story. I hope you keep on adding more chapters.
Hello! Its my first time reading the synopsis lol, and it's kinda intriguing making me read the chaps in one go. I've read the first 3 chapters of your book, and- the violence, the hatred, love seeking, etc. it moved me tbh. I found some errors in terms of capitalization, quotations and grammar. A little edit and this book will be a well polished gem. What I've noticed about this book is that, it doesn't stick on description? Yes, your approach was on the spot and I bet you hate dilly-dallying. But, I was hoping to read more, a little bit of the description ( well, it's still good anyhow some readers do not want to read a book with too much of those things ) I was taken aback with the story behind those abuse and pain that those parents inflicted towards Cesia, I found Cesia's quirk somehow like Kurapika's in Hunter x Hunter. ( His eyes turned scarlet/red whenever he is excited. From the Kurta Clan ). I've been trying to write gore for more than 2 months, but I don't think I've achieved this kind of 'torment' stuffs. Thus, I want to commend you about that. I hate her dad, or was he her dad? Nope. How dare he touch her! Thank God it was interrupted by her kick. lol
An admirable story, with a "literary" structure typical of great authors, who exercise power in this medium by writing naturally. Each delivered chapter has a thematic introduction, be it a phrase, a fragment, a word that opens the dialogue between the narrator and his characters and those characters with his activities within the development of the story. Although the synopsis mentions: "the Legends disappeared without leaving any sign", personally knowing the author and the content of the story will make a memorable legend in my memory, like a mysterious book, that I want to reveal by reading over and over again . I would use the auxiliary volume to place the author's note, if you want to put more notes from each volume, use more auxiliary volumes again. The "author's" notes are so important, they clarify the author's purpose. The "volume" notes help the reader understand the volume and therefore the 46 chapters that carry the story. It is an excellent literary production. Invite to continue reading ...
I really loved how you set up the story with a quote in the very beginning. You don't see many of those, and when you do appreciate them!!! I definitely appreciated this!!! I did find some grammar mistakes, but what author does have those right? I recommend running it through some grammar error apps. I thought the character development of Cesia was nice, I just wish I had more of that in the beginning. I also thought the background of the Gods was a little vague. I know we all know who the "Gods" are, but I would love to see how you put that into the story. I really love this story and the direction it is heading in. I've added it to my library, and hope to read it soon!!! I want to mention this is the author of Totally In Love, and the user from the forum known as BellsandLexShow!!!!
This work needs to be praised! The MC was suffering in the beginning but she will rise from the ashes in the future! A dialogue that was explicitly laid out. Plot that was wonderful and an amazing world built. The author has brain stormed to creat this work. Amazing![img=update][img=recommend]
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Reveal Spoiler The author can make me feel moved and swayed just by her writings. I know it will be great in the future! Even though english was not her main language, she successfully elaborated the scenes in the novel. An effective author to make us pity the Main lead.
The writing is really nice! Especially the background information, and the character development; there are a few grammatical errors, but it looks pretty good:)
I read your novel my dear sister. And I'm so proud of you overcoming your hard works in doing your hobby. Keep on writing Ate! I know you can finish it! Fighting![img=faceslap][img=coins] I will recommend this to my friends and support you as well. I'm happy you made it almost one-fourth of your work![img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=fp][img=update] I love how you made Cesia and I hope she can overcome her emotions and problems.
The story is honestly my type 🤗🤗 The writing style is way too good, besides I totally believes that the plot would hook anyone who's looking for a good book.
I am very happy with your Author's note, hope you are working to improve your shortcomings. All the best for that. Coming back to the story, I love the impact created by quoting that couplet from the Bible. I loved the narration and the plotline. I wish you good luck with your endeavour. I will keep on reading it.
Hi Author! I like the beginning of the story, which makes it interesting and appealing to your readers because of the MC's suffering, we felt her pain and that is a plus for your readers. There are some grammar mistakes here and there but I know that could be improved. =) Great job! Keep up the good work, Author!
I love how you describe the FL in your story with such great detail. You have alot of talent and potential here 😇 please keep up the great work.
It's quite an interesting story. Few chapters in and already got invested into the story. It's also easy to follow. Great job, author. Please keep on writng. 🤗
I enjoy it! I'm not sure if English is your first language, but it's a nice read! The characters seem unique and I overall like the dialog! Keep writing more!
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This is actually very nice. Besides a few edits here and there, the writing quality is good. The author has put a lot of thought into the characters and plot. Keep up the good work!
The writing is nice so far and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .
This is great. Good thing I found this novel. It has a very good plot. There's a grammatical error but its mostly it is unnoticeable. Just WOW five star for u author-nim
Author I sincerely believe that your story has a lot of potential. You probably need some editing and grammar corrections. But I was really hooked from the first chapters. They conveyed so much, you just had the ability to draw your readers into the flow of the story and feel empathy for Cesia. Keep up the good work author! I can't wait for more releases.[img=recommend]
It's an interesting story. It starts as a horror (that is how I see it, the first chapters are really worrying), and then it turns into a mystery to find out what creature the MC is. (I have to admit that the title of the book gives a big clue about this, hehe) There are some grammar mistakes, here and there. Overall, it's different from what you usually find on this platform, so it's interesting to read. Keep working on it, author!
Dear author I must say it is really intriguing story and your writing style is also so good...👏👏👏 The thoughts of FL you wrote so beautifully that I kept on reading next chapters...❤️❤️ I really loved the characters development...Your writting style and grammar is really great...I am looking forward for more to read...Keep up the good work...👏👏👏
Very well, before I start this I have to say the following, after finishing reading, I had but one question "Were is the rest?" like really were is it? This was a good read and when I got to the latest chapter, this was the only thing I could say! Honestly, the world, the setting the characters, it just works, don't believe me? Just go and read it! You won't regret it!
I love the small sentences at the starting at the chapters, that is the one thing that made me look forward to the chapter as a whole. Coming to the story, so far I am loving it. Your writing style is beautiful. I am craving for more. I am just gonna add it in my library and will be waiting. This story truly deserve a 5 star but if am looking for more, Maybe when there are more chapters I'll write a review again. Keep it up. Love your story!!
Hey, I've been reading yOur book from the very start. It really get my attention. Hihi I'm excited and waiting for your update every week. 😇😇😇🌇[img=coins][img=exp][img=update] Fighting,! Heart to Heart Yeahhh, yieeeeeee 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕👍👍👍👍
I've read all your chapter's and it's a very intriguing story, but you made a few errors but who doesn't 😁 but regradless of the few errors it was really good.
This is a great book with utmost potential, I really got familiar with it after reading all the chapters, you're doing great dear, keep it up.
CONGRATS ATE! keep up the good work! Im so proud of you! Keep on writing through your hearts content. I love you .[img=coins][img=recommend]
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keep up the good work. I already add this to my library. 😊 I love the concept of your story. Tragic, i keep track on your novel. Don't give up. Fighting!
You need to improve your grammar. Other than that, the plot and characters of the book are pretty good. While reading, I constantly wonder about the rest. I mean, read the Book patiently and you will be absolutely satisfied.
The novel has a good premise and a healthy dose of action and drama in the initial chapters. I spotted a few errors while reading but that doesn't impact the readability of the story. I hope you keep on adding more chapters.
Hello! Its my first time reading the synopsis lol, and it's kinda intriguing making me read the chaps in one go. I've read the first 3 chapters of your book, and- the violence, the hatred, love seeking, etc. it moved me tbh. I found some errors in terms of capitalization, quotations and grammar. A little edit and this book will be a well polished gem. What I've noticed about this book is that, it doesn't stick on description? Yes, your approach was on the spot and I bet you hate dilly-dallying. But, I was hoping to read more, a little bit of the description ( well, it's still good anyhow some readers do not want to read a book with too much of those things ) I was taken aback with the story behind those abuse and pain that those parents inflicted towards Cesia, I found Cesia's quirk somehow like Kurapika's in Hunter x Hunter. ( His eyes turned scarlet/red whenever he is excited. From the Kurta Clan ). I've been trying to write gore for more than 2 months, but I don't think I've achieved this kind of 'torment' stuffs. Thus, I want to commend you about that. I hate her dad, or was he her dad? Nope. How dare he touch her! Thank God it was interrupted by her kick. lol
An admirable story, with a "literary" structure typical of great authors, who exercise power in this medium by writing naturally. Each delivered chapter has a thematic introduction, be it a phrase, a fragment, a word that opens the dialogue between the narrator and his characters and those characters with his activities within the development of the story. Although the synopsis mentions: "the Legends disappeared without leaving any sign", personally knowing the author and the content of the story will make a memorable legend in my memory, like a mysterious book, that I want to reveal by reading over and over again . I would use the auxiliary volume to place the author's note, if you want to put more notes from each volume, use more auxiliary volumes again. The "author's" notes are so important, they clarify the author's purpose. The "volume" notes help the reader understand the volume and therefore the 46 chapters that carry the story. It is an excellent literary production. Invite to continue reading ...
I really loved how you set up the story with a quote in the very beginning. You don't see many of those, and when you do appreciate them!!! I definitely appreciated this!!! I did find some grammar mistakes, but what author does have those right? I recommend running it through some grammar error apps. I thought the character development of Cesia was nice, I just wish I had more of that in the beginning. I also thought the background of the Gods was a little vague. I know we all know who the "Gods" are, but I would love to see how you put that into the story. I really love this story and the direction it is heading in. I've added it to my library, and hope to read it soon!!! I want to mention this is the author of Totally In Love, and the user from the forum known as BellsandLexShow!!!!
This work needs to be praised! The MC was suffering in the beginning but she will rise from the ashes in the future! A dialogue that was explicitly laid out. Plot that was wonderful and an amazing world built. The author has brain stormed to creat this work. Amazing![img=update][img=recommend]
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Reveal Spoiler The author can make me feel moved and swayed just by her writings. I know it will be great in the future! Even though english was not her main language, she successfully elaborated the scenes in the novel. An effective author to make us pity the Main lead.
The writing is really nice! Especially the background information, and the character development; there are a few grammatical errors, but it looks pretty good:)
I read your novel my dear sister. And I'm so proud of you overcoming your hard works in doing your hobby. Keep on writing Ate! I know you can finish it! Fighting![img=faceslap][img=coins] I will recommend this to my friends and support you as well. I'm happy you made it almost one-fourth of your work![img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=fp][img=update] I love how you made Cesia and I hope she can overcome her emotions and problems.
The story is honestly my type 🤗🤗 The writing style is way too good, besides I totally believes that the plot would hook anyone who's looking for a good book.
I am very happy with your Author's note, hope you are working to improve your shortcomings. All the best for that. Coming back to the story, I love the impact created by quoting that couplet from the Bible. I loved the narration and the plotline. I wish you good luck with your endeavour. I will keep on reading it.
Hi Author! I like the beginning of the story, which makes it interesting and appealing to your readers because of the MC's suffering, we felt her pain and that is a plus for your readers. There are some grammar mistakes here and there but I know that could be improved. =) Great job! Keep up the good work, Author!
I love how you describe the FL in your story with such great detail. You have alot of talent and potential here 😇 please keep up the great work.
It's quite an interesting story. Few chapters in and already got invested into the story. It's also easy to follow. Great job, author. Please keep on writng. 🤗
I enjoy it! I'm not sure if English is your first language, but it's a nice read! The characters seem unique and I overall like the dialog! Keep writing more!
Reveal Spoiler This is actually very nice. Besides a few edits here and there, the writing quality is good. The author has put a lot of thought into the characters and plot. Keep up the good work!
The writing is nice so far and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .
This is great. Good thing I found this novel. It has a very good plot. There's a grammatical error but its mostly it is unnoticeable. Just WOW five star for u author-nim
Author I sincerely believe that your story has a lot of potential. You probably need some editing and grammar corrections. But I was really hooked from the first chapters. They conveyed so much, you just had the ability to draw your readers into the flow of the story and feel empathy for Cesia. Keep up the good work author! I can't wait for more releases.[img=recommend]
It's an interesting story. It starts as a horror (that is how I see it, the first chapters are really worrying), and then it turns into a mystery to find out what creature the MC is. (I have to admit that the title of the book gives a big clue about this, hehe) There are some grammar mistakes, here and there. Overall, it's different from what you usually find on this platform, so it's interesting to read. Keep working on it, author!
Dear author I must say it is really intriguing story and your writing style is also so good...👏👏👏 The thoughts of FL you wrote so beautifully that I kept on reading next chapters...❤️❤️ I really loved the characters development...Your writting style and grammar is really great...I am looking forward for more to read...Keep up the good work...👏👏👏
Very well, before I start this I have to say the following, after finishing reading, I had but one question "Were is the rest?" like really were is it? This was a good read and when I got to the latest chapter, this was the only thing I could say! Honestly, the world, the setting the characters, it just works, don't believe me? Just go and read it! You won't regret it!
I love the small sentences at the starting at the chapters, that is the one thing that made me look forward to the chapter as a whole. Coming to the story, so far I am loving it. Your writing style is beautiful. I am craving for more. I am just gonna add it in my library and will be waiting. This story truly deserve a 5 star but if am looking for more, Maybe when there are more chapters I'll write a review again. Keep it up. Love your story!!
Hey, I've been reading yOur book from the very start. It really get my attention. Hihi I'm excited and waiting for your update every week. 😇😇😇🌇[img=coins][img=exp][img=update] Fighting,! Heart to Heart Yeahhh, yieeeeeee 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕👍👍👍👍
I've read all your chapter's and it's a very intriguing story, but you made a few errors but who doesn't 😁 but regradless of the few errors it was really good.
This is a great book with utmost potential, I really got familiar with it after reading all the chapters, you're doing great dear, keep it up.
CONGRATS ATE! keep up the good work! Im so proud of you! Keep on writing through your hearts content. I love you .[img=coins][img=recommend]
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keep up the good work. I already add this to my library. 😊 I love the concept of your story. Tragic, i keep track on your novel. Don't give up. Fighting!
You need to improve your grammar. Other than that, the plot and characters of the book are pretty good. While reading, I constantly wonder about the rest. I mean, read the Book patiently and you will be absolutely satisfied.