Kibou Uzumaki

LV 1

astraeashou

Op protagonist and looking forward in him becoming even stronger hahaha just wish this will not be a harem fic anyways good luck .................................................................................................................................... .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 5

mikedanger

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

LV 1

ManSpider11

Would have been better if it had better grammar and the story being rushed leaving a lot of plot holes. I would have given this a lower star rating but, I gave it 1 more star since the concept is unique just not executed properly. A lot of things do not make sense too like who would give the Kage position to an 11-year-old even if he is strong enough to be one. Heck even if he's a genius he should have become the kage in his late teens, The youngest kage was Hiruzen or Minato they become the Hokage in their early 20's. Great Concept just not executed properly and it is rushed. A below average fanfic for a Amateur author.

LV 14

Sakkaku_no_mori

please don't drop this fic....[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 14

KitKatKun

Pretty good so far... Hope to see more from yah and how the mc makes changes to the world... Keep up the good job!................ ......... .

LV 4

Vasiliy

interesting

LV 1

Amigos_Trolleros

Op protagonist and looking forward in him becoming even stronger hahaha just wish this will not be a harem fic anyways good luck .................................................................................................................................... ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 4

JOKER_JAY

this story is good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.

LV 2

MasterOfDeath7777

Dude this is great💕💕💕 But the story is progressing too fast...😭😭😭 But i still love it😂💕💕💕💕 I hope the MC's waifo come's out late...I don't like early romance..... NO HAREM PLS

LV 4

Gd_Sys

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