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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Pretty good so far... Hope to see more from yah and how the mc makes changes to the world... Keep up the good job!................ ......... .
Finally the uzimaki are getting justice !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Op protagonist and looking forward in him becoming even stronger hahaha just wish this will not be a harem fic anyways good luck .................................................................................................................................... ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
this story is good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.
Dude this is great💕💕💕 But the story is progressing too fast...😭😭😭 But i still love it😂💕💕💕💕 I hope the MC's waifo come's out late...I don't like early romance..... NO HAREM PLS
moreeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Would have been better if it had better grammar and the story being rushed leaving a lot of plot holes. I would have given this a lower star rating but, I gave it 1 more star since the concept is unique just not executed properly. A lot of things do not make sense too like who would give the Kage position to an 11-year-old even if he is strong enough to be one. Heck even if he's a genius he should have become the kage in his late teens, The youngest kage was Hiruzen or Minato they become the Hokage in their early 20's. Great Concept just not executed properly and it is rushed. A below average fanfic for a Amateur author.
Op protagonist and looking forward in him becoming even stronger hahaha just wish this will not be a harem fic anyways good luck .................................................................................................................................... .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
please don't drop this fic....[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Pretty good so far... Hope to see more from yah and how the mc makes changes to the world... Keep up the good job!................ ......... .
Finally the uzimaki are getting justice !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reveal Spoiler Op protagonist and looking forward in him becoming even stronger hahaha just wish this will not be a harem fic anyways good luck .................................................................................................................................... ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
this story is good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.
Dude this is great💕💕💕 But the story is progressing too fast...😭😭😭 But i still love it😂💕💕💕💕 I hope the MC's waifo come's out late...I don't like early romance..... NO HAREM PLS
moreeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Would have been better if it had better grammar and the story being rushed leaving a lot of plot holes. I would have given this a lower star rating but, I gave it 1 more star since the concept is unique just not executed properly. A lot of things do not make sense too like who would give the Kage position to an 11-year-old even if he is strong enough to be one. Heck even if he's a genius he should have become the kage in his late teens, The youngest kage was Hiruzen or Minato they become the Hokage in their early 20's. Great Concept just not executed properly and it is rushed. A below average fanfic for a Amateur author.
Op protagonist and looking forward in him becoming even stronger hahaha just wish this will not be a harem fic anyways good luck .................................................................................................................................... .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
please don't drop this fic....[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]