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What would happen if Kazuya died on the day that Mami broke up with him? The beta fucker choked on instant noodles and died alone in his apartment.
A college student who was partying with his friends got alcohol poisoning and died.
The soul of that college student takes over Kazuya’s body and inherits a scant few memories of that guy along with a system.
A system that would support him in his journey to do whatever he wants.
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I'm just writing this for funsies and romance practice. I want to see how I write pure romance and want to work on feelings development.
There's a system but it's far from being that useful.
It's there for the sake of adding some fun supernatural elements if I feel like it. Don't expect too much. I'll try to keep the story as grounded as possible.
I'm open to criticism so lay it on me if you have any genuine problem.
Join my discord, you can give me suggestions and communicate with me regularly to get updates.
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If you want to support me check out my Patréon.
I post 10 advanced chapters of the book on my Patrèon along with some exclusive R-18 scenes. Check it out!
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Also, none of the art is mine. I got it from Reddit. If the creator sees this and wants credit or wants me to take it down, just let me know.
This is purely a work of fan fiction. Please support the official release and know I claim no ownership or credit regarding the characters.
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Rent a Girlfriend had a pretty interesting plot but the only thing that made me drop it was the OG MC , the orginal kazuya was just trash , just changing the MC can do so much . I like the character interaction and plot development . Keep up the good work 5 stars from me as a Thank you
If you compare this to an original manga... It's very good. Because source material is a trash. Just look at the main character... But at the same time, it's not. Because you expect that after seeing such a Beta cuck as a main character that new one whould be superior. And you get face in a wall called "it's a romance novel dude ", means progress is nonexistence in character relationship. What is more you can skipp all the thoughts of mc, because don't worry, they doesn't mean much. He whould do his absolutely geniuses plan, s even though he could take a Bull by his horns in any given moment. But he just wouldn't... So yeah. If you want a better version of the same things as original - I guess it's a good choice. If you expect anything different... Then you must be dumb. As me.👀👀👀
It only has one chapter for now but I already really like this fanfic,......... ................ ............. ........ ...... .... ... .. .
My review update after 10 chapters Writing quality - Very good Story development- it feels just like the anime with another MC so 4 from me Character design:- I don't really like MC because there's nothing interesting about him, when he came into the world he took everything rather easily like he was handsome in his previous life but he didn't even complain about waking up in body of Kazuya. In first two chapters dialogues were somewhat cringe but it gets better Updating Stability: Good World background:- Same as anime but MC has business Author always slender introverts and inexperienced people in his stories and it leaves a bad taste in my mouth sometimes,
Anything thats below 3stars is deleted or smth. the story is plain, the dialouges are bad, mc is just idiotic, reasons are idiotic. idk, this is plainly just a 1 star. tho better than the original.
Weak beta cuck MC enough said. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 6969696969696966969696969696969696969696969696
If you read this because you hate original rent a girlfriend then don't it only seem good at the first few chapter after that he pretty much got simp mentality going and doing back and forth & back and forth rinse and repeat like that Saying that he will try it one more and give her one more chance ask for her date but in the end he doesnt care when she refused and just back to being simp really frustrating to read no different then the original at this point tbh Kinda regret waste so much time read to chapter 38 and hoping something would change but nah from simp to licking dog and back to being simp no different
Author uses no sense of logic or reason to a characters traits or development. No women with any self respect, especially one as indepdent, would accept her boyfriend cheating on her… I suggest going outside and talking to real people.
I don’t get you author. Your previous ff was something in which a harem is a must but you made it non-harem making it bland but for this ff you write a harem which would be better as a non-harem as I don’t like any girl in rental girlfriend except chizuru. But still great ff 5 stars!!!!!!
Current chapter: 23 If you have ever read or watched rent a girlfriend you know what to expect from the heroines and the author delivers exceptionally. As for the MC from the anime, this is a complete 180. I love the charisma of the MC and how fleshed out the dates are. You know when a system (this is not a system ff) will say charisma 90 but the character is just 🤮, yeah, not this guy. He is like the chad of d'boys that gets all the female dogs (censorship 😀). I also love how the two-faced witch ( I think her name is mami or something) is trying to manipulate the MC but fails and it is hilarious. I can't wait for her to turn into the female dog that she is. Let the corruption begin 😈. Overall, an excellent interpretation of the rent a girlfriend anime/manga with more mature settings and themes while maintaining the urban realism from the source material. I would say this would be good for persons that love meaningful and emotional interactions with a healthy dose of emotional tension and a sprinkle of ste*my manipulation. And for you other d*generates that love harems like me, read it. It's not that de praved but ste*my enough for each girl to have there own charm. I predict the lemonades will be so lit 👌👌 Keep in mind this is my opinion and your personal taste may be more refined or more trashy than mine 😜. But this, don't normally give 5-star reviews, but this, *Cheff kiss*.
bro this story is realy good but we need more chapters here plz....... I realy love this story plz update :'(
Love it on patron 😍 even tho it just started. Can't wait to see where it goes
It was good at first but I just felt like the romance became so dry and boring after a while. I’ve read a few romance novels and I was always binging them while smiling from ear to ear at the romance but in this book it was very hard for me to care at all after a while. At some point it just feels like the mc is one sidedly chasing after Chizuru while she makes no effort at all to reciprocate or makes up excuses as to why she doesn’t want to be with him.🤷♂️ I liked your writing style tho so that’s a plus.
Though people criticized it heavily, I still think it's good. To make a romantic relationship of Alpha Male through a realistic approach is not a easy task..
Bro your fan fiction is better than anime itself keep going 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍, and I like your main character, his business I just hope you don't stop this
just for killing kazuya you deserve 5 star the development so far is top notch I hope you keep up the good work