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A skyrim fanfic were the mc is an orc! That deserves a 2 stars review. Please drop this! ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I am a elder scrolls lore and game nut I have read every elder scrolls fanfic I can get my hands on and this is one of my top 5. Most elder scrolls fanfics either stick to closely to canon or stray so far that the mc meta knowledge becomes useless. this is one of 5 fanfics on elder scrolls that I can remember that does both very well. And please never make this a premium story. Keep up the fantastic work.
i love the story one of few good skyrim fics i read and i reccomend it.... just a question for author will mc harem sleep together without him like yuri???
Огидний та тупий головний герой виборов для цього фанфіка таку високу оцінку 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
to put it in a nutshell...it feels forced. The characters literally look like NPCs with ready-made dialogues, the communicative reactions also have many inconsistencies, I mean, understand that it's a medieval world, but people don't just nod their heads to everything they say to them.
3/1/1/3/5 After reading a bit and then letting it sit for chapters I finally came back to this. Had to delete my previous top review because it doesn't deserve a full 5 stars from me for quite a few reasons. There's yuri for one and werewolf mc for another. Can't recommend this to anyone with taste or who enjoys nirn and/or skyrim.
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Bruh it is a modded Skyrim you know it's going to be bloody awesome. also I found this picture which has nothing to do with this story just thought it was funny because of the talks about mods 😂.20/10 would recommend...... now time to go back to..... certain chapters.....😂
the overall story is good, world building is progressing along just fine if necessary and increasing as the story progresses as it's in Skyrim not much of that needed at first. nice transition over time from game to reality even if I might have wished for a more slap in the face approach. there are 2 additional passives that are especially annoying but they did not majorly Impact the story so far so it's all good. here and there are some small errors about different in story things but they can be easily ignored and nothing world breaking. the writing itself is good, far better than a lot of fanfiction I've read so far and only small typos Frome time to time... poor Maurice *salutes*major flaw tho, it's way too short. with the ongoing pace I could've easily enjoyed reading a few hundred chapter more and yet it's over after just a little bit of time. other than that, I can only recommend this story!
I've just now realized I forgot to make a review of this fantastic work, so now I will remend that mistake.I'm up to date with chapter 119 (128 on WN's list), and so far it's been a nice and enjoyable work to read, I like the characters developement and the world building around the MC and his people, knowing a little Skyrim lore makes you realize how much the fate of many people has changed for good thanks to the MC.The writing is decent and the plot goes through smoothly, from fights to romance, from bickering between friends to serious talks with authorities.The updates are frecuent, a lot compared to many works out there, although I would love to have more chapters, I understand the Author has their own life, I'm happy about the consistency.Speaking about the Author, Lemon-Sensei has been great interacting with the readers and overall a very likable person, he/her/they has even gifted us a chapter because I figured the origin of a piece of his Orcish tongue.Good read and excellent Author, I recommend.
I'm liking it so far, it's a unique start compared to similar skyrim novels I've seen. Honestly I've got no complaints, just keep up the quality and don't drop this author🙏
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A rather well written novel. I kinda dislike all the perv bait in the book, but it can be ignored. You can, and should, skip all the NSFW chapters. The book is definitely going down the Harem route. The MC does not care about preserving the original timeline at all which results in significant changes from the games timelines. Join our combat loving main character as he founds a faction to take over Skyrim. The characters are well written. True to the game but with twists. LOTS of modded characters. So you WILL meet characters which are brand new.
decent story with good arcs and good writing quality, but it is a pokemon harem, so I don't recommend it if, like me, you don't like pokemon harems
I had some hope when reading this but there are several things I didn't like, one of them is his group, I feel like he takes everyone by the hand, that's necessary in real life but it's very boring to read, I don't like the mc personality but maybe this is not my cup of tea.
I wanted to like this one, but the consistency of the plotting is weak and the MC is largely unlikable. Not to say he's completely unlikable, and he certainly has moments of awesome, but his characterization is subject to abrupt 180s whenever the author wants to farce some drama.
Love the story, done in a tastefu way that can and does lead to comedy. Very true to the game it is based off of and a good showing of the featured “mods” in it.
Play Skyrim, you will get better experience. That is all im gonna say. WORD COUNT WORD COUNT WORD COUNT WORD COUNT WORD COUNT WORD COUNT WORD COUNT.[img=faceslap]
im enjoying the quality the story and I definitely loved the games please keep writing I'll be waiting for more chapters to enjoy and immerse myself into
I'm definitely not leaving another review because I want this to get more views thereby encouraging the author to write more, so I can read more...no, this is definitely not my plan. Author should definitely not give up everything he believes in, lock himself in a room and focus solely on this novel, definitely not
A skyrim fanfic were the mc is an orc! That deserves a 5 stars review. Please don’t drop this!
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It has its own charm compared to the popular novel going around. I enjoy the fact that it's modded Skyrim so MC may not know or remember everything but knows a good amount of stuff like how he exploits his knowledge in the very beginning. I think it's interesting that the MC is also an Orc The dialogue could be better at times, maybe not even that but the formatting, it feels like there are too many blocks of text/paragraphs where as you you'll see frequent line breaks in other popular novels which make it more pleasant to the eyes Events seem to pass fairly quickly, I like that and it's great to get the plot moving though I hope we have slower points in the future. I haven't read extremely far since I like to let things build up but it has been on my mind to keep reading this. I deal very poorly with suspense and when I feel a novel is good, I want to let it build up more before I get. very invested into it. The release schedule is fairly spaced which I don't blame the author for, everyone needs their own inspiration and writes at a different space. I personally cannot imagine writing a novel so I'm not going to be unreasonable but getting to the point of a daily release schedule if possible, would be amazing. Again, I don't know what author has going on in his life and this could just be a minor hobby. I hope this novel overtakes the other Dragonborn one, I think you could really make this into something special that stays at the top of the "all-time" if you keep at it Praise the lemon square
You get five stars for makeing a skyrhim Fic and the fact its a harem im hella hyped now im Tempted to Do anouther playfthough just got a ram upgrade so i can probably get some bigger texture mods and ill need to figure out how to make the physics mod Work never could Get em to work if you know what i mean XD Im finna have 200 Mods lol Just wish some of the older mods were updated lol
i wana hate so I'll say it if your pla nningto read this then don't just mod your Skyrim and play it yourself it's literally the same thing
A skyrim fanfic were the mc is an orc! That deserves a 2 stars review. Please drop this! ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I am a elder scrolls lore and game nut I have read every elder scrolls fanfic I can get my hands on and this is one of my top 5. Most elder scrolls fanfics either stick to closely to canon or stray so far that the mc meta knowledge becomes useless. this is one of 5 fanfics on elder scrolls that I can remember that does both very well. And please never make this a premium story. Keep up the fantastic work.
i love the story one of few good skyrim fics i read and i reccomend it.... just a question for author will mc harem sleep together without him like yuri???
Огидний та тупий головний герой виборов для цього фанфіка таку високу оцінку 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
to put it in a nutshell...it feels forced. The characters literally look like NPCs with ready-made dialogues, the communicative reactions also have many inconsistencies, I mean, understand that it's a medieval world, but people don't just nod their heads to everything they say to them.
3/1/1/3/5 After reading a bit and then letting it sit for chapters I finally came back to this. Had to delete my previous top review because it doesn't deserve a full 5 stars from me for quite a few reasons. There's yuri for one and werewolf mc for another. Can't recommend this to anyone with taste or who enjoys nirn and/or skyrim.
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Bruh it is a modded Skyrim you know it's going to be bloody awesome. also I found this picture which has nothing to do with this story just thought it was funny because of the talks about mods 😂.20/10 would recommend...... now time to go back to..... certain chapters.....😂
the overall story is good, world building is progressing along just fine if necessary and increasing as the story progresses as it's in Skyrim not much of that needed at first. nice transition over time from game to reality even if I might have wished for a more slap in the face approach. there are 2 additional passives that are especially annoying but they did not majorly Impact the story so far so it's all good. here and there are some small errors about different in story things but they can be easily ignored and nothing world breaking. the writing itself is good, far better than a lot of fanfiction I've read so far and only small typos Frome time to time... poor Maurice *salutes*major flaw tho, it's way too short. with the ongoing pace I could've easily enjoyed reading a few hundred chapter more and yet it's over after just a little bit of time. other than that, I can only recommend this story!
I've just now realized I forgot to make a review of this fantastic work, so now I will remend that mistake.I'm up to date with chapter 119 (128 on WN's list), and so far it's been a nice and enjoyable work to read, I like the characters developement and the world building around the MC and his people, knowing a little Skyrim lore makes you realize how much the fate of many people has changed for good thanks to the MC.The writing is decent and the plot goes through smoothly, from fights to romance, from bickering between friends to serious talks with authorities.The updates are frecuent, a lot compared to many works out there, although I would love to have more chapters, I understand the Author has their own life, I'm happy about the consistency.Speaking about the Author, Lemon-Sensei has been great interacting with the readers and overall a very likable person, he/her/they has even gifted us a chapter because I figured the origin of a piece of his Orcish tongue.Good read and excellent Author, I recommend.
I'm liking it so far, it's a unique start compared to similar skyrim novels I've seen. Honestly I've got no complaints, just keep up the quality and don't drop this author🙏
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A rather well written novel. I kinda dislike all the perv bait in the book, but it can be ignored. You can, and should, skip all the NSFW chapters. The book is definitely going down the Harem route. The MC does not care about preserving the original timeline at all which results in significant changes from the games timelines. Join our combat loving main character as he founds a faction to take over Skyrim. The characters are well written. True to the game but with twists. LOTS of modded characters. So you WILL meet characters which are brand new.
decent story with good arcs and good writing quality, but it is a pokemon harem, so I don't recommend it if, like me, you don't like pokemon harems
I had some hope when reading this but there are several things I didn't like, one of them is his group, I feel like he takes everyone by the hand, that's necessary in real life but it's very boring to read, I don't like the mc personality but maybe this is not my cup of tea.
I wanted to like this one, but the consistency of the plotting is weak and the MC is largely unlikable. Not to say he's completely unlikable, and he certainly has moments of awesome, but his characterization is subject to abrupt 180s whenever the author wants to farce some drama.
Love the story, done in a tastefu way that can and does lead to comedy. Very true to the game it is based off of and a good showing of the featured “mods” in it.
Play Skyrim, you will get better experience. That is all im gonna say. WORD COUNT WORD COUNT WORD COUNT WORD COUNT WORD COUNT WORD COUNT WORD COUNT.[img=faceslap]
im enjoying the quality the story and I definitely loved the games please keep writing I'll be waiting for more chapters to enjoy and immerse myself into
I'm definitely not leaving another review because I want this to get more views thereby encouraging the author to write more, so I can read more...no, this is definitely not my plan. Author should definitely not give up everything he believes in, lock himself in a room and focus solely on this novel, definitely not
A skyrim fanfic were the mc is an orc! That deserves a 5 stars review. Please don’t drop this!
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
It has its own charm compared to the popular novel going around. I enjoy the fact that it's modded Skyrim so MC may not know or remember everything but knows a good amount of stuff like how he exploits his knowledge in the very beginning. I think it's interesting that the MC is also an Orc The dialogue could be better at times, maybe not even that but the formatting, it feels like there are too many blocks of text/paragraphs where as you you'll see frequent line breaks in other popular novels which make it more pleasant to the eyes Events seem to pass fairly quickly, I like that and it's great to get the plot moving though I hope we have slower points in the future. I haven't read extremely far since I like to let things build up but it has been on my mind to keep reading this. I deal very poorly with suspense and when I feel a novel is good, I want to let it build up more before I get. very invested into it. The release schedule is fairly spaced which I don't blame the author for, everyone needs their own inspiration and writes at a different space. I personally cannot imagine writing a novel so I'm not going to be unreasonable but getting to the point of a daily release schedule if possible, would be amazing. Again, I don't know what author has going on in his life and this could just be a minor hobby. I hope this novel overtakes the other Dragonborn one, I think you could really make this into something special that stays at the top of the "all-time" if you keep at it Praise the lemon square
You get five stars for makeing a skyrhim Fic and the fact its a harem im hella hyped now im Tempted to Do anouther playfthough just got a ram upgrade so i can probably get some bigger texture mods and ill need to figure out how to make the physics mod Work never could Get em to work if you know what i mean XD Im finna have 200 Mods lol Just wish some of the older mods were updated lol
i wana hate so I'll say it if your pla nningto read this then don't just mod your Skyrim and play it yourself it's literally the same thing