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Into The Omniverse!

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Author: Space_Time

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Zach was a simple person, and had never had any sort of grand ambition or goal for his life. He was a simple 9-5 burger flipper for a local McDonalds, and had planned to go on a date with his crush.

However, his plan this time WASN'T to meet his demise at the "hands" of Truck-Kun! Neither was meeting a mysterious individual in a strange place, getting superpowers from fiction, and traversing the Omni-verse, but it'll work itself out!

Follow Zach on his adventure across the Omni-verse and get's stupidly overpowered! But that's the point of this, isn't it?

Tags (Planned) : Transmigrated to Another World | Romance | World-Hopping | No Yuri | Weak to Strong (Starts out relatively Op, though) | System | Semi-Dark | Relationships | AU Worlds | Wish-Fulfillment | Slight OOC Characters | OCs |
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Worlds :
One Punch Man (Chapters 1-??)
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Please give any suggestions on how to improve my writing! Give any suggestions with how the story should go or develop, along with any bad parts I write, as well! This is a(n) (attempted) rewrite, so please tread lightly!

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[ Zach was a simple person, and had never had any sort of grand ambition or goal for his life. He was a simple 9-5 burger flipper for a local McDonalds, though he was weeb and often read manga online. He attended a monthly anime convention that included his favorite anime, One Punch Man.] This was far more interesting than everything you had written in your story, because it actually seemed you had an idea of what you wanted to write, but you wasted time on other things like a system, meeting, god, status updates. We don't get information enough information about him. It would have been a good read, but the execution was wasted on things that feel like a [ I will drop this story in the future, because I don't really care.] type of fanfiction.

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Space_Time

Can't say It'll be the best fanfiction out there. Can't say it'll even be the most original But, what I can say is that I WILL finish this story! There WILL be a finale! Honestly, this is gonna be a long ride, with me being a total slob at writing. But, I'll try at the very least. I don't think many will actually read the book, but for those who do, I hope you enjoy it. To be honest, I'll accept any criticism as long as it helps me to improve, even the most negative of reviews. Anyways, there definitely won't be stable updates, but there will be updates none the less. Have a great day to all of you readers, and I'll be hyper-gating out!

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OPMFan

Seriously needs to get better. Maybe add something about his life which you mentioned in the abstract or something so that the abstract actually makes sense? I don't know, just make it better.

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AvidAnimeFanXD

Eh. Doesn't update well, not many chapters, not very well-thought-out dialogue. The author definitely needs to work on their writing skills.

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