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Definitely one of the best 40 K fan fix I have ever read. The story is great and compelling, and everything comes together in the end. Just ignore the epilogue and this fanfic is perfect.
hello, i'm looking for warhammer fanfic and this caught my eye, but i saw the update it's long so i'm still on the fence to read it, what's your update time range?
I started reading this fanfic with no knowledge on Warhammer 40k lore, and now im hooked on Warhammer 40k.
This feels like a very rough outline for a story. I feel like I'm reading bullet points for what's supposed to be happening instead of an actual story.
Without a doubt a good novel, quite entertaining The plot moves quickly but coherently and is very entertaining. The biggest fault that can be attributed to this work is that in my opinion it is too rushed and the same story could have been told better with about 50 more chapters. Having said that and in summary, it is a good novel and I recommend it.
I enjoyed reading this story far more than I expected to, I hope this story will continue to receive updates and that I will read more stories made by this Author when I have the time.
why bother transmid person when u strip his humanity why not wrote about a space marine guy that somehow come to fantasy world in the first place so he act like one without care why bother let a human from earth come a change him like that
I'M BACK AFTER YEARS OF NOT READING THIS DUE TO REASON BEING SHOWING THE POSSIBLE FINALE AND WRITING, AND I DON'T KNOW WHYYY..... MOSTLY ON I DON'T KNOW WHY PARTBUT THR GOOD THING IS I'M BACCCLLKL
as gamer and fan of 40k lorecraft. this peek my interest but im wise enough to check the comment section and read some fellow 40k fanatic negative review. it save me time i trust my kin. -The Emperor guide my blade
You have a pretty good idea for a fanfic, but the problem that you have is the way you execute it. He is given a body of an Astartes, one of greatest prides of the Emperor, and yet he acts... cowardly... are you perhaps touched chaos?
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Masterpiece The update though painfully slow, :( Well qyality over quantity and all that jazz
The biggest problem is the story development because everything is extremely predictable. Every battle is like oh I have a complete advantage against my foes bam forces of chaos.
I am sorry but as a gamer and warhammer fan this is absolutely horrible to read. The MC is experienced gamer and warhammer fan. He is in the body of friking SPACE MARINE ... absolute killing machine and he uses limited resources on goblins. They cant hurt him in any way possible but he just decide to use grenade to kill few of them ... not a big group or anything ... just few of them because reasons... in short this should not be read by anyone who is fan of warhammer at all with absolutely basic knowledge of lore and/or basic common sense.
I don't care about the update stability, the author is very dedicated to the book and I love everything I have read so far. This is just one of the books everyone should try as it has a nice balance. The start seems generic but as you read more and more it becomes better and you just can't stop reading... So give it try
i read some other 40k fan fic with this and i had to place this on a back burner because the other book pooled me morr, but when i returned to this, it is surely a book i would read more of.
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.mmmmmmmmmmmm..m.m...m.m..mmmm......mmmmmmmmmmm..........mmmmmmmmmm,.,.,,,, hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I like it. But it seem only one new chapter once a week I wish at the very least 3 or 4 once a week __________________________________________________________________________
Ok... the first thing to say, is this novel is really, really, really a hidden gem on this page. Rarely will you come across a 40K fanfic that is well done, especially one like this. I really wonder how much it will develop, and when the MC will return to the 41st Millenium, but I can say, it is a very good story. Romance is very slow, but on the contrary, it is realistically done and nothing is rushed or anything. The plot takes a place in a fantasy world that is inspired probably by Warhammer Fantasy and DnD and is giving the entire story a nice feeling. I would recommend this for every 40K fan out there to give it a try.
Good fic but HORRIBLE grammar seriusçy the author wrote more than 100 chapters but he continues to make the most STUPID mistakes............
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I love this book I'm just leaving this here to support I also really hope that this book will be completed and thank you for your work😀😃😄😁😆😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😀😀😀😃😃😃😄😄😄😁😁😁😍😃😃😃😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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It starts well but ends up getting weird. the Astartes are somehow stolen from her as very weak and stupid. They die here as easily as normal people. also sisters of battle are strong but not to be compared with Astartes so that 100 of them take on over 50 Astartes of an old traitor legion of which 5 also wear Terminator armor is just a bad joke just like that a simple sword the visor of a Terminator armor pierces.
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so far, so good, good idea (idk how to make a review) so anyway does anyone know a warhammer fanfic? ---------------------------------------------------------------
Loving the story so far, is it possible for a main character to travel to Skyrim, world ofWarcraft, star craft and Diablo to stop chaos corruption on these universities.
I don't understand the want to get back to this reality, like who loves their parents after they've moved out and has a life they enjoy that much more than having actual powers and the body of a being beyond olympians?
Definitely one of the best 40 K fan fix I have ever read. The story is great and compelling, and everything comes together in the end. Just ignore the epilogue and this fanfic is perfect.
hello, i'm looking for warhammer fanfic and this caught my eye, but i saw the update it's long so i'm still on the fence to read it, what's your update time range?
I started reading this fanfic with no knowledge on Warhammer 40k lore, and now im hooked on Warhammer 40k.
This feels like a very rough outline for a story. I feel like I'm reading bullet points for what's supposed to be happening instead of an actual story.
Without a doubt a good novel, quite entertaining The plot moves quickly but coherently and is very entertaining. The biggest fault that can be attributed to this work is that in my opinion it is too rushed and the same story could have been told better with about 50 more chapters. Having said that and in summary, it is a good novel and I recommend it.
I enjoyed reading this story far more than I expected to, I hope this story will continue to receive updates and that I will read more stories made by this Author when I have the time.
why bother transmid person when u strip his humanity why not wrote about a space marine guy that somehow come to fantasy world in the first place so he act like one without care why bother let a human from earth come a change him like that
I'M BACK AFTER YEARS OF NOT READING THIS DUE TO REASON BEING SHOWING THE POSSIBLE FINALE AND WRITING, AND I DON'T KNOW WHYYY..... MOSTLY ON I DON'T KNOW WHY PARTBUT THR GOOD THING IS I'M BACCCLLKL
as gamer and fan of 40k lorecraft. this peek my interest but im wise enough to check the comment section and read some fellow 40k fanatic negative review. it save me time i trust my kin. -The Emperor guide my blade
You have a pretty good idea for a fanfic, but the problem that you have is the way you execute it. He is given a body of an Astartes, one of greatest prides of the Emperor, and yet he acts... cowardly... are you perhaps touched chaos?
Reveal Spoiler Masterpiece The update though painfully slow, :( Well qyality over quantity and all that jazz
The biggest problem is the story development because everything is extremely predictable. Every battle is like oh I have a complete advantage against my foes bam forces of chaos.
I am sorry but as a gamer and warhammer fan this is absolutely horrible to read. The MC is experienced gamer and warhammer fan. He is in the body of friking SPACE MARINE ... absolute killing machine and he uses limited resources on goblins. They cant hurt him in any way possible but he just decide to use grenade to kill few of them ... not a big group or anything ... just few of them because reasons... in short this should not be read by anyone who is fan of warhammer at all with absolutely basic knowledge of lore and/or basic common sense.
I don't care about the update stability, the author is very dedicated to the book and I love everything I have read so far. This is just one of the books everyone should try as it has a nice balance. The start seems generic but as you read more and more it becomes better and you just can't stop reading... So give it try
i read some other 40k fan fic with this and i had to place this on a back burner because the other book pooled me morr, but when i returned to this, it is surely a book i would read more of.
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.mmmmmmmmmmmm..m.m...m.m..mmmm......mmmmmmmmmmm..........mmmmmmmmmm,.,.,,,, hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I like it. But it seem only one new chapter once a week I wish at the very least 3 or 4 once a week __________________________________________________________________________
Ok... the first thing to say, is this novel is really, really, really a hidden gem on this page. Rarely will you come across a 40K fanfic that is well done, especially one like this. I really wonder how much it will develop, and when the MC will return to the 41st Millenium, but I can say, it is a very good story. Romance is very slow, but on the contrary, it is realistically done and nothing is rushed or anything. The plot takes a place in a fantasy world that is inspired probably by Warhammer Fantasy and DnD and is giving the entire story a nice feeling. I would recommend this for every 40K fan out there to give it a try.
Good fic but HORRIBLE grammar seriusçy the author wrote more than 100 chapters but he continues to make the most STUPID mistakes............
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I love this book I'm just leaving this here to support I also really hope that this book will be completed and thank you for your work😀😃😄😁😆😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😀😀😀😃😃😃😄😄😄😁😁😁😍😃😃😃😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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It starts well but ends up getting weird. the Astartes are somehow stolen from her as very weak and stupid. They die here as easily as normal people. also sisters of battle are strong but not to be compared with Astartes so that 100 of them take on over 50 Astartes of an old traitor legion of which 5 also wear Terminator armor is just a bad joke just like that a simple sword the visor of a Terminator armor pierces.
Reveal Spoiler so far, so good, good idea (idk how to make a review) so anyway does anyone know a warhammer fanfic? ---------------------------------------------------------------
Loving the story so far, is it possible for a main character to travel to Skyrim, world ofWarcraft, star craft and Diablo to stop chaos corruption on these universities.
I don't understand the want to get back to this reality, like who loves their parents after they've moved out and has a life they enjoy that much more than having actual powers and the body of a being beyond olympians?