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Harry Potter dos meses antes de entrar a hogwarts recibe un regalo algo extraño de un ser cósmico aburrido, ¿qué le deparará a nuestro intrépido amigo en esta aventura? descubra lo mientras leen.
PD: Es mi primer historia así que no esperen algo del otro mundo.
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Good story, there are several problems, but with an editor and possibly a co-writer to make it longer and slower, and make the story more interesting. Continue to the end and possibly later you can cooperate with someone else to do a rewrite.
yes the development of the story is interesting so far, just don't make Harry a toy creature that is stronger than him. if possible, still make Harry independent from the various factions that exist.
El sistema los demonios Dios Ángeles magia genial sigue escribiendo y si puedes pide ayuda a un editor será mejor que mejor [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=coins]