Multiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial Tower

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droopyauthor

Updated Review: Writing Quality: 5 Stars (I have always been a fanatic about writing quality. The least I can say confidently that you will never find language skill lacking in any manner. And I am making improvements by day. Stability of Updates: 2 Stars (I was consistent at first, for like first 400 chapters. But then I couldn't maintain the same rate, regardless the excuses. Anyway, one chapter daily for a few months at least from now on.) Story Development: 3 Stars (The start of the story feels generic, even to me. But it develops beautifully. Also, I have taken great challenges to keep the fanfic as close to as an Original Novel, including new ideas. It may not to be preference of all, but its good as long as you give it a chance.) Character Design: 3 Stars (Kai Stormborn is a highly complex character. Circumstances had forced him to become someone he had never even thought of becoming. Mentioning anything about him will be a spoiler, so I am leaving it here.) World Background: 4 Stars (I like researching, and love to imagine how one world's characters and concepts would interact with others. Needless to say, all included worlds and background setting had been thoroughly researched and presented with better clearance for the readers. You won't find anything lacking here.) At the end, I would request you guys to give my Original Novel a look too. It's a comedic take on Harem, Villain, and Romance tags. Try a few chapters and see if it suits your taste. Good luck droopyauthor

LV 11

droopyauthor

Review after Vol. 1 Q. What readers can expect from the novel? A. If you have read Terror Infinity and the Ultimate Evolution, then you would also like this novel. MC will travel through Multiverse (books, anime, and movies World) in Mission-like scenarios. Every next mission will be more difficult and will need more time (i.e. chapters) to be completed. From Vol. 3, MC will have the option to reincarnate as books/anime characters. The story is Dark, and it has Mystery elements. So if you don't like these things, please refrain from giving out an early review. If you are looking for romance, then it will be there from Vol.2 onwards. I needed to give a thorough description of how the System works, and thr upcoming Worlds, and the time limit of first mission was small. The rest can be some up in few words - Action, adventure, cool items and skills, and cooler interaction. Q. What do I mean from the warning in synopsis? A. I mean what it is. If you can't put efforts to understand the plot, and want to read something like a children book, then don't bother to read. As far as I am concerned, there are no plot holes, and if you find one, then you can comment and let me know. Q. Which worlds to expect? A. Vol. 1 has Harry Potter canon world, related to Beedle the Bard. Vol. 2 will have both Harry Potter and Game of Thrones (from actual series and books, not canon). Vol. 3 will have animes and Harry Potter but I have not decided yet. PS: Don't ask me abt Harem. MC will have love interests depending on the world, but I have not finalized it yet.

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lordharry

Review @chapter 157 I will first say what i didn't like. Constant fighting and interaction in the first 45 chapters. BUT... it wasn't boring. It all happened in 2days within novel, so i can ignore tht. The main thing is I got to know MC better. Now let's talk about what I liked. Everything. once i crossed that first 50 chapters, i couldn't find a single thing to complain. Author has very good writing skills and it don't take brains to realise tht. Progression is good so far and MC is not some jesus... i hate those novels where they are just all good and keep getting powers without any real goals and issues. So yes... I am reading this. Waiting for Vol 3 honestly. but take your time author. i can see hundreds of chapters of harry potter ahead. - avada boom

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Zader

Normally don't do reviews but here goes. This story's World building and Characters are unbelievably well done. If your a Infinity genre fan you'll love this. Now for the bad/not so great. The MC... He is one of those that you HATE but NOT because he isn't done well or something it's the complete opposite actually, but it's his choices that are TOTALLY in line with their character and are actually realistic. But still make me personally despise the MC and all that he is, while again STILL enjoying the story greatly. Now I just enjoy it MORE when the MC suffers because of his choices haha. Really give it a try and as long as your at least parcel semi decent person you'll understand what I mean. It's one of those you'd have to read to understand what I talking about. Keep up the good work Author. 👍😁

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Wolfboy123r

take ultimate evolution only a hundred times better i can literally see the fight scenes in my head what else to say this is just to good to be here in webnovel

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pmoh9

I generally don't write much reviews on Webnovel, but this is, hands down, one of the best works I've ever read. The world building feels so good at times that you may forget it's supposed to be a fanfic rather than an original novel. Also, the writing quality is really good, which I think is a disadvantage on this site as most can't seem to grasp the author's "sophisticated" way of writing. Final conclusion: 10/10 would recommend

LV 5

parsaj

This is one of the best works I have read on this site. There isn't much to complain about here, mostly subjective and personal preferences which have no bearing on the objective quality of the novel. Firstly, grammar, work structure, paragraph placing, and writing quality itself is one of the best on this site and as a whole there are a few typos scattered around a hundred chapters, which is basically nothing. I haven't followed this fanfic from the start, but from what I can see, there are 360 chapters in 8 months, which is a pretty solid update ratio, especially considering the chapters' quality. Story development is original and unexpected. There are some twists there that aren't predictable. The protagonist has interesting abilities, and although very powerful, it isn't to an unreasonable extent and he doesn't steamroll everything he comes across. The start of it however is a little slow, and it takes a while to get into the meat of the story, but pretty solid nonetheless. Every character has their unique personality traits and quirks. The main character is a cold and power hungry individual, my personal favorite. Although his very logical and benefit-oriented view on his relationships with every character is looking to make a very lonely existence out of him at the peak of power he is seeking. However, I think the author has something planned for this, as well. World background is extremely unique, which is unexpected, considering most of the story happens in previously established fiction. The author manages to give these fictions an original flavor. All in all, I would highly recommend this novel to anyone who is a fan of works such as Reverend Insanity, Warlock of the Magus world, and Ultimate Evolution. Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 4.5/5 Character Design 5/5 World Background 5/5

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Rak

Terror Infinity with crazy mc with brains of reverend insanity one of the best original novels i have read ever. It can no longer be called a fanfic for me. After some editing, author should be able to publish it.

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Zero_69

This one is a gem! The writing quality is top-notch. The characters don't act out of their character ( like many characters in other novels). The MC has a troubled past so his personality isn't that of a 'good guy', which is understandable, and I like this kind of development. I just hope that his trust issues would be resolved in the future. Poor MC doesn't even have a living family.

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SPECTRALE

this is I think my first 5 stars from when this website started a few years, the first few chapters are a pain to read, but once you go past chapter 5 the story starts picking up and only gets better, I even once thought of paying p@treon and I swore never to pay it. in summary just up and I highly recommend

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Sorcein

I'll say what I don't like about this novel, and in stories like the Terror Infinity genre itself, it's the power system, in this story for me someone can turn off the system at any time and the MC becomes the common mortal. For example, we all know that in Harry Potter wizards can cast all kinds of magic at any time until they get tired, but what if the MC learns a spell? He can only use it in a specific situation, a limited number of times, with a long cooldown, most of the powers are not his, you don't see him studying magic, creating spells, doing rituals and etc, why not, the system takes the original skill, weakens and limits the use and amount of times used, the MC knows how to use the spell but does not know how to use the magic itself. Honestly, I've never read novels of this genre until the end, and I don't know if the MCs even pass their own powers without these cooldowns and numbers of uses per day, I'm almost sure that these limitations are on purpose, but I never manage to read until the end. I read this fanfic until the beginning of the Harry Potter arc, but I stopped because of this personal taste, but it is a very good fanfic and I highly recommend it so that this problem does not arise. (Google Translate)

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ShLight

this is awesome but please give me the reader role in discord dang it i already finished the Vol 2 like a week ago (my name is Deimos in discord btw)

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MrIIIo

i really dont know what i have to say but this book is amazing, i regret scrolling past this but on the other side i got to have more chapters cus of that. the world building is amazing with the tower having so many secrets and every world the mc visits just goes completely different from canon. updates are daily and the quality of the chapters is amazing both grammar and the writing style. the characters are portrayed very well, both oc's and canon characters making it a lot more immersive. overall this is probably one of if not the best book on this app

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KALIISTHEBEST

It’s a good fanfic the world is well designed and detailed and the various worlds are blended together masterfully the characters are well portrayed as well it’s an enjoyable read that I would recommend to anyone the only thing I have to complain about is the somewhat unenjoyable start as I found the first few chapters to be a bit of a slog to get through but still good nonetheless

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as123

Well, I would like to say that the story is very good and I recommend reading it, but I would like to know how the pokemon part happens (pokemon is my weak point and I would not like to see a half/psycho there) even the author saying that the protagonist it's not a killing machine, at least for now is, after all, it's been a few days since I've read but some of his first thoughts there is, (why he couldn't release the power of the dementor and kill all around and take the souls , something like that ) in another series/anime I don't care, but pokemon...

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Morororo

I used to watch harry potter when I was a kid, it made me nostalgic as well, and thanks to your novel I rewatch it. The character introduction was great, the story as well, good grammar, and more. Keep writing author! Bless you!😁

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WurstistLeben

Started reading this Story knowing it got dropped but still one of the best i read in a long time. Hoping you pick it up again sometime in the future

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IsekaiMan1

the story is set out really well but from what I've read his strength increases to slow its system just seems overcomplicated making it tiring to read and this could've been an original bcs I don't see a point of using the fictional worlds with the way this is written

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Cartheon

Honestly I've never been much of a fan of multi-verse stories. Mostly because they seem to just be lazy self-inserts with ridiculously OP main characters. I honestly was just going to skip over this story due to this bias but I'm happy I didn't. Well done author-san! This story is way too high quality for webnovel and I'm honestly shocked that I found it here. [img=recommend] I don't really have much more to say honestly your level of writing is far above mine so I can't really find any criticisms. If there would be a criticism it's that I'm sad I almost went right past this novel without trying it. Maybe try a new synopsis? I feel like the one that you have is a little short and doesn't really capture what makes this story such a thrilling ride! Anyways ilu thanks for writing this! :)