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Luke Pendragon, one of the two princes of England gets called to Hogwarts. (same year as the original protagonists)
//This history will focus more on The OC than on the original main characters, there will be romance but not in the beginning, it will NOT be an harem, but other than that this story is more like an what if the Noblest family of the muggles enter the world of the wizards, with all the bigotry and all, i expect to release at least 1 chapter a day, but cant promise anything since its my first time writing, english is not my first language so do help me with gramatical errors. I do like constructive criticism and would like new ideas as well.
Also i don't own the Harry Potter franchise J.K.R does~//
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Over all I would consider this the best Harry Potter fanfic on web novel although it's a bit early in the story to be completely sure it's put together extremely well the MC is strong but not op and the way the MC sees the world is very clearly defined and though out over all I quite enjoy this and recomend you read it.
Good novel. It's good to make new character MC rather than an available one like other fanfic. Hope you will not drop this and have stable release. Thank you
An interesting story. I like the original MC. He has a different backstory and ancestry than expected in HP fanfics that leaves a lot of possibilities to be explored. The grammar does leave a lot to be desired, but it is readable and doesn't detract from the story overly much.
Overall it is a pretty good novel. The only reason I have it at 3.8 stars is because of it's limited chapters. Grammar is incredible considering it's from a site like this. At least one chapter a day. Would highly recommend reading this.
The story is really good and original. I just hope that you give Luke's personality justice, and focus on making the world and story truly yours.
It is a very good start on something that can become a great story. Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Still too short to make a detailed review but looks really promissing ..........................................................................................................................................................................
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I really like this story for it was interesting and good to read... I hope his twin brother stop for being a jerk and rude towards him... He didn't even do anything just only making himself finds something that can make him interesting and amused...
The big question I have is why the royal family has zero protection? Have you ever seen the queen traveling without a huge escort? And they must say prince to him and not just first name. fstupid word thingyasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdasdddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddasd
Amazing book!!! I really liked it. Its different than your average Harry Potter fanfic. Great writing! I hope the author will continue this series.
The fanfic was good and original and awsome its not the usual fanfic about some cliche stuffsssss...... Ps:Still waiting for the New.chapeters.T.H.A.n.K.s
Hell yea finaly something new!! NEW approach, NEW faculty and NEW protagonist with some promissing background story. I like you didn t use : reincartnated into harry potter but get a new guy :) Okay brother i like this very much. I can promise you 3 stones for every chaptor you sent my way :D I gave you 5 stars in every department except the stability of updates, i gave 3 stars. I mean thats where every popular author can improve the most !
Another one bites the dust.*sigh* It was an interesting fanfic though....... ..........................................................................................
It was intersting at first but I get bored when I got to hogwarts. It seems I'm watching the movie... sorry but I was really expecting a more original story not just copying from the original. Plus.... There are many words that are mispelled.
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I like Harry Potter series hence I love this book more feeling much fun on learning few things which I usually do but it's great to be a writer and to be much knowledgeable to entertain the readers and make them feel it's realistic
Very nice writing but it has a slow but consistent release. I'm hoping there us no dropping of the novel😭😭. The author has a very fluid writing style and the story does not have a lot of faults with the story not really focusing on the main plot which is good.
The story is good or rather the story being convey, but the way its told is more like listening to someone telling you a story that to actually read and feel being with the situation and emotion within the story. The way its written is like passing a moment not living in it you can't imagine it properly with the fast pace the story goes, . . The story is good but not for the bookworm it's only for casual reader , . .
I just want to say this you do know that calling someone mud blood is extremely offensive and racist in the Wizarding community it’s like dropping the n bomb I’m not sure it’s a good title