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Author be honest, you will by any chance give up this novel, if your answer is No I thank you. I liked this novel, please don't give up on it.
this story is so frucking good 10/10 there are small spelling mistakes but thats ignorable the idea around it is amazing and i love it please dont drop this i see you havent posted in 17 days im begging you to continue this
The character and plot seem needlessly complicated Like how he creates an elaborate plan to expose edward when he could have just told dumbledore or one of the other teachers and it just struck me as really stupid
it's very good story. One of the very few Harry Potter fics which follows completely different path. Also it's very good to see MC that has nothing to do with Harry's life and makes actual friends and has his own problems and adventure.
Truly have enjoyed reading this book its quite interesting and intriguing that it catches ur attention especially with who the OC/MC grandfather is that followed the path of darkness so to speak that Nicolas Flamel said and then mysterious organizations and "them" that Dumbledore and Snape were talking about the Wand that was made by Ollivander their family heirloom especially with how unique and powerful that it is that not even Voldemort was able to take control of the Wand and then the demon creature along with the voice inside Liam's head look forward to reading more of this cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
I love hp FF so here's the longest name 😂😂(to random 😂😂) Zeus Wolfeschlegelsteinhausenbergerdorffwelchevoralternwarengewissenhaftschaferswessenschafewarenwohlgepflegeundsorgfaltigkeitbeschutzenvonangreifendurchihrraubgierigfeindewelchevoralternzwolftausendjahresvorandieerscheinenvanderersteerdemenschderraumschiffgebrauchlichtalsseinursprungvonkraftgestartseinlangefahrthinzwischensternartigraumaufdersuchenachdiesternwelchegehabtbewohnbarplanetenkreisedrehensichundwohinderneurassevonverstandigmenschlichkeitkonntefortpflanzenundsicherfreuenanlebenslanglichfreudeundruhemitnichteinfurchtvorangreifenvonandererintelligentgeschopfsvonhinzwischensternartigraum
The MC acts... average. It's like he's not a reincarnator but an OC. I get that the author wants to make him "human" meaning with flaws, but the way he's doing it is so bad. Don't get me wrong I like the plot but the dialogues, conversations, feels so programmed. It's okay tho since the author said that he's new. I just probably expected too much after reading "HP: A Magical Journey".
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1)Качество письма - 5. 2)Обновление стабильности - 5. 3)Развитие сюжета - 4. 4)Дизайн персонажа - 2 5)фон мира - 3. 6)Общая оценка - 4. 1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3. 4) Character design - 2 5) background of the world - 3. 6) Overall rating - 4.
1)Качество письма - 5. 2)Обновление стабильности - 5. 3)Развитие сюжета - 4. 4)Дизайн персонажа - 3. 5)фон мира - 4. 6)Общая оценка - 4. 1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 4. 4) Character design - 3. 5) background of the world - 4. 6) Overall rating - 4.
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Мне очень понравилось произведение хоть и читаю с авто переводчиком , от человека из снг одобряю;3 надеюсь автор будет выпускать побольше глав
could have been a great story. but the author has mistaken a single paragraph for a chapter leaving the word count and story development rather low
In my OPINION the author tried to make the MC pure/dense but if you read carefully it looks like the MC has lowest iq possible . *SPOILERS AHEAD* The MC was a University student and has read Harry Potter even if he doesn't have dislike or bad of opinion of characters like dumbledore or snape he can atleast be cautious. Otherwise its an okay story and you can read it.
although it's not the one of the best Harry Potter Fanfics I've read but it had that potential. the main thing I don't like is that sometimes it feels like MC is not a reincarnated guy[img=faceslap]
All the other authors on this platform are shameless. They review their own novel with 5 stars. But i am not shameless. Still I am also reviewing my novel But not because I am shameless.
Good start to the story, seems to be close enough to the original for Harry Potter fans but a new and interesting story to keep it fresh and interesting. I look forward to seeing where this novel goes and I hope you see it through to the end.
This is a great quality story with a interesting and different build to most others I’ve read the author does a great job and coming up with new twists ive never seen while sticking to the Harry Potter theme would recommend
Pretty good in my top 3 hp ff implys a own unique backstoy that sounds interesting the writing quality and update stability is above average und the story has big potential
The Content is quite good and interesting.. There is a bit of suspense as well , I wish the update frequency was quicker............................................ .......................................... ..................................
more chapters plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plzplzplzplzpl, plz plz itss sooo goooodddd need moooreeeeeeeeeeee
I really like this so far and cant wait to see what happens down the line but ple dont have him and Hermione get together 😂 and i like the Little but of A serious tone you have a little more would hurt though at least for me but other than that i love it and hope you can post more often
No clue why this story isn't popular but i think it's because slow chapter release but i still like the story and how the main character was born.
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Liam shouted, " Magic is magnificent!!, Magic is mysterious!!, Magic is miracle!!". I cringed: " Grammar is terrible!!, Story is terrible!!, Author is terrible!!". Sorry I had to copy the terrible punctuation too! :(
Author be honest, you will by any chance give up this novel, if your answer is No I thank you. I liked this novel, please don't give up on it.
this story is so frucking good 10/10 there are small spelling mistakes but thats ignorable the idea around it is amazing and i love it please dont drop this i see you havent posted in 17 days im begging you to continue this
The character and plot seem needlessly complicated Like how he creates an elaborate plan to expose edward when he could have just told dumbledore or one of the other teachers and it just struck me as really stupid
it's very good story. One of the very few Harry Potter fics which follows completely different path. Also it's very good to see MC that has nothing to do with Harry's life and makes actual friends and has his own problems and adventure.
Truly have enjoyed reading this book its quite interesting and intriguing that it catches ur attention especially with who the OC/MC grandfather is that followed the path of darkness so to speak that Nicolas Flamel said and then mysterious organizations and "them" that Dumbledore and Snape were talking about the Wand that was made by Ollivander their family heirloom especially with how unique and powerful that it is that not even Voldemort was able to take control of the Wand and then the demon creature along with the voice inside Liam's head look forward to reading more of this cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
I love hp FF so here's the longest name 😂😂(to random 😂😂) Zeus Wolfeschlegelsteinhausenbergerdorffwelchevoralternwarengewissenhaftschaferswessenschafewarenwohlgepflegeundsorgfaltigkeitbeschutzenvonangreifendurchihrraubgierigfeindewelchevoralternzwolftausendjahresvorandieerscheinenvanderersteerdemenschderraumschiffgebrauchlichtalsseinursprungvonkraftgestartseinlangefahrthinzwischensternartigraumaufdersuchenachdiesternwelchegehabtbewohnbarplanetenkreisedrehensichundwohinderneurassevonverstandigmenschlichkeitkonntefortpflanzenundsicherfreuenanlebenslanglichfreudeundruhemitnichteinfurchtvorangreifenvonandererintelligentgeschopfsvonhinzwischensternartigraum
The MC acts... average. It's like he's not a reincarnator but an OC. I get that the author wants to make him "human" meaning with flaws, but the way he's doing it is so bad. Don't get me wrong I like the plot but the dialogues, conversations, feels so programmed. It's okay tho since the author said that he's new. I just probably expected too much after reading "HP: A Magical Journey".
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1)Качество письма - 5. 2)Обновление стабильности - 5. 3)Развитие сюжета - 4. 4)Дизайн персонажа - 2 5)фон мира - 3. 6)Общая оценка - 4. 1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3. 4) Character design - 2 5) background of the world - 3. 6) Overall rating - 4.
1)Качество письма - 5. 2)Обновление стабильности - 5. 3)Развитие сюжета - 4. 4)Дизайн персонажа - 3. 5)фон мира - 4. 6)Общая оценка - 4. 1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 4. 4) Character design - 3. 5) background of the world - 4. 6) Overall rating - 4.
Reveal Spoiler Мне очень понравилось произведение хоть и читаю с авто переводчиком , от человека из снг одобряю;3 надеюсь автор будет выпускать побольше глав
could have been a great story. but the author has mistaken a single paragraph for a chapter leaving the word count and story development rather low
In my OPINION the author tried to make the MC pure/dense but if you read carefully it looks like the MC has lowest iq possible . *SPOILERS AHEAD* The MC was a University student and has read Harry Potter even if he doesn't have dislike or bad of opinion of characters like dumbledore or snape he can atleast be cautious. Otherwise its an okay story and you can read it.
although it's not the one of the best Harry Potter Fanfics I've read but it had that potential. the main thing I don't like is that sometimes it feels like MC is not a reincarnated guy[img=faceslap]
All the other authors on this platform are shameless. They review their own novel with 5 stars. But i am not shameless. Still I am also reviewing my novel But not because I am shameless.
Good start to the story, seems to be close enough to the original for Harry Potter fans but a new and interesting story to keep it fresh and interesting. I look forward to seeing where this novel goes and I hope you see it through to the end.
This is a great quality story with a interesting and different build to most others I’ve read the author does a great job and coming up with new twists ive never seen while sticking to the Harry Potter theme would recommend
Pretty good in my top 3 hp ff implys a own unique backstoy that sounds interesting the writing quality and update stability is above average und the story has big potential
The Content is quite good and interesting.. There is a bit of suspense as well , I wish the update frequency was quicker............................................ .......................................... ..................................
more chapters plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plzplzplzplzpl, plz plz itss sooo goooodddd need moooreeeeeeeeeeee
I really like this so far and cant wait to see what happens down the line but ple dont have him and Hermione get together 😂 and i like the Little but of A serious tone you have a little more would hurt though at least for me but other than that i love it and hope you can post more often
No clue why this story isn't popular but i think it's because slow chapter release but i still like the story and how the main character was born.
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well done ....................................................................,..................................................................................[img=coins]
Liam shouted, " Magic is magnificent!!, Magic is mysterious!!, Magic is miracle!!". I cringed: " Grammar is terrible!!, Story is terrible!!, Author is terrible!!". Sorry I had to copy the terrible punctuation too! :(