Hadrian Potter x Library Of Heavens Path

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Chroniclemale

Dude if the book you were waiting for updating was mine then then I am truly sorry, as I noticed the more I wrote that story the more I realized I am a man with lots of ideas but I don't know how to write properly and around the time I had stopped I had attempted suicide due to depression by taking insulin forcing hypoglycemia but was rescued. If you are willing, I am willing to give you my previous ideas and mind maps for help in writing the novel. if you want them, message me on discord chroniclemale#6872

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amaturewriter

Finally,,,,,look MC better be OP.....just saying make the MC a bit dark....not evil..but not forgiving **** ...someone after his life kill em....also no training others..one man army ****...add some romance and fluff but no sad angsty **** pls,..Also try to build the romance and no preverted idiotic MC..add some bash..its always fun..[just saying...maybe give snape some love and help the guy..yes he is stupid and a cunt but that dudes life is ****],,,,its not harem so nice....just saying make MC a hybrid..werewolf and vampire? maybe a basilisk animagus or a nundu?..or a Blue whale? think of a flying whale...voldy would just run away..hehehe.... anyway goodluck and goodshow..

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haochi1

I love the story don’t drop it please. For once the mc is not stupid keep up the good work 👌😄... ................. ................. ................. ................. .................

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Grumpy_CaT

HAHAHAHA the # NO - FEMALE COLLECTION got me good :) the term (female collecting) perfectly describe most harem novel those days...................................

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Zhang_Yu

This is honest to God one of the few fanfic's that I've been rooting for, so please don't go on hiatus or bail on us like you did before.. That was just killing my psyche.. Otherwise keep up the good work and keep it real. Peace out!!!

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Flame_Slasher

Good background story....Plz don't drop this one......,........🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

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DarkDei

Please continue +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Phoenix1998

Nice to see update. Hope you update more. Nice to see update. Hope you update more. Nice to see update. Hope you update more. Nice to see update. Hope you update more.

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Zecoh

I’ll just get this out there. I’m more into OC mc for Harry Potter fan fictions but this one... this fan fiction changed me. After that first chapter, Deep down in my bones, a new me was born. I fell in love. This new Harry is spectacular, great writing and the story is enjoyable. I totally recommend this fan fiction.

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Evil_For_the_WIN

Will you continue this? Will you continue this? Will you continue this? Will you continue this? Will you continue this? Will you continue this?

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GodOfAdventure

Very nice to read.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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HeadDragon

for this novel it has a 10/10 in everything, it is attractive and attractive the writing of this author than with the few! There are chapters that I have become absorbed, I hope you do not stop writing I support you. Regards Author

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Kieren_Allman

The story is pretty good and flows well. Harry is competent and seems to be setting up for some big plans. His actions are unique and the LOHP, while useful, doesn't seem 100% broken, yet. Just a pity the updating stability is poor, don't know whether to drop, or just wait, just in case.