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The plot is interesting and somewhat unique. It borrows from tried and true popular themes and stories but adds its own spin to it. Initially, I had this novel reviewed at about 3.5 stars, but with the author's revision of their chapters making it a much more enjoyable story to read, I've changed my review as I said I would. I hope to see more good things for this author in the future!
Greetings and Salutations... 🧐So there wasn't a lot of activity this month, but I promise next month, I won't fail to deliver every single day. If there are any questions you have about 'God Ash' feel free to drop them down here. I'll answer to the best fo my abilities...I'd like to get as much feedback from you guys as possible...TNX
the book is really good, my only problem is that there's no rest for the dude from one annoying situation to the other.
author would like to ask will there ever be a time when Cain isn't constantly running low on stamina 🤔
Actually pretty enjoyable. The only thing I dislike are the character relationships. Cain is too much of a pushover for his “teammates”. The way he doesn’t finish off anyone who betrays/defies him puts me off. Anyways I’ll keep reading and see if there is some character development.
I'm sorry I live the story but caun still not reaching tier one is insane it's giving me blood warlock flashbacks 😅
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Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
Cringe synopsis............😐 Lol determination, future, unyeilding............and whatever hehehe ,.........,......,.,,........................................
This book is a masterpiece. Now reincarnated gods are all time favorite of mine along with business. The descriptions the author provides along with the characters are just chef's kiss. I have read till going solo. So my opinion can change after reading more. Also loving the battle scenes along with overpoweredness of the mc. Lastly one last line for Scott- He just like me during my bad days fr fr
The introduction of the story setting and the Characters was nicely done with just the few first chapters that I have read. I was able to immerse myself into what is happening in the story. The writing style of the author is also nice. Other books tend to use so much unfamiliar and deep words to make the story more mesmerizing but this book didn't do that. It was at the right amount and it makes the story easy to follow and understand what is happening in the story but at the same time, still mesmerizing. Overall the writing quality of this book and the author is of a very high standard. I will make a review again about the Story Development after I read more chapters of this book.
The world building is majectic. It's also very well written. I recommend this novel to people who likes to read action packed novels! Please support this author!
I think it's time I updated this because I think I've done a very good job turning this book into something I'm proud of. Don't forget to buy chapters with coins. It really helps a lot in motivating the story... Thank you 🤗. If you can, be a privilege readers to read 2 chapters ahead of everyone else 😉
I am back again to review a second time. World building was amazing. No info dumps, only smooth transitions to show you how the world in built and how everything flows. System elements are not boring, or taking too much from the focus of the story, rather int integrates well with everything. The Mc is calculating and a rational person, yet seems to enjoy the thrill of battle. Overall if you like fantasy, system, expansive and rich lore, this is a novel for you
This review is as honest as can be. This story format and writing style remind me to much of story's written by chat gpt or similar AI chat bots, for this story to be the work of the author. At least that's my opinion. My review is for the story itself.
If you like weak to strong, a little bit of a system, and grand scale then this is a book for you. Chapter are lengthy and fit in all the needed details. Descriptions are vast and MC, although a student, is not scared to fight and kill when needed. Gotta say this is one of the most interesting and best new novels I have read in a while. Will be following from now on. Good luck author!
Hello I am really very impressed by your writing. Like I read the few chapters. I also looked and I guess this is your first novel but it's so good. You have written so nicely. The character, the plot every thing is so good.
The plot itself is incredibly engaging and enjoyable, but most of all, it's unconventional and unique. The writing quality is descriptive yet not overly so, making it an amazing read. Keep up the good work, author!
The plot line makes you want to open more pages and chapters of the book,it's such an amazing book that I wanna recommend to all of you out there.
I like how detailed it was from the beginning. I am already hooked. There might be some typos and errors but it was minimal. Still in Chapter 3 so I might come back and edit this review. Overall, I love this
The author has a tendency to use his words wisely which is very good. Has an excellent way to describe things, and the plot is good. But, the author must improve his punctuation. The author sometimes just throws in facts that are not true, it might be for comedic relief but sometimes it is not correct to misguide people. The thing that the author has no knowledge of is the usage of figures of speeches. It does make it funny tho.. but it's just wrong. If you don't know what kind of figure you are using, you can just be silent and not just throw in some random figures. The rest is good, keep up the work author.
A really good read. I was instantly transfixed in the story and felt the author's passion and commitment in the novel. The writing quality is near perfect. I only noticed minor grammatical mistakes in the early chapters, which I'm sure have been fixed as time has gone on. The language that is used is vivid and bright, leaving strong images in my mind. It's perfect for a webcomic adaption. Story development is great. I never felt like it had dragged on or had gone too fast. I was able to follow along very well, not feeling my attention be pulled away by anything else. Character design, while borrowing from some tropes, is very solid. Fully original characters are practically impossible nowadays, but the author does very good in making the MC feel unique. I felt invested in his story and was curious to see where it went. The world background is superb. I saw so many uses of descriptions that I would love to use in my own story. While it also borrowed from tropes, it felt far more original than many other stories I have read which have the same setting. Overall, a 4.6 in a very good story. I will be adding this to my collection and I am looking forward to future chapters. Good job, author. Happy writing.
Engaging and flowing story, well-thought out world building and natural character development. You can literally feel the author's passion in this work and it is palpable. I hope the author continues to deliver at this level.
Like seriously what kind of plot is this 😳😳, it's really so good 😂😂, You just wanna what to kind on reading more and more... Author I really do love your book, please do keep on updating 🙂🙂
the story is literally so promising and a bit fresh the way you created a whole background story is just amazing explaining the complete origin and creating a whole new world is just amazing. character development is not that good I've just read starting 6 chapters, Cain is still not described well I think I hope you improve in this factor as it's too important, sorry but I'll give a bit more criticism on the detailing and you to stop exposing everything as it's kinda too hard to keep track of everything otherwise the story is awesome! <3
im still in chapter 7 but i love the game-like writing you use, and the world-building is amazing. but to be honest, the first chapter is too long and it is kinda challenging to invest in the story once you get to the 3/4 chapter its an enjoyable story.
I really love the chapters it was descriptive although too length for my personal preference. Prefer it shortened or maybe split into more chapters! Great job author
This quite a fantastic and interesting story. It hooks from the start and doesn't let go. The writing style is smooth and the plot is excellent. I liked the book. Everyone should read it. Well done great work
The plotlint makes sure to keep you going the more the book continues to go. It's quite amazing to be honest, and I'm quite sure this book will keep me invested as I go,
The plot is interesting and somewhat unique. It borrows from tried and true popular themes and stories but adds its own spin to it. Initially, I had this novel reviewed at about 3.5 stars, but with the author's revision of their chapters making it a much more enjoyable story to read, I've changed my review as I said I would. I hope to see more good things for this author in the future!
Greetings and Salutations... 🧐So there wasn't a lot of activity this month, but I promise next month, I won't fail to deliver every single day. If there are any questions you have about 'God Ash' feel free to drop them down here. I'll answer to the best fo my abilities...I'd like to get as much feedback from you guys as possible...TNX
the book is really good, my only problem is that there's no rest for the dude from one annoying situation to the other.
author would like to ask will there ever be a time when Cain isn't constantly running low on stamina 🤔
Actually pretty enjoyable. The only thing I dislike are the character relationships. Cain is too much of a pushover for his “teammates”. The way he doesn’t finish off anyone who betrays/defies him puts me off. Anyways I’ll keep reading and see if there is some character development.
I'm sorry I live the story but caun still not reaching tier one is insane it's giving me blood warlock flashbacks 😅
Reveal Spoiler Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
Cringe synopsis............😐 Lol determination, future, unyeilding............and whatever hehehe ,.........,......,.,,........................................
This book is a masterpiece. Now reincarnated gods are all time favorite of mine along with business. The descriptions the author provides along with the characters are just chef's kiss. I have read till going solo. So my opinion can change after reading more. Also loving the battle scenes along with overpoweredness of the mc. Lastly one last line for Scott- He just like me during my bad days fr fr
The introduction of the story setting and the Characters was nicely done with just the few first chapters that I have read. I was able to immerse myself into what is happening in the story. The writing style of the author is also nice. Other books tend to use so much unfamiliar and deep words to make the story more mesmerizing but this book didn't do that. It was at the right amount and it makes the story easy to follow and understand what is happening in the story but at the same time, still mesmerizing. Overall the writing quality of this book and the author is of a very high standard. I will make a review again about the Story Development after I read more chapters of this book.
The world building is majectic. It's also very well written. I recommend this novel to people who likes to read action packed novels! Please support this author!
I think it's time I updated this because I think I've done a very good job turning this book into something I'm proud of. Don't forget to buy chapters with coins. It really helps a lot in motivating the story... Thank you 🤗. If you can, be a privilege readers to read 2 chapters ahead of everyone else 😉
I am back again to review a second time. World building was amazing. No info dumps, only smooth transitions to show you how the world in built and how everything flows. System elements are not boring, or taking too much from the focus of the story, rather int integrates well with everything. The Mc is calculating and a rational person, yet seems to enjoy the thrill of battle. Overall if you like fantasy, system, expansive and rich lore, this is a novel for you
This review is as honest as can be. This story format and writing style remind me to much of story's written by chat gpt or similar AI chat bots, for this story to be the work of the author. At least that's my opinion. My review is for the story itself.
If you like weak to strong, a little bit of a system, and grand scale then this is a book for you. Chapter are lengthy and fit in all the needed details. Descriptions are vast and MC, although a student, is not scared to fight and kill when needed. Gotta say this is one of the most interesting and best new novels I have read in a while. Will be following from now on. Good luck author!
Hello I am really very impressed by your writing. Like I read the few chapters. I also looked and I guess this is your first novel but it's so good. You have written so nicely. The character, the plot every thing is so good.
The plot itself is incredibly engaging and enjoyable, but most of all, it's unconventional and unique. The writing quality is descriptive yet not overly so, making it an amazing read. Keep up the good work, author!
The plot line makes you want to open more pages and chapters of the book,it's such an amazing book that I wanna recommend to all of you out there.
I like how detailed it was from the beginning. I am already hooked. There might be some typos and errors but it was minimal. Still in Chapter 3 so I might come back and edit this review. Overall, I love this
The author has a tendency to use his words wisely which is very good. Has an excellent way to describe things, and the plot is good. But, the author must improve his punctuation. The author sometimes just throws in facts that are not true, it might be for comedic relief but sometimes it is not correct to misguide people. The thing that the author has no knowledge of is the usage of figures of speeches. It does make it funny tho.. but it's just wrong. If you don't know what kind of figure you are using, you can just be silent and not just throw in some random figures. The rest is good, keep up the work author.
A really good read. I was instantly transfixed in the story and felt the author's passion and commitment in the novel. The writing quality is near perfect. I only noticed minor grammatical mistakes in the early chapters, which I'm sure have been fixed as time has gone on. The language that is used is vivid and bright, leaving strong images in my mind. It's perfect for a webcomic adaption. Story development is great. I never felt like it had dragged on or had gone too fast. I was able to follow along very well, not feeling my attention be pulled away by anything else. Character design, while borrowing from some tropes, is very solid. Fully original characters are practically impossible nowadays, but the author does very good in making the MC feel unique. I felt invested in his story and was curious to see where it went. The world background is superb. I saw so many uses of descriptions that I would love to use in my own story. While it also borrowed from tropes, it felt far more original than many other stories I have read which have the same setting. Overall, a 4.6 in a very good story. I will be adding this to my collection and I am looking forward to future chapters. Good job, author. Happy writing.
Engaging and flowing story, well-thought out world building and natural character development. You can literally feel the author's passion in this work and it is palpable. I hope the author continues to deliver at this level.
Like seriously what kind of plot is this 😳😳, it's really so good 😂😂, You just wanna what to kind on reading more and more... Author I really do love your book, please do keep on updating 🙂🙂
the story is literally so promising and a bit fresh the way you created a whole background story is just amazing explaining the complete origin and creating a whole new world is just amazing. character development is not that good I've just read starting 6 chapters, Cain is still not described well I think I hope you improve in this factor as it's too important, sorry but I'll give a bit more criticism on the detailing and you to stop exposing everything as it's kinda too hard to keep track of everything otherwise the story is awesome! <3
im still in chapter 7 but i love the game-like writing you use, and the world-building is amazing. but to be honest, the first chapter is too long and it is kinda challenging to invest in the story once you get to the 3/4 chapter its an enjoyable story.
I really love the chapters it was descriptive although too length for my personal preference. Prefer it shortened or maybe split into more chapters! Great job author
This quite a fantastic and interesting story. It hooks from the start and doesn't let go. The writing style is smooth and the plot is excellent. I liked the book. Everyone should read it. Well done great work
The plotlint makes sure to keep you going the more the book continues to go. It's quite amazing to be honest, and I'm quite sure this book will keep me invested as I go,