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Honest reviews are here.. [Extreme Spoiler Alert] This novel is about MC, who in previous life is a young genius, got an incurable disease, and died at a young age.. Fortunately for him, he reincarnated in otherworld where life force (like a mana) exist.. MC has been reborn in Baron's family. It seems blessing, BUT it is not that blessing.. This world is called Rion World due to a person who manages to unite the world.. But as time passed, the wars were inevitable, and the land is the started to be divided into multiple empires and kingdoms.. There are 10 great empires and more than 100 kingdoms in this world.. In the kingdom that MC born at, alone has a 200 million population showcasing how big the world is.. The power rank of this world is started as Below Limit Breaker (Open nine Prana circuit), 1st-rank Limit Breaker, 2nd-rank Limit Breaker (Guardian), 3rd-rank Limit Breaker (Master), 4th-rank Limit Breaker (Grandmaster), 5th-rank Limit Breaker (Sage) and 6th-rank Limit Breaker (Demi-God).. The weapons or items rank is started with Ordinary, Transcendent, and Divine.. I love how simple the rank given by the author.. It is so easy to remember without any complicated or ridiculous name of the rank.. There are also not many ranks or levels of the item/weapon or power rank.. If you come here due to the "fastpaced" tag, then you might misunderstand it.. It is not that fast.. Well, MC first received the system at Ch24.. MC first breakthrough into 1st-rank Limit Breakers is at Ch76.. At Ch112 (the latest chapter for non-privilege), MC is still at 1st-rank Limit Breaker.. Romance and love story? So far, not yet.. I don't see any heroines or female characters.. No romance or love story yet.. I wouldn't mind about this.. But some people might hate it.. And since the author put the tag of it, he might add it in the future.. Right now, the story is just finished in the introductory stage.. 👉🏻Hidden power [like Kyuubi (Naruto) or Nika Nika Luffy (One Piece)]?? Check✔️. 👉🏻OP MC?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Can beat and kill someone a lot higher realm/rank than himself?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Didn't reveal his secret?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Quiet System/ not talkative A.I?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Steady pace, not too fast and not too slow?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Unique Element and Laws?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Didn't Nerfing MC?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Swordsman MC?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Good archers skills?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Human race?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Powerful Family?? Beep ❌️. 👉🏻Strong Backer like his Master or his Grandfather?? Beep ❌️. 👉🏻Always kill his enemy?? Beep ❌️. Enemy managed to escape a few times?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Reaching Aura-level on any weapons?? Beep ❌️. Not yet, so far. The background story of the powerhouse and the location of the place are quite unorganised and lacking due to the high number of the kingdom and great empire.. For example, the MC family is the strongest Baron in the northern Kingdom due to his grandfather influence.. From this statement, you might think the family is strong, but as you read further, the grandfather is on 1st-rank Limit Breaker only.. As the story progresses, many powerful powerhouses come out one after another.. Sage and Demi-God are showing up one after another.. Even MC Master is only at 3rd-rank Limit Breaker.. And MC Master is the strongest swordsman in the kingdom that MC family residence.. And as MC goes from one place to another, it is hard to determine the location or kingdom or direction.. The author also has not yet divide the place like North continent’s, South continent’s, West continent’s, East continent’s and Central continent’s.. We don't know how far MC kingdom with great empire, the relationship between kingdom and great empire, how strong the kingdom and empire, the ranking of the kingdom and empire, who the strongest human, which race is exist and which race is hostile and alliance with human.. So far, there is no info about the kingdom and empire at all.. Plus, with soooo many kingdom and empires, it sure will be complicated.. That is why I quite shock that the author make hundred of kingdom and 10 great empire.. Just from these, I am sure there are too many from the Royal and the Noble, such as from Duke, Marquis, Earl, Viscount, and Baron exist in this world.. Nevertheless, I love this novel.. Well, you will never find the perfect novel where they can satisfy all ur needs and taste.. I wish the author good luck, and please don't give up.. Btw author, have you heard a story about a young man who was falling out of high school? His mother pleaded for him to take the S.A.Ts. Reluctantly, he decided to take the test. He got the results, and to his surprise, he scored 1460 out of 1600. His mother came to him and said, "I know you cheated." He swore to his mother that he didn't cheat. But something happened. He thought, maybe I am smart. So, he started to go to class. He made new friends with people who were going to class and had ambition. Because of that, he graduated high school and went to college. Ended up becoming an incredibly successful magazine entrepreneur. Twelve years after he graduated, the S.A.T board sent him a letter. The year that he took the test, 13 test scores were sent to the wrong people. He was one of those 13 people and, in fact, had scored a 740. When he was interviewed, he said, "Everybody thinks that when I got 1460, that was what changed my life." In fact, it was when I started acting like someone who got a 1460 that my entire life changed. Many of us wait for evidence of success, and the trick is you simply have to start acting in a way someone who has what you want to act. I see that the author is an open-minded person and someone who would admit ur own mistake.. Admitting mistakes allows you to learn from them. This willingness to learn and grow can lead to better decision-making in the future. It also sets a positive example and encourages yourself to continue to improve..
For starters, the novel would be way better if the MC wasn't 12 years old. There really isn't any point to this novel. He wants to become stronger so he goes somewhere to train and of course some evil cult ends up attacking which nothing comes out of it. the cult is stopped then they escape so they can attack again. He goes back home for 1 chapter then it's right back to leaving to train at another place which you guessed it, a evil cult attacks again. There really is just no point to the whole novel. And although this is just my personal opinion, I really can't stand novels that have a child as the MC. Instead of doing a time skip to 12 years old you could've done it up to 18. him having the power that he has will be just as shocking at 18 since everyone else with his power is 90 or older.
This is basically ur everyday genius Nobel cliche it’s nothing new progression is also pretty weird
everything is amazing about this novel and author please don't drop this amazing work
this novel is good.but I feel like he is getting stronger quickly which might make it a little boring..but the comedy here and there is nice. and author is there is a discord for this novel?!
overall like the story so far, grammar is a bit off but I'm not entirely sure if English is the authors first language as a lot seem to have a different first language, pacing is decent, world background im hoping gets expanded on more but it's been alright so far. like the character design and the power progression so far as it's been easy to understand. one chapter a day is fine but the story was good enough for me to want more so i hope the author keeps it up. overall giving this a B to B+ in terms of a story grade
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A hidden gem in concept, yet a disaster in pacing. The main character becomes a powerhouse on the continent in about a dozen chapters with little to no substance in between. This is a power fantasy novel that you should only read if you are bored and have some coins to spare. It is nothing I strongly recommend.
story is good but still don't know how the power rankings of the novel hoping that the author can explain the power rankings
Story is interesting! The narration is vivid and engaging, the flow of the convos of the characters and the story is nice and clear as well! I personally think that this one is a good read! Keep up the good work, author!!🙌
Good novel, story is alright but the pace makes it interesting. Altho, I'm confused how on earth do u have so many collections. Well wttever, none of my concern.... Keep up the good work author
Hello, I am creating a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Zen ithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Man, I am envious. How did you got 50+collections with only 6 Chaps? Story is okay and good too. Never understood this thing anymore.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Shameless Author review , so naturally five stars. Give it a try, if you love action, adventure and op genius mc who is super talented but also have a cheat. Follow Apollo's journey as he crushes supreme genius, demons and gods.
Honest reviews are here.. [Extreme Spoiler Alert] This novel is about MC, who in previous life is a young genius, got an incurable disease, and died at a young age.. Fortunately for him, he reincarnated in otherworld where life force (like a mana) exist.. MC has been reborn in Baron's family. It seems blessing, BUT it is not that blessing.. This world is called Rion World due to a person who manages to unite the world.. But as time passed, the wars were inevitable, and the land is the started to be divided into multiple empires and kingdoms.. There are 10 great empires and more than 100 kingdoms in this world.. In the kingdom that MC born at, alone has a 200 million population showcasing how big the world is.. The power rank of this world is started as Below Limit Breaker (Open nine Prana circuit), 1st-rank Limit Breaker, 2nd-rank Limit Breaker (Guardian), 3rd-rank Limit Breaker (Master), 4th-rank Limit Breaker (Grandmaster), 5th-rank Limit Breaker (Sage) and 6th-rank Limit Breaker (Demi-God).. The weapons or items rank is started with Ordinary, Transcendent, and Divine.. I love how simple the rank given by the author.. It is so easy to remember without any complicated or ridiculous name of the rank.. There are also not many ranks or levels of the item/weapon or power rank.. If you come here due to the "fastpaced" tag, then you might misunderstand it.. It is not that fast.. Well, MC first received the system at Ch24.. MC first breakthrough into 1st-rank Limit Breakers is at Ch76.. At Ch112 (the latest chapter for non-privilege), MC is still at 1st-rank Limit Breaker.. Romance and love story? So far, not yet.. I don't see any heroines or female characters.. No romance or love story yet.. I wouldn't mind about this.. But some people might hate it.. And since the author put the tag of it, he might add it in the future.. Right now, the story is just finished in the introductory stage.. 👉🏻Hidden power [like Kyuubi (Naruto) or Nika Nika Luffy (One Piece)]?? Check✔️. 👉🏻OP MC?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Can beat and kill someone a lot higher realm/rank than himself?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Didn't reveal his secret?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Quiet System/ not talkative A.I?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Steady pace, not too fast and not too slow?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Unique Element and Laws?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Didn't Nerfing MC?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Swordsman MC?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Good archers skills?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Human race?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Powerful Family?? Beep ❌️. 👉🏻Strong Backer like his Master or his Grandfather?? Beep ❌️. 👉🏻Always kill his enemy?? Beep ❌️. Enemy managed to escape a few times?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Reaching Aura-level on any weapons?? Beep ❌️. Not yet, so far. The background story of the powerhouse and the location of the place are quite unorganised and lacking due to the high number of the kingdom and great empire.. For example, the MC family is the strongest Baron in the northern Kingdom due to his grandfather influence.. From this statement, you might think the family is strong, but as you read further, the grandfather is on 1st-rank Limit Breaker only.. As the story progresses, many powerful powerhouses come out one after another.. Sage and Demi-God are showing up one after another.. Even MC Master is only at 3rd-rank Limit Breaker.. And MC Master is the strongest swordsman in the kingdom that MC family residence.. And as MC goes from one place to another, it is hard to determine the location or kingdom or direction.. The author also has not yet divide the place like North continent’s, South continent’s, West continent’s, East continent’s and Central continent’s.. We don't know how far MC kingdom with great empire, the relationship between kingdom and great empire, how strong the kingdom and empire, the ranking of the kingdom and empire, who the strongest human, which race is exist and which race is hostile and alliance with human.. So far, there is no info about the kingdom and empire at all.. Plus, with soooo many kingdom and empires, it sure will be complicated.. That is why I quite shock that the author make hundred of kingdom and 10 great empire.. Just from these, I am sure there are too many from the Royal and the Noble, such as from Duke, Marquis, Earl, Viscount, and Baron exist in this world.. Nevertheless, I love this novel.. Well, you will never find the perfect novel where they can satisfy all ur needs and taste.. I wish the author good luck, and please don't give up.. Btw author, have you heard a story about a young man who was falling out of high school? His mother pleaded for him to take the S.A.Ts. Reluctantly, he decided to take the test. He got the results, and to his surprise, he scored 1460 out of 1600. His mother came to him and said, "I know you cheated." He swore to his mother that he didn't cheat. But something happened. He thought, maybe I am smart. So, he started to go to class. He made new friends with people who were going to class and had ambition. Because of that, he graduated high school and went to college. Ended up becoming an incredibly successful magazine entrepreneur. Twelve years after he graduated, the S.A.T board sent him a letter. The year that he took the test, 13 test scores were sent to the wrong people. He was one of those 13 people and, in fact, had scored a 740. When he was interviewed, he said, "Everybody thinks that when I got 1460, that was what changed my life." In fact, it was when I started acting like someone who got a 1460 that my entire life changed. Many of us wait for evidence of success, and the trick is you simply have to start acting in a way someone who has what you want to act. I see that the author is an open-minded person and someone who would admit ur own mistake.. Admitting mistakes allows you to learn from them. This willingness to learn and grow can lead to better decision-making in the future. It also sets a positive example and encourages yourself to continue to improve..
For starters, the novel would be way better if the MC wasn't 12 years old. There really isn't any point to this novel. He wants to become stronger so he goes somewhere to train and of course some evil cult ends up attacking which nothing comes out of it. the cult is stopped then they escape so they can attack again. He goes back home for 1 chapter then it's right back to leaving to train at another place which you guessed it, a evil cult attacks again. There really is just no point to the whole novel. And although this is just my personal opinion, I really can't stand novels that have a child as the MC. Instead of doing a time skip to 12 years old you could've done it up to 18. him having the power that he has will be just as shocking at 18 since everyone else with his power is 90 or older.
This is basically ur everyday genius Nobel cliche it’s nothing new progression is also pretty weird
everything is amazing about this novel and author please don't drop this amazing work
this novel is good.but I feel like he is getting stronger quickly which might make it a little boring..but the comedy here and there is nice. and author is there is a discord for this novel?!
overall like the story so far, grammar is a bit off but I'm not entirely sure if English is the authors first language as a lot seem to have a different first language, pacing is decent, world background im hoping gets expanded on more but it's been alright so far. like the character design and the power progression so far as it's been easy to understand. one chapter a day is fine but the story was good enough for me to want more so i hope the author keeps it up. overall giving this a B to B+ in terms of a story grade
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A hidden gem in concept, yet a disaster in pacing. The main character becomes a powerhouse on the continent in about a dozen chapters with little to no substance in between. This is a power fantasy novel that you should only read if you are bored and have some coins to spare. It is nothing I strongly recommend.
story is good but still don't know how the power rankings of the novel hoping that the author can explain the power rankings
Story is interesting! The narration is vivid and engaging, the flow of the convos of the characters and the story is nice and clear as well! I personally think that this one is a good read! Keep up the good work, author!!🙌
Good novel, story is alright but the pace makes it interesting. Altho, I'm confused how on earth do u have so many collections. Well wttever, none of my concern.... Keep up the good work author
Hello, I am creating a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Zen ithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
Man, I am envious. How did you got 50+collections with only 6 Chaps? Story is okay and good too. Never understood this thing anymore.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Shameless Author review , so naturally five stars. Give it a try, if you love action, adventure and op genius mc who is super talented but also have a cheat. Follow Apollo's journey as he crushes supreme genius, demons and gods.