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Hmm ok

This would break some of the immersion of course but other authors especially of very popular books have done this and it hasn’t been detrimental to the novel in any way, btw

Hmm where is the dancing? Although they disrespected the corpses dancing would have brought it to another level. “One of the birds was singing the tune of the Macarena dance, a dance sequence from a lower realm, while roasting a phoenix for dinner”

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It is your choice from this point how you want the MC to go. You could have him hire a bunch of actors to act as game developers and teach them programming info from his system and act like they were the initial inventors and not the games corp, or you could have the MC outright mention that everything was of his own volition and design, making his character more prolific in the public eye due to his skill set. The sky is the limit for you, author, when it comes to this quest.

1, how he came up with the pods design, and 2, who developed it. By including this type of content in the upcoming chapters, you will successfully set this book of for success due to finally revealing controversy surrounding Reyes’ introduction of miraculous inventions one after another.

The games company is accusing Reyes of stealing the initial concept and building upon it using his own technology. Due to this outrage and public scrutiny on Reyes for supposedly stealing the concept of the pod, his board and the US congress pressures him for answers

They will show early development schematics of their pod which is very similar to the one given by the system, because the system took the pods invention from this game company, just it was taken 30 years in the future when the pod was finished.

In the upcoming chapters to do with the Virtual Reality Pod, after MC releases it to the public there should be a massive riot by a games company based in the USA accusing Reyes of committing fraud by stealing their idea for the pod.

Author, I am a bit eccentric so I will be giving you a quest. It’s up to you to accept it or not, but here it is anyways.

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Make it hilarious too

In exchange for leaving this gift I want you to make a scene in the upcoming war where the enemies (birds) wipe out a large portion of the phoenix troops and dance on their corpses mocking mc☺️

Every lawyer in the world after this pod is released on the market:

This chapter is a fever dream

Unrealistic portrayal of technology. I’m only pointing this out because the technology so far has been realistic in potential developments to come. While the brain is being worked on for technological implants, it is currently scientifically impossible to mimick the senses of taste and smell due to their nerve endings being attached to the mouth and nose respectively. You simply cannot mimick those senses unless you affect the brain directly through something like nanotechnology or deep brain stimulation. Not to mention, even if this managed to be a possibility, there is no way on earth such a machine would be available for public consumption. Anything to do with brain interference or technology involving the brain would be considered unethical in nearly every country on the planet. Curing cancer through nanobots is one thing, but messing with the brain is another in its entirety. Realistically if this all happened either the users playing these games would need to sign a 4000 page document to avoid all legal liability ( which if someone died or something happened even if they signed those papers he would still be held responsible ) or he would be sued to oblivion by everyone on the planet. Totally unrealistic.