Fate: Holy Maiden

author-san, can you add a synopsis please?

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The writing quality and updating scheduleis good enough. The development is a bit too fast in romance and relations department and in genral events too not that i want it to be slower its just that something just feels amiss in the flow. Jack as a charachter is incredible predictable fue to the simple making of it , not something i hate , but its annoying and not my cup of tea. world background is alright since the author is a fate fan , that means he will know enough to not mess up that part . All in all its a good fic about the penniless saint,more focused on Jeanne as the target of obsessive importance.

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