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Dragon Ball- Universe's Strongest Human
3.22 (10 ratings)
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Not going to be super omega strong, will hover around Goku and Vegeta, but the MC wants to be stronger than Goku! Goes through Dragon Ball- DBZ, DBGT, and DBS.
read if you want, or don't~ This is pretty much my respect for Toriyama
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The idea of having a superpower is interesting. Not out of place, and it fits. Especially the power of the fire of shinra, it's amazing. but you lost me at the 'shop' and his whole personality. first of all, having a shop is too out of place, and useless if you can just use dragon balls. and his personality left too much to be desired. He is an idiot. Goku kind of idiot. And acting superbly mad in love with launch? after saying that he doesn't support of dating, when you can just marry. i don't know why you decided to go with this path, but it would be a lot better if he's the hardworking type, that tries hard to keep up with goku. would be more exciting and better at least for me. It has a lot of potential, but unfortunately is executed poorly.
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For the first time I'm giving a 1 star review. The story had potential. but that went down the drain after MC acts like a parody character who knows the future but still gets angry. worse of all the writing, sentences and dialogues gets confusing which is annoying. The friendly banter and mocking were nice but the way it was executed and the follow ups was so bad. Plus why tf am i reading cannon DBZ with a slight self insert along with a dumber MC and worse english. All events remain the same and MC like usually weaker than a saiyan. A stupid system too, all items and power from it were irrelevant, if it was relevant the story wont follow cannon. The plot was dumb, the only thing i like was a bit of one piece and one punch man funny elements that were added. There was no anime logic in this book. Author you should improve those points i mentioned. if not i'd rather read Chinese trash MTL. at least i won't have much expectations
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love it very sample and very fast paced. need moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
it's very bad dumb mc and no build up sorry but please don't write anything like that again
I came to check out this. I saw this because of your pokemon fiction, and I'll check it out
I only have one question, segs??????? ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
OK, this is the first time I'm writing a review for a fanfic this early but I hope the Author sees this and takes it as constructive criticism. the foundation of the story had tremendous potential with the human MC and fire force power but the MC lost all his brain cells when he transmigrated. He acts like a joke gag character for one-piece instead of a normal person with normal reactions which makes him feel dumb. Also, the dialogue is written too close together making it difficult to know who is talking. Author, I think you should keep the premise for the story but rewrite/edit it so the characters seem realistic instead of dumb