Thank you for the great chapter, but it always makes me want to read more .
actually, it's weird to be able to use ki when no one on earth knows how to use it, and it was made so that the mc can use it after an earthling taught him martial arts really the whole story is messed up from the beginning and nothing make sense .
He thought it also strange that he also only picked up one presence but no second. There should be two?
Dragon Ball: Saga Of The Strongest Human
Anime & Comics · Soulcrystal
he pretty much told her everything. Where is the fooling in that ?
He sighed in his mind. It looked like she is still pretty much a kid at her age. Good for him. He could fool her to some extent. "Yep, any wish. And I want to find them. I already have the ball with 6 stars in it. Every other ball has a different amount of stars ranging from 1 to 7. Like that you can differentiate them from each other. And to find them I need a radar otherwise it would be hard. That's where your father comes into play."
Dragon Ball: Saga Of The Strongest Human
Anime & Comics · Soulcrystal
the dragon balls can't grant that wish at all because it has limits, and only the super dragon balls have that power, so do you mind explaining your reasoning author ?
"Because I'm immortal, the second wish that doctor Gero asked the dragon balls was my immortality" Cell replied with a smile.
I'm Gohan!
Anime & Comics · LordPhenex026
you could hire a proofreader to correct your poor grammar cause this sentence doesn't make any sense at all, but I guess you want to say this for killing krilin .
"This Cell... he because of Krillin!" Gohan exclaimed, punching Cell in the cheek and the bio-android was thrown to the ground.
I'm Gohan!
Anime & Comics · LordPhenex026
you will pay for this, or you will regret this, but not you will pay me. You need to find a proofreader. Your grammar is very poor, and it's hard to read like this. At least, it is for me .
"Dad!" Gohan yelled and looked at Frieza with fury shining in his onyx eyes, "You'll pay me!"
I'm Gohan!
Anime & Comics · LordPhenex026
why are you making things up? the spirit bomb is the slowest attack ever, and you say that gohan can use it faster than other attacks, and if it's coming from himself, then that means that he is using his ki and nothing else the genki is about taking the ki of others . I know many things can change from canon but not the concept itself, and lastly, I know being a writer is hard, and it could be that I didn't understand, so please elaborate for me and thank you.
it was clearly said that only elite warriors can do it, and it doesn't make sense that Radirz could do it
"Shit, it's a power ball! If you throw that into the sky it'll turn into an Ozaru!" Gohan exclaimed in his mind remembering that technique from the series.
I'm Gohan!
Anime & Comics · LordPhenex026
is he stupid ? he keeps telling things that he shouldn't know yet from others' prospective . And by the way, goku is stupid but not stupid that he wouldn't notice that and ask the right question (How do you know about the kmehameha ?)
"Okay, don't regret it later dad... I'll finish that right away so you can show me the Kamehameha!" Gohan cried out smiling.
I'm Gohan!
Anime & Comics · LordPhenex026
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original Naruto: Strogest taijutsu specialist
Reincarnated into the Naruto world during the Third Great Ninja War, Shinji gains a power that grows with every battle. Unable to use ninjutsu, he relies on raw strength to survive. But as war takes its toll, Shinji must decide if his growing power will end the cycle of violence—or become part of it. ____________________________ warning the first 5 chapters are as follows ch 5 is chapter 1 ch 4 is chapter 2 ch 3 is chapter 3 ch 2 is chapter 4 ch 1 is chapter 5 the rest of the chapters are normal16 Chs 34 Collections
the only things missing are the part of jiraya and the part when she doesn't know a lot about women cause she is one
"Ace, eat more, don't be picky, and grow up early. Remember to take a hot bath on time every day, don't stay up late, and ensure you sleep. Make more friends. This ocean is very vast, and you will definitely make a lot of friends, but you don't need too many true friends, just a few are enough. You should wait until after you are twenty to drink alcohol. Excessive drinking is harmful to your health, so be careful. In the future, Ace, you will be interested in women, but remember, don't be seduced by strange women. Find a woman like Mom. As the son of the Pirate King, you will encounter many painful and sad things in the future. You must remain firm in yourself and have dreams. And, you also need to have the confidence to realize your dreams. And, and, and..."
One Piece: Ace The Emperor of Flames
Anime & Comics · NikaTheHonoredOne