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Brillant I'm seriously hoping this gets finished ten chapters in and I'm addicted check twice today for an update for more. the Jenny of old stones moment was brilliant felt like I was there. Give me more or I'll reincarnate you into boku no pico. Rob
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the idea is nothing special,we have see this plot again! the start of the story is ok but then the Mc start act childish arpunf people and as a second Robert Baratheon plus he saw his magic left and right with no reason like he doesn't know how the royals is paranoid ! the grammar is not really good but the personality of Mc is annoying this is more of a crack fic
not bad from what ive read i do like that he didnt start his journey in the north all and all really like this novel hope you dont drop ////////
My friend if you wanna take any idea from my story feel free to do so, with my work and personal stuff I won’t be able to return writing!!!! But I’ll be here reading and supporting ya
I like it please keep updated ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................. please?
pretty good like it balances not just using games logic it is realistic I hope you make more
Brillant I'm seriously hoping this gets finished ten chapters in and I'm addicted check twice today for an update for more. the Jenny of old stones moment was brilliant felt like I was there. Give me more or I'll reincarnate you into boku no pico. Rob
...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Reading Order – Melkorverse [Romulo Melkor Mancin]....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
the idea is nothing special,we have see this plot again! the start of the story is ok but then the Mc start act childish arpunf people and as a second Robert Baratheon plus he saw his magic left and right with no reason like he doesn't know how the royals is paranoid ! the grammar is not really good but the personality of Mc is annoying this is more of a crack fic
not bad from what ive read i do like that he didnt start his journey in the north all and all really like this novel hope you dont drop ////////
My friend if you wanna take any idea from my story feel free to do so, with my work and personal stuff I won’t be able to return writing!!!! But I’ll be here reading and supporting ya
I like it please keep updated ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................. please?
pretty good like it balances not just using games logic it is realistic I hope you make more