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will it get any update in future or the author will Abandon this novel also . all of the fanfic novel of which i have read of this author has been on hiatus and he is writing his own original and it is not free to read . i am sad 😭😭😭
El resumen de esta obra es odio a tang san ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I can honestly say the writing and translation quality is the best attribute of this story. The plot and character design is pretty pathetic. The author must be a major league Incel that the criteria for being a bad guy is being a lecher.
At the beginning the story was entertaining, but after 102 chapters it was just one repetition after another. It's always the same group of people in the Lists. So far 1 positive list and 3 negative listens. When you read the story, you quickly know that the author must have an EXTREME hatred for Doulu Dalu and really puts a negative spin on EVERYTHING. Hypocrite rank 9^^ Just because Tang-san lets other girls kiss him, he is the 9th hypocrite person in Doulo Dalu. WOW such a world must be absolutely perfect. Likewise, the people are written in 2 dimensions and are also distorted to the extreme, as if there are only good or only bad people.
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very interesting idea,,,,, but a childish development ones you read further ,,, wondering how this fanfic has a high rating,, which in fact has a very poor translation like MTL and translated by human not machine hard to understand and messy writing. but first time reading a fanfic like this so i consider it unique for me plus i really love the idea. the execution though consider it bellow average. remaking the translation would be better, plus editing the story itself for better quality. ⭐⭐ writing quality- for the effort ⭐⭐ updating stability- atleast it reach 100+ chapters ⭐⭐ story development- childish and not well thought action of characters and development of the story ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ character design-especially the girls ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐world background- unique power system
The level of hatred one needs to have towards Tang san protagonist to write this kind of fanfic. Because I read many anti tang san fanfic, but none of them compare to this one. All the darkest fantasies of the author are directed towards Tang san in this fanfic.
it is a novel straight from MTL and way too dark 👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹 the original author hated TANG SAN way too much even above human boundaries god bless the original author he needs help
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Good story, unique system and stable updates but the translation is a bit messed up. Still i am giving a 5 star because i am a fan of Douluo Dalu.
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I wouldn't take this fanfic serious, but it is hilarious. It has a lot of character bashing. Like all the male characters are super scummy. A good laugh if I do say so myself. 🤔🤗🤗🤣
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Wkwkwkw .....i like this one...... Thanks author 👍🏻 👍🏻👍🏾👍🏾😌😌👍🏻👍🏻👍🏾👍🏾👍🏻👍🏻👍🏾👍🏾😌😌😌👍🏾👍🏾😌👍🏻👍🏼👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏼♋😂👍👍👍👍🏼♋😂👍🏾👍🏾😌👍🏾👍🏾👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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Since this a Douluo Dalu fanfic, i am giving it a biased review. But honestly try it, if you enjoy system novels with op mc like me.
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I like this one 👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
I don't understand how this got more than 4 stars. The idea for the story is really great; honestly, I give it a 5/5, but, god, the translation is awful. I spent a good 1.5 years reading only MTL novels, but even with this experience, at times, it was a chore to read. It's not the worst I've read, but it clearly isn't the best, and it's a shame because the story really is interesting. With a good translation, I'm sure it could easily be one of the best fan fictions of the genre.
will it get any update in future or the author will Abandon this novel also . all of the fanfic novel of which i have read of this author has been on hiatus and he is writing his own original and it is not free to read . i am sad 😭😭😭
El resumen de esta obra es odio a tang san ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I can honestly say the writing and translation quality is the best attribute of this story. The plot and character design is pretty pathetic. The author must be a major league Incel that the criteria for being a bad guy is being a lecher.
At the beginning the story was entertaining, but after 102 chapters it was just one repetition after another. It's always the same group of people in the Lists. So far 1 positive list and 3 negative listens. When you read the story, you quickly know that the author must have an EXTREME hatred for Doulu Dalu and really puts a negative spin on EVERYTHING. Hypocrite rank 9^^ Just because Tang-san lets other girls kiss him, he is the 9th hypocrite person in Doulo Dalu. WOW such a world must be absolutely perfect. Likewise, the people are written in 2 dimensions and are also distorted to the extreme, as if there are only good or only bad people.
Reveal Spoiler very interesting idea,,,,, but a childish development ones you read further ,,, wondering how this fanfic has a high rating,, which in fact has a very poor translation like MTL and translated by human not machine hard to understand and messy writing. but first time reading a fanfic like this so i consider it unique for me plus i really love the idea. the execution though consider it bellow average. remaking the translation would be better, plus editing the story itself for better quality. ⭐⭐ writing quality- for the effort ⭐⭐ updating stability- atleast it reach 100+ chapters ⭐⭐ story development- childish and not well thought action of characters and development of the story ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ character design-especially the girls ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐world background- unique power system
The level of hatred one needs to have towards Tang san protagonist to write this kind of fanfic. Because I read many anti tang san fanfic, but none of them compare to this one. All the darkest fantasies of the author are directed towards Tang san in this fanfic.
it is a novel straight from MTL and way too dark 👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹 the original author hated TANG SAN way too much even above human boundaries god bless the original author he needs help
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Good story, unique system and stable updates but the translation is a bit messed up. Still i am giving a 5 star because i am a fan of Douluo Dalu.
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I wouldn't take this fanfic serious, but it is hilarious. It has a lot of character bashing. Like all the male characters are super scummy. A good laugh if I do say so myself. 🤔🤗🤗🤣
Reveal Spoiler Wkwkwkw .....i like this one...... Thanks author 👍🏻 👍🏻👍🏾👍🏾😌😌👍🏻👍🏻👍🏾👍🏾👍🏻👍🏻👍🏾👍🏾😌😌😌👍🏾👍🏾😌👍🏻👍🏼👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏼♋😂👍👍👍👍🏼♋😂👍🏾👍🏾😌👍🏾👍🏾👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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Since this a Douluo Dalu fanfic, i am giving it a biased review. But honestly try it, if you enjoy system novels with op mc like me.
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I don't understand how this got more than 4 stars. The idea for the story is really great; honestly, I give it a 5/5, but, god, the translation is awful. I spent a good 1.5 years reading only MTL novels, but even with this experience, at times, it was a chore to read. It's not the worst I've read, but it clearly isn't the best, and it's a shame because the story really is interesting. With a good translation, I'm sure it could easily be one of the best fan fictions of the genre.