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I loved when the mc raped a woman. Also, why do I feel like everyone on this side is a retard? People can't even use punctuation right, it's outrageous. Anyways, 5 stars on C.D cause the mc rapes women, which we all know is a real alpha thing to do.
From chapter 156 to chapter 157 and from chapters 160 to 161, there is a strange disconnect because why did he get transported there? How did he get transported there? Why is the chapter after he goes into the dilapidated building he somehow is in some kind of life or death arena with a level of 40+, and it shows through the dialogue that he is in some shop and he has his own room fought with the lizard man before well when did all this happen between 160-161? but he entered the dilapidated building in 160, and then bam, he is in some shop/life or death arena in 161. Why is this so?
my review would have been a perfect 5 if the numbers would have made any sense the main caracter is good but his lvl keeps fluctuating as if we are reading a chart for marketing which made the story unbearable to read but the rest of the story is great and i hope to see some similar works in the future
Lets all set up a gofundme for the author so he can get himself a psychiatrist if even the mental health hospitals are unwilling to take him.
the absolute worst novel out there with s**t mc and despite giving the system he is not using it. There are novels in which mc restricts himself in using the system but that's to make it interesting and show character and growth of the mc but here it's not like he don't wanna use it fo some godd reason just that he is got a good for nothing brains and personality.
fix the story you are not fixing the levels you are not fixing the floors that he ascanded to you did not fix the amount of spiritual crystal he got hire an éditeur man it well make you're life a alot essayer and good luck.
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What did I just read? Nooooo... My eyes 😵😵😵 The writing quality is very bad, and the characters are just meh... The story progression is messed up too.
I have to say, the premise of the story isn't the worst, just a mega turn off to have a rapist MC under any circumstances. I'm not sure how some of y'all can comfortably listen to a narration of a rapist, but I know I cannot, even after pressing through the first instance of this. I feel it's not even worth mentioning the other problems of this novel so far because the one I listed is such a huge one in and of itself. 10000% do not recommend.
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no review needed, i was a beginner when i read this, so i (somehow) liked it, i dont anymore. its bad..........................filler to post filler to post filler to post filler to post filler to post filler to post
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story started pff great but how the main character behaves starts getting annoying( doest use his brain whats o ever, rapes any good looking girl that wrongs him) also the scaling is just garbage cleared 100 floors and went from lvl 14 to 15 and only got 10k of the stones( not sure of the name) even though each monster drops some and there where multiple floors with more then 2k monsters. Also the author droped it prob realized how bad ot was.
Wow. Author can't even keep track of what levels the MC is at, there's no balance in this story, and the MC has raped like 2 women in less than 30 chapters.
Disgusting story. I don't have words to say. The MC is a coward, a Rapist and thinks what he is doing is alright. Read it if you are a fan of Stupid MC who thinks he is right. Could have gotten more powerful but didn't because he would have to go outside (with a SSS grade pet and) was still scared. Oh and he raped his pet.
Not worth it reading in my opinion so read at your own risk i guess. quality control here would be nice considering there are plenty of other muchbetter Novels to choose to spend their time continuing translating
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so the story idea is great and I was looking forward to it! unfortunately I had to drop the book 50 something chapters in. I just couldn't take the plot holes and continuity errors that are rampant in this story. it made it unreadable for me.
Это один из самых. ужасных произведений которые я прочитал Никому не советую читать . Герой ужасен и глуп
the story is great but the guy is selfish to another level you have a maid who can't even defend herself and you have more than five thousand crystal if you can't support her why will you now bring her along with you
could have been much even if I wrote it it was not necessary for the to make the mc a psycho .... as he is powerful he can ignore the ants that disturb him bit he continuously like to show off
Although short and rather predictable, it's still an enjoyable read. Hopefully the author can write better and longer story next time. Thanks for sharing this story with us.
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Somewhere after he cleared the Wildlands forest, the story became what scattered. the story never mentioned the got the subclass alchemy. the diamond chest and the egg of the Queen's of blade never get mentioned. after that he triggers a new area does something meets someone from his past goes on a side mission and that back to the mission. then story gets complicated to follow. and then he is in a forgein ruined city helps the city gets teleported back and ftw the story gets more vaguely and scrambles after the Wildlands forest. i enjoyed reading it with lot of excitement till the point he left the Wildlands forest. after that I'm still trying to wrap my head what I have been reading
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I should have given 1 star because for me this is 1 of the worst novels I have read, but writing is hard and Maybe others will like it so even if I don't like the novel I feel bad giving 1 star
This story is really great as i really like the premise of this book. I will give it 5 stars as any story that says you must be 18 to read is definetly right up my alley, in my strike zone, excetera, excetera!! HeHeHe!!
This is a slighly improved copy paste from M T L. The author can't do simple math and forget even details that he has writen bevor. In the later chapters i don't even know what i'm reading here. The people here are sometimes transcended, then players and another time cultivators or energy-bodys. Later in the chapters it is turning in something scy-fi. There i broke up. Read up to chapter 198.
This is soooo bad. It starts out as generic wish fulfillment trope-a-palooza written by a 13 year old and rapidly sinks from there to actively being an insult to the readers intelligence. STAY AWAY AND DO NOT READ THIS UNLESS YOU LIKE TRAINWRECKS. You have been warned.
the author doesn't even remember details written in the very same chapter. character level changes wildly IN THE VERY SAME Chapter. messy, unthought out & just clusterF of story plots attempted to be mashed together
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Your story is absolutely trash. If your mc was an evil wealthy guy with no morals it would make sense, but you instead kept making up reasons why he wasn't a bad guy. He is outright lazy and is a complete coward, but the fact that you then drop op items and other things on the mc who does next to nothing with it all because he is too lazy to get up is terrible. It is supposed to be an apocalypse and he sits back like it is just another day.
I loved when the mc raped a woman. Also, why do I feel like everyone on this side is a retard? People can't even use punctuation right, it's outrageous. Anyways, 5 stars on C.D cause the mc rapes women, which we all know is a real alpha thing to do.
From chapter 156 to chapter 157 and from chapters 160 to 161, there is a strange disconnect because why did he get transported there? How did he get transported there? Why is the chapter after he goes into the dilapidated building he somehow is in some kind of life or death arena with a level of 40+, and it shows through the dialogue that he is in some shop and he has his own room fought with the lizard man before well when did all this happen between 160-161? but he entered the dilapidated building in 160, and then bam, he is in some shop/life or death arena in 161. Why is this so?
my review would have been a perfect 5 if the numbers would have made any sense the main caracter is good but his lvl keeps fluctuating as if we are reading a chart for marketing which made the story unbearable to read but the rest of the story is great and i hope to see some similar works in the future
Lets all set up a gofundme for the author so he can get himself a psychiatrist if even the mental health hospitals are unwilling to take him.
the absolute worst novel out there with s**t mc and despite giving the system he is not using it. There are novels in which mc restricts himself in using the system but that's to make it interesting and show character and growth of the mc but here it's not like he don't wanna use it fo some godd reason just that he is got a good for nothing brains and personality.
fix the story you are not fixing the levels you are not fixing the floors that he ascanded to you did not fix the amount of spiritual crystal he got hire an éditeur man it well make you're life a alot essayer and good luck.
Reveal Spoiler What did I just read? Nooooo... My eyes 😵😵😵 The writing quality is very bad, and the characters are just meh... The story progression is messed up too.
I have to say, the premise of the story isn't the worst, just a mega turn off to have a rapist MC under any circumstances. I'm not sure how some of y'all can comfortably listen to a narration of a rapist, but I know I cannot, even after pressing through the first instance of this. I feel it's not even worth mentioning the other problems of this novel so far because the one I listed is such a huge one in and of itself. 10000% do not recommend.
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no review needed, i was a beginner when i read this, so i (somehow) liked it, i dont anymore. its bad..........................filler to post filler to post filler to post filler to post filler to post filler to post
.................ffs ..... ................................ ............ffs......................... ..... ...... .......................ffs
story started pff great but how the main character behaves starts getting annoying( doest use his brain whats o ever, rapes any good looking girl that wrongs him) also the scaling is just garbage cleared 100 floors and went from lvl 14 to 15 and only got 10k of the stones( not sure of the name) even though each monster drops some and there where multiple floors with more then 2k monsters. Also the author droped it prob realized how bad ot was.
Wow. Author can't even keep track of what levels the MC is at, there's no balance in this story, and the MC has raped like 2 women in less than 30 chapters.
Disgusting story. I don't have words to say. The MC is a coward, a Rapist and thinks what he is doing is alright. Read it if you are a fan of Stupid MC who thinks he is right. Could have gotten more powerful but didn't because he would have to go outside (with a SSS grade pet and) was still scared. Oh and he raped his pet.
Not worth it reading in my opinion so read at your own risk i guess. quality control here would be nice considering there are plenty of other muchbetter Novels to choose to spend their time continuing translating
I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it
so the story idea is great and I was looking forward to it! unfortunately I had to drop the book 50 something chapters in. I just couldn't take the plot holes and continuity errors that are rampant in this story. it made it unreadable for me.
Это один из самых. ужасных произведений которые я прочитал Никому не советую читать . Герой ужасен и глуп
the story is great but the guy is selfish to another level you have a maid who can't even defend herself and you have more than five thousand crystal if you can't support her why will you now bring her along with you
could have been much even if I wrote it it was not necessary for the to make the mc a psycho .... as he is powerful he can ignore the ants that disturb him bit he continuously like to show off
Although short and rather predictable, it's still an enjoyable read. Hopefully the author can write better and longer story next time. Thanks for sharing this story with us.
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Somewhere after he cleared the Wildlands forest, the story became what scattered. the story never mentioned the got the subclass alchemy. the diamond chest and the egg of the Queen's of blade never get mentioned. after that he triggers a new area does something meets someone from his past goes on a side mission and that back to the mission. then story gets complicated to follow. and then he is in a forgein ruined city helps the city gets teleported back and ftw the story gets more vaguely and scrambles after the Wildlands forest. i enjoyed reading it with lot of excitement till the point he left the Wildlands forest. after that I'm still trying to wrap my head what I have been reading
Reveal Spoiler I should have given 1 star because for me this is 1 of the worst novels I have read, but writing is hard and Maybe others will like it so even if I don't like the novel I feel bad giving 1 star
This story is really great as i really like the premise of this book. I will give it 5 stars as any story that says you must be 18 to read is definetly right up my alley, in my strike zone, excetera, excetera!! HeHeHe!!
This is a slighly improved copy paste from M T L. The author can't do simple math and forget even details that he has writen bevor. In the later chapters i don't even know what i'm reading here. The people here are sometimes transcended, then players and another time cultivators or energy-bodys. Later in the chapters it is turning in something scy-fi. There i broke up. Read up to chapter 198.
This is soooo bad. It starts out as generic wish fulfillment trope-a-palooza written by a 13 year old and rapidly sinks from there to actively being an insult to the readers intelligence. STAY AWAY AND DO NOT READ THIS UNLESS YOU LIKE TRAINWRECKS. You have been warned.
the author doesn't even remember details written in the very same chapter. character level changes wildly IN THE VERY SAME Chapter. messy, unthought out & just clusterF of story plots attempted to be mashed together
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Your story is absolutely trash. If your mc was an evil wealthy guy with no morals it would make sense, but you instead kept making up reasons why he wasn't a bad guy. He is outright lazy and is a complete coward, but the fact that you then drop op items and other things on the mc who does next to nothing with it all because he is too lazy to get up is terrible. It is supposed to be an apocalypse and he sits back like it is just another day.