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KingAraragi

This one was really great. Honestly one of the best I've read on the website. I love the kind of... powetic approach you took. (Best word I can think of) It reminds me a lot of books I used to read as a child. Less focusing on the characters or world and more focusing on describing the movement of scenes and characters. You really don't see that on this kind of website. And I really do respect that. When I write, I tend to lean towards character developement, and I know a lot of writers on here focus on creating the same fantasy world over and over. I respect that you decided to just... tell your story. You could've easily picked something that would of gotten you thousands of views, but you instead chose something that represents you and your style of writing. In some ways, I really look up to you as a writer. Keep up the good work!

3yr
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Sunbae_Time

From the first chap. You'll definitely know that this book is made by an authentic author. But let's get to business. Ahem *clears throat* this is amazing. So fr*@king good I love it. Its definitely worth the time.

3yr
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Alphachoas

Great job! The characters, plot, and grammar are all spectacular. This is one of the few books on webnovel that didn’t cause me to instantly have a headache. So keep up the great work!

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AuroraCross

It was a little bit of a slow start and hard to understand at first, but I think that was a me problem. I am now at chapter 4 and though I'm not very far yet I'm impressed and wanted to leave a review. It has suspense and mystery and even only four chapters in I can already tell the world and the characters are well thought out. And the grammar is very good. it's better than a lot of other stories on this site.

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Major2Major

Really amazing. I didn't know I would end up reading and liking every minute of this book. People should definitely check out this book and give it a read cause it is worth it.

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TheReasonsSheIs

I saw the other reviews saying that this was really great and unlike anything else on Webnovel and turns out they are telling the truth, this book is really amazing. I fell in love with the first page. it just pulls you in for every single chapter. this is way more better than any other book on the platform. i really hope this book gets more recognition

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Rhetta_Run3257

Wow. Just wow. This is a hidden gem on this site. I don't know what to say except that people should be reading this. Amazing job author really quite impressive ♥

2yr
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Aescwine_7378

I wonder how many times I had to look up at the dictionary! The depth of the writing is one of the best I have ever read. The pacing is nice and characters are equally intriguing. The theme of the story is fascinating. Adding this to my library for sure!

2yr
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Mason_Grey

I've read the synopsis, and am preparing to read this story and I have to say, it sounds absolutely amazing mate! It's easily one of the most interesting sounding stories I've seen in a hot minute. Kudos to you mate!!

2yr
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safa_bukhari

Incredible how you were able to add as much detail into each scene as you did. Usually it seems very pretentious "Literature class" type when a scene is over explained but your explanations added alot without anything seeming unneccesary. Great Job!

2yr
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Amethyst_Harney

Absolutely mesmerizing! I love the theatrical visonary you use when the woman is running threw the woods, to when she’s at the gates dripping on blood. It really brings the fear and drama to a readers heart!!

2yr
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SmilesS

The Writing was quite a treat. I enjoyed the luxury of the succinct descriptions and very vivid usage of scenery to depict a rather intense image to the reader. Something you don't often find while browsing webnovels is that large "description". The authors smooth writing and transitioning from there only serve to make a comfortable reading experience. I would recommend this novel to anyone really.

2yr
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DarthVaderth

Wow, the comedy and romance here is quirky and sometimes deep. It’s a refreshing take on the romance genre and I can’t wait to see where this goes! Keep up the good work Author!

2yr
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safa_bukhari

I love your story. your writing style is unique. Your plot is strong. leading characters are strong. you have done a good job. keep it up...

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PillGrandCreator

Wow! Just amazing. I really enjoyed the plot, the story dynamics and the character design. There is something that just makes you immerse yourself in the book. Keep it up

2yr
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Themaskedqueen05

The synopsis kinda took me by surprise tho....that's until i read it and now I'm hooked on this like it was a drug....you should be proud, this clearly what you call a masterpiece 💯💯... Loved it and I'll continue to love it.

2yr
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Macy_Bae

Wow! This story is a hidden gem! I'm in awe of the way it's beautifully written and the way it describes the scenes and emotions that can make anyone who reads it imagine a movie playing in their heads. Great job author! Looking forward to more chapters [img=recommend]

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Nora_Star

Turn off the lights and you're in the movie theater with this one! Everything is of the highest quality. The world that it takes you to is unique and the detailed description of the characters is top notch!

2yr
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Mel_Aniv

The Pacing is just right and the quality is of a native speaker. I won't say much but the writings and wordings is even deeper than lord of the rings. It failed to be compared to it. Also, the words are engrossing and the story is enthralling. Keep it up! Hope more readers will read yours [img=recommend]

2yr
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wamlabish

The prose here is pretty incredibly done. This is not generally my preference in genre, but the vivid descriptions made it easy to get caught up in the action. It most definitely stands out from the crowd from that alone. The amount of effort here is apparent.

2yr
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curiosity_of_a_cat

Wow. Absolutely amazing. AMAZING Writing quality. Amazing plot and easy to get hooked up. It's been a long time since I read such an interesting novel. Just hope the author update more chapters.

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ObadaE

A very well-written story. Each character is painted in distinctive colors and the writing is descriptive and engaging. It grabs your attention from page one, and the mystery of what happened to Sabina makes you want to keep reading.

2yr
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SMwrites

Incredible how you were able to add as much detail into each scene as you did. Usually it seems very pretentious "Literature class" type when a scene is over explained but your explanations added alot without anything seeming unneccesary. Great Job!

2yr
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Phoenix_10

Absolutely good. Good plot? Check ✅ Good storyline? Check ✅✅ I really love the setting of the book and the prologue busted my head. Descriptive but not revealing. Such a good write-up. The only thing author needs to watch out for is the update. I saw that the last chapter has been updated since last month.

2yr
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Ariel_x

I love the beautifully described start of the novel, it gives me this full intriguing effect that lasted for as long as I kept reading. The determined personality of the lady was one that made me want to know more about the characters. A great novel!

2yr
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netrics07

The first thing I noticed was how detailed every description of each scene was. You can really feel the intensity of the moment that the author wanted to portray. Also, the mystery it was building makes you want to read more. It really felt like a published novel you could buy in book form.

2yr
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Aeirana
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Beautifully written and the first chapter is very interesting and had me hooked! There is a sense of urgency and drama from page 1 and it's very gripping! Incredible job!

2yr
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AlicoleChronicler

I read the first 15 chapters before writing this review. I really liked the creative writing, the detailed descriptions and the fascinating characters. The story is full of mystery. So far I have more questions than answers. I hope to find out more about all the family's secrets soon!

2yr
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Zelenesenki

Dude the imagery of this book puts you in a cinematic trance, how the scenes were vividly described, how the manner of character interactions are consistent~~ the realistic exchange and small details all make the story sing through the plot! added to my collection btw.

2yr
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Loctovia

The author has superb descriptive skills. The story is worth every minute and time spent on it. You have a great one here author. I loved it!

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Hamapo
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Impressive work. The lead is really smart and that makes the story fun to read. It is all very exciting. Very interesting read, very fascinating.

2yr
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Jude_K_1656

The writer is superb in command of English which I envy the most :) Very good in detailing everything, including the surrounding that could imprint the story's setting in your vision. The story is slow-moving but exciting. It's worth your time to read it if you are a fan of historical romance.

2yr
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KingAraragi

This one was really great. Honestly one of the best I've read on the website. I love the kind of... powetic approach you took. (Best word I can think of) It reminds me a lot of books I used to read as a child. Less focusing on the characters or world and more focusing on describing the movement of scenes and characters. You really don't see that on this kind of website. And I really do respect that. When I write, I tend to lean towards character developement, and I know a lot of writers on here focus on creating the same fantasy world over and over. I respect that you decided to just... tell your story. You could've easily picked something that would of gotten you thousands of views, but you instead chose something that represents you and your style of writing. In some ways, I really look up to you as a writer. Keep up the good work!

3yr
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Sunbae_Time

From the first chap. You'll definitely know that this book is made by an authentic author. But let's get to business. Ahem *clears throat* this is amazing. So fr*@king good I love it. Its definitely worth the time.

3yr
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Alphachoas

Great job! The characters, plot, and grammar are all spectacular. This is one of the few books on webnovel that didn’t cause me to instantly have a headache. So keep up the great work!

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2yr
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AuroraCross

It was a little bit of a slow start and hard to understand at first, but I think that was a me problem. I am now at chapter 4 and though I'm not very far yet I'm impressed and wanted to leave a review. It has suspense and mystery and even only four chapters in I can already tell the world and the characters are well thought out. And the grammar is very good. it's better than a lot of other stories on this site.

2yr
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Major2Major

Really amazing. I didn't know I would end up reading and liking every minute of this book. People should definitely check out this book and give it a read cause it is worth it.

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2yr
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TheReasonsSheIs

I saw the other reviews saying that this was really great and unlike anything else on Webnovel and turns out they are telling the truth, this book is really amazing. I fell in love with the first page. it just pulls you in for every single chapter. this is way more better than any other book on the platform. i really hope this book gets more recognition

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2yr
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Rhetta_Run3257

Wow. Just wow. This is a hidden gem on this site. I don't know what to say except that people should be reading this. Amazing job author really quite impressive ♥

2yr
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Aescwine_7378

I wonder how many times I had to look up at the dictionary! The depth of the writing is one of the best I have ever read. The pacing is nice and characters are equally intriguing. The theme of the story is fascinating. Adding this to my library for sure!

2yr
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Mason_Grey

I've read the synopsis, and am preparing to read this story and I have to say, it sounds absolutely amazing mate! It's easily one of the most interesting sounding stories I've seen in a hot minute. Kudos to you mate!!

2yr
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safa_bukhari

Incredible how you were able to add as much detail into each scene as you did. Usually it seems very pretentious "Literature class" type when a scene is over explained but your explanations added alot without anything seeming unneccesary. Great Job!

2yr
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Amethyst_Harney

Absolutely mesmerizing! I love the theatrical visonary you use when the woman is running threw the woods, to when she’s at the gates dripping on blood. It really brings the fear and drama to a readers heart!!

2yr
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SmilesS

The Writing was quite a treat. I enjoyed the luxury of the succinct descriptions and very vivid usage of scenery to depict a rather intense image to the reader. Something you don't often find while browsing webnovels is that large "description". The authors smooth writing and transitioning from there only serve to make a comfortable reading experience. I would recommend this novel to anyone really.

2yr
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DarthVaderth

Wow, the comedy and romance here is quirky and sometimes deep. It’s a refreshing take on the romance genre and I can’t wait to see where this goes! Keep up the good work Author!

2yr
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safa_bukhari

I love your story. your writing style is unique. Your plot is strong. leading characters are strong. you have done a good job. keep it up...

2yr
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PillGrandCreator

Wow! Just amazing. I really enjoyed the plot, the story dynamics and the character design. There is something that just makes you immerse yourself in the book. Keep it up

2yr
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Themaskedqueen05

The synopsis kinda took me by surprise tho....that's until i read it and now I'm hooked on this like it was a drug....you should be proud, this clearly what you call a masterpiece 💯💯... Loved it and I'll continue to love it.

2yr
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Macy_Bae

Wow! This story is a hidden gem! I'm in awe of the way it's beautifully written and the way it describes the scenes and emotions that can make anyone who reads it imagine a movie playing in their heads. Great job author! Looking forward to more chapters [img=recommend]

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2yr
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Nora_Star

Turn off the lights and you're in the movie theater with this one! Everything is of the highest quality. The world that it takes you to is unique and the detailed description of the characters is top notch!

2yr
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Mel_Aniv

The Pacing is just right and the quality is of a native speaker. I won't say much but the writings and wordings is even deeper than lord of the rings. It failed to be compared to it. Also, the words are engrossing and the story is enthralling. Keep it up! Hope more readers will read yours [img=recommend]

2yr
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wamlabish

The prose here is pretty incredibly done. This is not generally my preference in genre, but the vivid descriptions made it easy to get caught up in the action. It most definitely stands out from the crowd from that alone. The amount of effort here is apparent.

2yr
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curiosity_of_a_cat

Wow. Absolutely amazing. AMAZING Writing quality. Amazing plot and easy to get hooked up. It's been a long time since I read such an interesting novel. Just hope the author update more chapters.

2yr
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ObadaE

A very well-written story. Each character is painted in distinctive colors and the writing is descriptive and engaging. It grabs your attention from page one, and the mystery of what happened to Sabina makes you want to keep reading.

2yr
View 1 Replies
SMwrites

Incredible how you were able to add as much detail into each scene as you did. Usually it seems very pretentious "Literature class" type when a scene is over explained but your explanations added alot without anything seeming unneccesary. Great Job!

2yr
View 1 Replies
Phoenix_10

Absolutely good. Good plot? Check ✅ Good storyline? Check ✅✅ I really love the setting of the book and the prologue busted my head. Descriptive but not revealing. Such a good write-up. The only thing author needs to watch out for is the update. I saw that the last chapter has been updated since last month.

2yr
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Ariel_x

I love the beautifully described start of the novel, it gives me this full intriguing effect that lasted for as long as I kept reading. The determined personality of the lady was one that made me want to know more about the characters. A great novel!

2yr
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netrics07

The first thing I noticed was how detailed every description of each scene was. You can really feel the intensity of the moment that the author wanted to portray. Also, the mystery it was building makes you want to read more. It really felt like a published novel you could buy in book form.

2yr
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Aeirana
LV 11 Badge

Beautifully written and the first chapter is very interesting and had me hooked! There is a sense of urgency and drama from page 1 and it's very gripping! Incredible job!

2yr
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AlicoleChronicler

I read the first 15 chapters before writing this review. I really liked the creative writing, the detailed descriptions and the fascinating characters. The story is full of mystery. So far I have more questions than answers. I hope to find out more about all the family's secrets soon!

2yr
View 3 Replies
Zelenesenki

Dude the imagery of this book puts you in a cinematic trance, how the scenes were vividly described, how the manner of character interactions are consistent~~ the realistic exchange and small details all make the story sing through the plot! added to my collection btw.

2yr
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Loctovia

The author has superb descriptive skills. The story is worth every minute and time spent on it. You have a great one here author. I loved it!

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2yr
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Hamapo
LV 14 Badge

Impressive work. The lead is really smart and that makes the story fun to read. It is all very exciting. Very interesting read, very fascinating.

2yr
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Jude_K_1656

The writer is superb in command of English which I envy the most :) Very good in detailing everything, including the surrounding that could imprint the story's setting in your vision. The story is slow-moving but exciting. It's worth your time to read it if you are a fan of historical romance.

2yr
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