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I really, really like this Story and I hope it kann be one of those with over 9000 Chapters.
I like the story really much, but please fix the old chapters, (the ones that are 4yrs old, idk about the newer ones, but 2years seem fine). The plot is really captivating but the writing quality in the old chaps is bad, I mean really bad. Sometimes you can’t really follow the plot, a lot of misspellings and grammar mistakes (even often pointed out in the comments)
This story is quite good. Although it needs a proofreader or something similar, often homophones(words that are spoken the same but spelled differently) are used in the incorrect context. I very much enjoyed the character development and the interesting world building. It is quite a good read if you can ignore the awkward wording at times.
This story started out as amazing and stayed that way for a long time. and with one of the most impressive upload schedules and world building I've seen. However the major story feels like it has completely stalled for the last 400 uploads. I will keep checking in to see if we actually move forward and probably pick it up again then. But the author seems to be having fun with this so I'm glad for them in that aspect.
it's been consistently good for years, and the author is visibly improving, amazing characters and the worlds feel lived in
I highly recommend giving this one a try! Amazing world building, like one of the best I've seen. Main character is fun. Too much time gets spent on side characters imo. Unfortunately the romance kinda ruined it all for me - granted it's not till very far into the novel, but I don't think I will be continuing 😔Other notes!Author is fun with comments and chapter namesCould use an editor for grammar and spellingFrequently drags on, leading me to skipping entire chaptersLots of interesting and complex characters but has a weird dilemma where it seems like EVERY character is meant to be interesting and potentially important enough to be a major character
Quite a unique world setting and lovely characters. A bit frustrating to read if you want events or characters in the story to just get to the point because its so long winded and over explained and then just gets recounted again in conversations at a later time. A prime example for the saying "Talked a lot but said very little."
Perhaps the only drawback of the author is a certain penchant for graphomania. That is, a distraction to something more insignificant in the narrative, and sometimes for a long time. And this feature is present in almost all characters. Thinking about something, they constantly deviate to the side. However, as the story progresses, this feature becomes less pronounced, or the author managed to suppress it, or I myself gradually came to terms with it. In general, everything is very unusual and interesting. Keep writing!
This has honestly cleared every bar I need in a novel. The characters are well developed, even relatively minor characters. The main cast is incredibly likable and entertaining. The world building is phenomenal because it sets up almost endless possibilities, allowing for room for character development and multiple story arcs that never fail to satisfy. I absolutely have fallen in love with this novel, and I eagerly await each chapter.
A very nice read, and although it is about a succubus and should be considered Yuri honestly it could have been a generic demon and would still be nearly the same story. The main focus is the Demonic Contracts, and Kat's adventures as she is the support character for every summoner we see. Still, I highly recommend it.
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I really like it but Minors problem was a bit boring and long feels like a filler to me well enough "flaming" around i really like the character development so far and I'm definitely looking forward for ch. 2000 :D Keep up the good work and I hope this continues forever!
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A story that ticks all the boxes for greatness: - variety of well designed characters with realistic personalities. - a lot of world building elements that do not disrupt the flow of the story. - variety of plots, the pace changes frequently enough that it doesn't bore the reader. - no plot holes ( almost doesn't feel like a webnovel without those, right?) You won't regret picking it up !
Great book! I like how it's not just fighting and magic flying around, but character development and talking and stuff like that :D
Very well done story with wonderful character development! The multiple different worlds and concepts between different power sources such as mana etc is refreshing. Excellent work author! Please keep it up!
The story tends to drag on sometimes however that's not bad take your own pace. what was really disappointing was how you set up a really interesting protagonist by having them be asexual and then kinda ruined that and did what everyone else is doing by just making her basically gay but with a few more steps, it's your story though so do what you want but it is still dissapointing
Great writte quality, ver interestingy story world with amazing descriptions. It feels like I can see it happening in my head. Always keeps me coming back for more.
This is one of the best light novels I have ever read. You shou definitely give this novel a read if you haven’t Allready
This is by all means a snails pace story that goes in DEEP into the character interactions and worldbuilding. This stories greatest asset is also it's greatest weakness. As while we basically get the full conversations between characters and a lot of insight into the different worlds and culture. There are times where the story doesn't know when to accelerate and things can drag (especially emetional moments).
i am currently at chapter 477 and the MC has no intrests in any girl yet, i hope this changes as i wil continue to read. story and world building are top notch as for character development is smooth and realistic. i truly enjoy the pace at which the story flows, despite my personal opinion of the MC's horrible idia the it's a good idea to disregard weapon and CQC training. read the book as it's well worth it despite no yuri availability.
So far at 800+ chapters deep and I’m enjoying this story, it’s got a great list of recurring characters as well as great story arcs that are well thought out. 😈👍
I personally love this story. The thing that pains me the most to say is that, despite being able to easily overlook the constant grammar mistakes, I can't overlook the pacing. It started out really nice, but as the story goes on it grows to be too slow. The world building is amazing and it gives plenty of personality to each world. Especially as she revisits them, however this is also my biggest quip with it. Each mission feels super drawn out and personally I enjoy the shenanigans from earth and the hub more. The punishment arc was probably the most captivating part of the story for me. The rest of the missions outside of the first few just made me want to skip them in their entirety. Overall it's great just wanted to say this first. Now, my favorite part of the book is Kat's personality and her interactions with those around her. As someone who feels the same with sexuality as Kat and is equally as dense, I love the representation and personally feel that you hit the nail on the head. My girlfriend and I have an eerily similar dynamic to Kat and Lily. While I would love to see everything develop just a bit faster I do see how the pace is perfect for a well written novel on that front and I am just impatient. The friendship between Kat and Sue is well written as well, it is clearly shown in daily life how the friends around you have an impact on what you're comfortable with. Sue for example making so many sexual jokes and Kat reciprocating them just shows how certain situations have an effect even on asexual people such as myself. There's more i would say but it's overall just an amazing book with plenty of ups and downs. It shows the characters feelings clearly and is an overall great read. Would definitely recommend if anyone is just looking for a good book.
Overall nice but slow story. Unfortunately due to webnovels changes to acquisition of fastpasses/free chapters I can no longer follow this story. The price is simply not worth it.
Honestly the most glaring problem with this story is the pacing, not gonna lie it has horrible pacing. Over a hundred chapters spent in a dream, 10s of chapters on pointless small talk that doesn’t drive the story forward at all… yeah that’s an issue.
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I noticed some Translated works of this on Webnovel and wanted to know if the translators got tour approval
I really, really like this Story and I hope it kann be one of those with over 9000 Chapters.
I like the story really much, but please fix the old chapters, (the ones that are 4yrs old, idk about the newer ones, but 2years seem fine). The plot is really captivating but the writing quality in the old chaps is bad, I mean really bad. Sometimes you can’t really follow the plot, a lot of misspellings and grammar mistakes (even often pointed out in the comments)
This story is quite good. Although it needs a proofreader or something similar, often homophones(words that are spoken the same but spelled differently) are used in the incorrect context. I very much enjoyed the character development and the interesting world building. It is quite a good read if you can ignore the awkward wording at times.
This story started out as amazing and stayed that way for a long time. and with one of the most impressive upload schedules and world building I've seen. However the major story feels like it has completely stalled for the last 400 uploads. I will keep checking in to see if we actually move forward and probably pick it up again then. But the author seems to be having fun with this so I'm glad for them in that aspect.
it's been consistently good for years, and the author is visibly improving, amazing characters and the worlds feel lived in
I highly recommend giving this one a try! Amazing world building, like one of the best I've seen. Main character is fun. Too much time gets spent on side characters imo. Unfortunately the romance kinda ruined it all for me - granted it's not till very far into the novel, but I don't think I will be continuing 😔Other notes!Author is fun with comments and chapter namesCould use an editor for grammar and spellingFrequently drags on, leading me to skipping entire chaptersLots of interesting and complex characters but has a weird dilemma where it seems like EVERY character is meant to be interesting and potentially important enough to be a major character
Quite a unique world setting and lovely characters. A bit frustrating to read if you want events or characters in the story to just get to the point because its so long winded and over explained and then just gets recounted again in conversations at a later time. A prime example for the saying "Talked a lot but said very little."
Perhaps the only drawback of the author is a certain penchant for graphomania. That is, a distraction to something more insignificant in the narrative, and sometimes for a long time. And this feature is present in almost all characters. Thinking about something, they constantly deviate to the side. However, as the story progresses, this feature becomes less pronounced, or the author managed to suppress it, or I myself gradually came to terms with it. In general, everything is very unusual and interesting. Keep writing!
This has honestly cleared every bar I need in a novel. The characters are well developed, even relatively minor characters. The main cast is incredibly likable and entertaining. The world building is phenomenal because it sets up almost endless possibilities, allowing for room for character development and multiple story arcs that never fail to satisfy. I absolutely have fallen in love with this novel, and I eagerly await each chapter.
A very nice read, and although it is about a succubus and should be considered Yuri honestly it could have been a generic demon and would still be nearly the same story. The main focus is the Demonic Contracts, and Kat's adventures as she is the support character for every summoner we see. Still, I highly recommend it.
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I really like it but Minors problem was a bit boring and long feels like a filler to me well enough "flaming" around i really like the character development so far and I'm definitely looking forward for ch. 2000 :D Keep up the good work and I hope this continues forever!
Reveal Spoiler A story that ticks all the boxes for greatness: - variety of well designed characters with realistic personalities. - a lot of world building elements that do not disrupt the flow of the story. - variety of plots, the pace changes frequently enough that it doesn't bore the reader. - no plot holes ( almost doesn't feel like a webnovel without those, right?) You won't regret picking it up !
Great book! I like how it's not just fighting and magic flying around, but character development and talking and stuff like that :D
Very well done story with wonderful character development! The multiple different worlds and concepts between different power sources such as mana etc is refreshing. Excellent work author! Please keep it up!
The story tends to drag on sometimes however that's not bad take your own pace. what was really disappointing was how you set up a really interesting protagonist by having them be asexual and then kinda ruined that and did what everyone else is doing by just making her basically gay but with a few more steps, it's your story though so do what you want but it is still dissapointing
Great writte quality, ver interestingy story world with amazing descriptions. It feels like I can see it happening in my head. Always keeps me coming back for more.
This is one of the best light novels I have ever read. You shou definitely give this novel a read if you haven’t Allready
This is by all means a snails pace story that goes in DEEP into the character interactions and worldbuilding. This stories greatest asset is also it's greatest weakness. As while we basically get the full conversations between characters and a lot of insight into the different worlds and culture. There are times where the story doesn't know when to accelerate and things can drag (especially emetional moments).
i am currently at chapter 477 and the MC has no intrests in any girl yet, i hope this changes as i wil continue to read. story and world building are top notch as for character development is smooth and realistic. i truly enjoy the pace at which the story flows, despite my personal opinion of the MC's horrible idia the it's a good idea to disregard weapon and CQC training. read the book as it's well worth it despite no yuri availability.
So far at 800+ chapters deep and I’m enjoying this story, it’s got a great list of recurring characters as well as great story arcs that are well thought out. 😈👍
I personally love this story. The thing that pains me the most to say is that, despite being able to easily overlook the constant grammar mistakes, I can't overlook the pacing. It started out really nice, but as the story goes on it grows to be too slow. The world building is amazing and it gives plenty of personality to each world. Especially as she revisits them, however this is also my biggest quip with it. Each mission feels super drawn out and personally I enjoy the shenanigans from earth and the hub more. The punishment arc was probably the most captivating part of the story for me. The rest of the missions outside of the first few just made me want to skip them in their entirety. Overall it's great just wanted to say this first. Now, my favorite part of the book is Kat's personality and her interactions with those around her. As someone who feels the same with sexuality as Kat and is equally as dense, I love the representation and personally feel that you hit the nail on the head. My girlfriend and I have an eerily similar dynamic to Kat and Lily. While I would love to see everything develop just a bit faster I do see how the pace is perfect for a well written novel on that front and I am just impatient. The friendship between Kat and Sue is well written as well, it is clearly shown in daily life how the friends around you have an impact on what you're comfortable with. Sue for example making so many sexual jokes and Kat reciprocating them just shows how certain situations have an effect even on asexual people such as myself. There's more i would say but it's overall just an amazing book with plenty of ups and downs. It shows the characters feelings clearly and is an overall great read. Would definitely recommend if anyone is just looking for a good book.
Overall nice but slow story. Unfortunately due to webnovels changes to acquisition of fastpasses/free chapters I can no longer follow this story. The price is simply not worth it.
Honestly the most glaring problem with this story is the pacing, not gonna lie it has horrible pacing. Over a hundred chapters spent in a dream, 10s of chapters on pointless small talk that doesn’t drive the story forward at all… yeah that’s an issue.
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I noticed some Translated works of this on Webnovel and wanted to know if the translators got tour approval