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The story development looks so great !! I was hooked in the first chapter itself. I can't wait to read more. Great work, author. Loving it throughly[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update].
This is a great book that we have read so far. It has awesome plots and lots of explaining that makes our travel easy to flow. An Mc that goes on without hesitation, is my type. The writing style and the world setting are great. Great job writer, do your best
A very interesting novel that dwells into a new world like none other! Grammar is good and the plot seems to get even better as more I read! Keep up Author!
"Wait WHAAAA?" were my first words after reading the first ten chapters of your book. Immediately I continued and now I'm here to make a review. I didn't see any grammatical mistakes and the words flow perfectly, exactly the type I like so 5 stars for that. I wish for more chaps tho... Story, Character, and World designs and development are tip-top man! I enjoyed the plot (I do not want to reveal any spoilers!) and the interaction of Mc with everyone is just excelent for me. Keep up with your work Author and I'll keep reading. I'll be watching for the development of this one cuz I can see how big it can be... Peace~
wow, it's such an interesting book. I got more and more drawn to it as I read the first two chapters.
Crescent Veil: Chronicles of Intrigue appears to offer a grandiose and thrilling adventure filled with mystery, destiny, and the clash of worlds. It's a promising concept that is sure to captivate readers eager for an immersive and suspenseful tale.
great novel, i can tell you put your blood sweat and maybe even tears lol to make it it was very vivid and i could visualize everything. usually i don't read very lengthy novels but this one was very good.
Worth a read as it look promising .The writing is and story is good, only problem is that updates are slow ,so need more chapters[img=recommend] .
10/10 for your cover! <3 Is that Lucias when he grow up? I only read the first 3 chapters so far but i had to say it was a smooth one =) nice writing that is absolutely a page turner~ Keep up the good work! I'll continue reading the rest of the chapters!
This book was like a riveting journey through the cosmos. The characters were as diverse and fascinating as the many species found on our planet Earth. The plot was as unpredictably thrilling as the discovery of a new galaxy, leaving me in awe at each twist and turn. Every chapter was a dive deeper into the narrative, akin to the thrill of unearthing a prehistoric fossil. In short, if you're looking for a story as compelling as the evolution of life itself, look no further than this book. Rating: 5/5 stars. A read as exciting as the thrill of a new discovery!
The prologue had caught my attention as they way the author how the story goes on however, the prologue seems like a long synopsis to me but it's okay and I know how the author put their hard work on creating that plot. Your book cover got me as well. Most readers ( I didn't mean at all but some) tend to look first at the book cover before they dive into the story. Although, I advice that you edit your book cover like give it a makeover (Sorry for the term because I don't know what to call it T_T) so that you garner much audience for your novel. Keep writing! ^_^
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Finally! I’m here to leave a review! It took me a while because I wanted to read enough chapters first. But anyways, unto the review! I’ll start by commending your writing style. It’s fresh and immersive and it voices the story in such a way that it allows a reader to follow along smoothly as if they were in the story themselves! At first I was a bit worried about the MC finding himself in a child’s body but I like the route the story is taking so far! My only critique, is on the length of your chapters. As someone who sometimes has a very short attention span, and gets easily distracted, especially when I’m reading on my phone, I love short chapters sm. And the length of your chapters tired me out a little bit sometimes, but I kept going because the story progression was fantastic! So maybe you should make future chapters shorter? Asides that, I truly enjoyed getting to delve into Lucias’s story and I hope you continue to write this book! Great job!
One of the things I enjoyed about this book was its cover. The content itself is fairly easy to comprehend, and you can sense the author's hard work in crafting it. The character design and world-building are impressive, but the chapters are quite lengthy, which may discourage some readers. Additionally, some aspects are overly described, although the vividness is also a positive. With a few more grammar corrections, this book has the potential to be truly outstanding.
Great novel enjoyed reading it, the only thing I would comment on is the stability of updates. The story is nice and the protagonist seems fun, more updatessss!
I believe the writing style is pretty nice and I can actually feel the hard work involved in it. But I think there is a whole lot of explanation of every single scene. I mean I just can't read a chapter for that long 😂 But it's really easy to read judging by the style ❤️
I have greatly enjoyed your narrative style in this story. The story is both interesting and descriptive, and the events are so vivid that I need not imagine anything while reading. However, each chapter in the book is quite lengthy for me. Overall, this is an excellent piece of artwork. I must say, I am impressed.👌👌
Interesting novel with a well-written premise. Lucias is an amazing main character, and I think it has a lot of potential. Good work author!
This book is way awesome to be ignored. its plots are awesome, its world setting is great ad it has a unique style of taking the readers along. the world is built so well and the characters are way more than you just read. great work and an enjoyable book keep it up, author.
wow just mind-blowing for me. the narration and the world-building is great and interesting. I hope you'll keep up the good work, author.
Just wow! I really loved your writing style and descriptions... I am sure it's early to say anything about the characters or the story, but I do have the feeling that this story will reach high... and it has great potential. Keep writing author, you are doing great.
"Crescent Veil: Chronicles of Intrigue" takes readers on an exhilarating journey through a world filled with mystery and magic. Lucias, with his captivating obsidian eyes, and Nathan, a seeker of truth, make for a compelling duo as they navigate a city plagued by unexplained tragedies. The author skillfully weaves together a tapestry of enigmas, unseen forces, and interwoven destinies, keeping readers on the edge of their seats. With vivid descriptions and a thrilling plot, this book promises a grandiose adventure that will leave readers craving for more. Fans of intricate world-building and captivating storytelling will find themselves immersed in the pages of "Crescent Veil." Don't miss out on this captivating tale.
It’s givinggg- bro OUUUU you ate this up. I love the poetry in the synopsis ❤️🤞🏽 keep up the good work, I’m adding it to my library 😌 I love the MC, and Nathan.
I enjoyed the book so far and it describes the characters very good and is well written. I am interested in what is happening but one thing I am wondering is why is this happening to him? What is the MC's motivation? Is he going to use this new power to save the world or has a ancient evil arson? Why did those men want to sacrifice him. The book is good but needs more detail on what your characters needs, wants and the motivation that will drive the rest of the plot I will still read this book to see how things progress
I really like how the Author beautifully carves the words in their story. The description is very neatly done and I can visualise it too. The like how the story is going and I think I'm gonna love little Lucias and Nathan's relationship!
So far everything is good. The writing quality is okay but I need more chapters to see to be able to write a detailed review. All I can say for now is that the story has great potential because of its interesting plot. I hope the author updates soon <3
Although there's only two chps but i enjoyed reading them need more[img=update][img=update]
The story is truly one of a kind 🥰💞The way the author portrays the characters and whatever they are feeling draws the attention of the readers. Great use of grammer and there are little to no mistakes.
It's only 2 chapters, but it's quite intruiging indeed! Although I hoped the next chapters will be shorter like most novels (e.g 1k to 1.5k words a chap) since my attention span could never stay if it's too long. Overall, this book is worth reading ☺️
The prologue was pretty mind-blowing ngl! The Author's writing style is quite amazing and captivating and made me wanna read more ^^ Highly recommended, great job Author >.<
Hello..This is me Sena.CVC is my first attempt as a writer. This book might not good for majority of reader here. I also working on this book slowly. I do want to faster update, but currently I don't have possible time to do that.I expect to work full time on this book start from September.I wish there would be more readers to join on our Lucias journey.If you have any question regarding the book. Feel free to drop your question below here.Good luck, Everyone 🍀
The story development looks so great !! I was hooked in the first chapter itself. I can't wait to read more. Great work, author. Loving it throughly[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update].
This is a great book that we have read so far. It has awesome plots and lots of explaining that makes our travel easy to flow. An Mc that goes on without hesitation, is my type. The writing style and the world setting are great. Great job writer, do your best
A very interesting novel that dwells into a new world like none other! Grammar is good and the plot seems to get even better as more I read! Keep up Author!
"Wait WHAAAA?" were my first words after reading the first ten chapters of your book. Immediately I continued and now I'm here to make a review. I didn't see any grammatical mistakes and the words flow perfectly, exactly the type I like so 5 stars for that. I wish for more chaps tho... Story, Character, and World designs and development are tip-top man! I enjoyed the plot (I do not want to reveal any spoilers!) and the interaction of Mc with everyone is just excelent for me. Keep up with your work Author and I'll keep reading. I'll be watching for the development of this one cuz I can see how big it can be... Peace~
wow, it's such an interesting book. I got more and more drawn to it as I read the first two chapters.
Crescent Veil: Chronicles of Intrigue appears to offer a grandiose and thrilling adventure filled with mystery, destiny, and the clash of worlds. It's a promising concept that is sure to captivate readers eager for an immersive and suspenseful tale.
great novel, i can tell you put your blood sweat and maybe even tears lol to make it it was very vivid and i could visualize everything. usually i don't read very lengthy novels but this one was very good.
Worth a read as it look promising .The writing is and story is good, only problem is that updates are slow ,so need more chapters[img=recommend] .
10/10 for your cover! <3 Is that Lucias when he grow up? I only read the first 3 chapters so far but i had to say it was a smooth one =) nice writing that is absolutely a page turner~ Keep up the good work! I'll continue reading the rest of the chapters!
This book was like a riveting journey through the cosmos. The characters were as diverse and fascinating as the many species found on our planet Earth. The plot was as unpredictably thrilling as the discovery of a new galaxy, leaving me in awe at each twist and turn. Every chapter was a dive deeper into the narrative, akin to the thrill of unearthing a prehistoric fossil. In short, if you're looking for a story as compelling as the evolution of life itself, look no further than this book. Rating: 5/5 stars. A read as exciting as the thrill of a new discovery!
The prologue had caught my attention as they way the author how the story goes on however, the prologue seems like a long synopsis to me but it's okay and I know how the author put their hard work on creating that plot. Your book cover got me as well. Most readers ( I didn't mean at all but some) tend to look first at the book cover before they dive into the story. Although, I advice that you edit your book cover like give it a makeover (Sorry for the term because I don't know what to call it T_T) so that you garner much audience for your novel. Keep writing! ^_^
Reveal Spoiler Finally! I’m here to leave a review! It took me a while because I wanted to read enough chapters first. But anyways, unto the review! I’ll start by commending your writing style. It’s fresh and immersive and it voices the story in such a way that it allows a reader to follow along smoothly as if they were in the story themselves! At first I was a bit worried about the MC finding himself in a child’s body but I like the route the story is taking so far! My only critique, is on the length of your chapters. As someone who sometimes has a very short attention span, and gets easily distracted, especially when I’m reading on my phone, I love short chapters sm. And the length of your chapters tired me out a little bit sometimes, but I kept going because the story progression was fantastic! So maybe you should make future chapters shorter? Asides that, I truly enjoyed getting to delve into Lucias’s story and I hope you continue to write this book! Great job!
One of the things I enjoyed about this book was its cover. The content itself is fairly easy to comprehend, and you can sense the author's hard work in crafting it. The character design and world-building are impressive, but the chapters are quite lengthy, which may discourage some readers. Additionally, some aspects are overly described, although the vividness is also a positive. With a few more grammar corrections, this book has the potential to be truly outstanding.
Great novel enjoyed reading it, the only thing I would comment on is the stability of updates. The story is nice and the protagonist seems fun, more updatessss!
I believe the writing style is pretty nice and I can actually feel the hard work involved in it. But I think there is a whole lot of explanation of every single scene. I mean I just can't read a chapter for that long 😂 But it's really easy to read judging by the style ❤️
I have greatly enjoyed your narrative style in this story. The story is both interesting and descriptive, and the events are so vivid that I need not imagine anything while reading. However, each chapter in the book is quite lengthy for me. Overall, this is an excellent piece of artwork. I must say, I am impressed.👌👌
Interesting novel with a well-written premise. Lucias is an amazing main character, and I think it has a lot of potential. Good work author!
This book is way awesome to be ignored. its plots are awesome, its world setting is great ad it has a unique style of taking the readers along. the world is built so well and the characters are way more than you just read. great work and an enjoyable book keep it up, author.
wow just mind-blowing for me. the narration and the world-building is great and interesting. I hope you'll keep up the good work, author.
Just wow! I really loved your writing style and descriptions... I am sure it's early to say anything about the characters or the story, but I do have the feeling that this story will reach high... and it has great potential. Keep writing author, you are doing great.
"Crescent Veil: Chronicles of Intrigue" takes readers on an exhilarating journey through a world filled with mystery and magic. Lucias, with his captivating obsidian eyes, and Nathan, a seeker of truth, make for a compelling duo as they navigate a city plagued by unexplained tragedies. The author skillfully weaves together a tapestry of enigmas, unseen forces, and interwoven destinies, keeping readers on the edge of their seats. With vivid descriptions and a thrilling plot, this book promises a grandiose adventure that will leave readers craving for more. Fans of intricate world-building and captivating storytelling will find themselves immersed in the pages of "Crescent Veil." Don't miss out on this captivating tale.
It’s givinggg- bro OUUUU you ate this up. I love the poetry in the synopsis ❤️🤞🏽 keep up the good work, I’m adding it to my library 😌 I love the MC, and Nathan.
I enjoyed the book so far and it describes the characters very good and is well written. I am interested in what is happening but one thing I am wondering is why is this happening to him? What is the MC's motivation? Is he going to use this new power to save the world or has a ancient evil arson? Why did those men want to sacrifice him. The book is good but needs more detail on what your characters needs, wants and the motivation that will drive the rest of the plot I will still read this book to see how things progress
I really like how the Author beautifully carves the words in their story. The description is very neatly done and I can visualise it too. The like how the story is going and I think I'm gonna love little Lucias and Nathan's relationship!
So far everything is good. The writing quality is okay but I need more chapters to see to be able to write a detailed review. All I can say for now is that the story has great potential because of its interesting plot. I hope the author updates soon <3
Although there's only two chps but i enjoyed reading them need more[img=update][img=update]
The story is truly one of a kind 🥰💞The way the author portrays the characters and whatever they are feeling draws the attention of the readers. Great use of grammer and there are little to no mistakes.
It's only 2 chapters, but it's quite intruiging indeed! Although I hoped the next chapters will be shorter like most novels (e.g 1k to 1.5k words a chap) since my attention span could never stay if it's too long. Overall, this book is worth reading ☺️
The prologue was pretty mind-blowing ngl! The Author's writing style is quite amazing and captivating and made me wanna read more ^^ Highly recommended, great job Author >.<
Hello..This is me Sena.CVC is my first attempt as a writer. This book might not good for majority of reader here. I also working on this book slowly. I do want to faster update, but currently I don't have possible time to do that.I expect to work full time on this book start from September.I wish there would be more readers to join on our Lucias journey.If you have any question regarding the book. Feel free to drop your question below here.Good luck, Everyone 🍀