FIRE_ANGEL

FIRE_ANGEL

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FIRE_ANGEL
FIRE_ANGEL
1 years ago
Replied to ToufiqUlAlam

God: This suggests a being of immense power, often associated with divinity or supernatural abilities. Challenges the cosmos itself: This God is taking on or confronting the entire universe or the fundamental order of existence. It implies that their actions are not ordinary and have a far-reaching impact on the world.

FIRE_ANGEL
FIRE_ANGEL
1 years ago
Replied to Voidmonk

Thank you for your review. I understand that from the reader's perspective, some aspects of the story might seem unusual. However, my intention is to make the narrative more intriguing by incorporating these unconventional elements. Regarding your point about the MC being in a coma for a year and its connection to the sudden shift in the story's focus from revenge, I agree with your observation. These two elements are indeed linked, and there's a specific reason for this connection. My MC possesses three distinct personalities. If you've thoroughly read the book, you'll discover that the MC was once a god who lost his powers. His 'GOD' persona, which is his original personality, desires to regain his powers. Additionally, if you've paid attention to the descriptions of the MC's skills, you would have come across the skill called "SEAL" which represents the second personality of the 'god's chosen hero.' This persona longs for love and care from others. Finally, the third personality of the MC seeks revenge. These three personalities are influencing the MC's current persona, which is why the story's main focus isn't solely on revenge but also delves into themes of romance and power. This explanation covers only half of the reasoning behind these narrative choices. Regarding your second comment about the betrayal not being necessary, I appreciate your input. It appears there was a typo in your comment, and "last" should be corrected to "lost." I'd like to clarify that there is a compelling reason for the betrayal in the story. It serves a crucial role in the later parts of the novel, aligning with the demands of the plot's development. hpoe my answer will be satisfactory.

FIRE_ANGEL
FIRE_ANGEL
1 years ago
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The author, with a deft hand, paints a vivid picture of a world where appearances can be deceiving, and the truth is elusive. Each character is a multi-dimensional entity, grappling with their own inner demons while projecting a carefully crafted image to the world. The reader is taken on an emotional rollercoaster as they navigate the intricacies of Zhang Yi Chen and Lu Zhi's relationship. over all very good .

FIRE_ANGEL
FIRE_ANGEL
1 years ago
Replied to DarkPlasm

thank you for your kind review and also for helping me to improve my writing skill.

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FIRE_ANGEL
1 years ago
Replied to AuthoressChioma

thanks

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FIRE_ANGEL
1 years ago
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thanks

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FIRE_ANGEL
1 years ago
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Realm of Ascendance

Realm of Ascendance

Fantasy · FIRE_ANGEL

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FIRE_ANGEL
1 years ago
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Realm of Ascendance

Realm of Ascendance

Fantasy · FIRE_ANGEL

FIRE_ANGEL
FIRE_ANGEL
1 years ago
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The novel is commendable, with one particular aspect that stands out to me: the author's seamless introduction of the characters' traits and the well-maintained pacing. However, there is still potential for improvement. Firstly, the author should focus on rectifying grammatical errors present in certain chapters. Additionally, at times, the characters lack emotional impact, which could benefit from further development. These suggestions are intended to help the author enhance their writing. LIKED IT . I RECOMMEND THOSE WHO KNOWS HOW TO BE PATIENCE.

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FIRE_ANGEL
1 years ago
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Chapter Review: "Aiden Arkram: Harbinger of Chaos" In this chapter, the city lies in ruin as Aiden Arkram, an eighteen-year-old with extraordinary power, revels in the destruction he has caused. His laughter echoes through the desolate streets as he embraces his newfound abilities, seeing himself as the architect of a new era. However, a fleeting moment of introspection raises doubts about his path. Despite this, Aiden ultimately embraces his dark nature, relishing in the chaos and destruction. The chapter ends with Aiden laughing amidst the ruins, embodying his role as a harbinger of destruction and maestro of chaos. it is well written and is attractive for most readers . i personally liked it .

  • Forgotten Soul' of An unknown God original

    Forgotten Soul' of An unknown God

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM MAGIC MYSTERY OVERPOWERED TRANSMIGRATION

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    "IN THE SEARCH OF YOUR TRUE SELF AND TO FIND THE BURIED TRUETH , YOU HAVE TO DESTROY THE FAKE" In a universe woven by divine threads, meet Renial Sovn—a God mysteriously intertwined with mortals, cursed with the unique power to unveil long-buried secrets. Branded as a fallen deity, his perilous journey is driven not only by a relentless desire to reclaim his lost godhood but also by the haunting whispers of an ancient prophecy. As Renial traverses the blurred realm between gods and humans, his one-of-a-kind ability to uncover hidden truths becomes both his greatest advantage and his deepest torment. With each revelation, the very fabric of reality unravels, leaving readers spellbound as they witness a God who challenges the cosmos itself, all in the pursuit of a destiny that defies the heavens. Join us on this mesmerizing odyssey, where the cosmic stage becomes the battleground for an extraordinary struggle, and where Renial's quest for self-discovery and the revelation of a cosmic truth will leave you on the edge of your seat, craving the next revelation.

    31 Chs 369 Collections

  • Realm of Ascendance original

    Realm of Ascendance

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE SYSTEM COMEDY MAGIC MYSTERY OVERPOWERED ISEKAI VIDEOGAME

    In a not-so-distant future where virtual reality has become an inseparable part of society, the immersive game "Realm of Ascendance" captivates players with its vast fantasy realm. Meet Alex, an anomaly in this world, physically weak but possessing extraordinary magical talents within the game. As Alex's reputation for unparalleled magical prowess grows, he unwittingly stumbles upon a hidden plot, driven by a mysterious group seeking to exploit the game's mechanics for personal gain. Intrigued and determined to protect the integrity of the virtual world he cherishes, Alex delves deeper, gradually uncovering the extent of their machinations. Alongside his like-minded allies, he forms unlikely alliances, challenging the complex web of political rivalries within the game. However, as secrets unravel, Alex discovers a dormant power within himself, one that blurs the boundaries between the virtual and real worlds. The revelation both astounds and frightens him, for he realizes the immense impact his unique abilities hold. With the oppressive ruling faction tightening its grip, Alex embraces his extraordinary powers, becoming the catalyst for change. Guided by resilience and personal growth, he leads his allies in an exhilarating quest to expose the hidden plot, facing formidable challenges and adversaries along the way. Their journey intertwines the fate of the virtual and real worlds, as the implications of their actions reverberate beyond imagination. As tensions mount and stakes escalate, Alex undergoes a profound transformation, shedding self-doubt to emerge as a confident and resolute leader. In a climactic battle, he unleashes his dormant power, challenging the fabric of reality itself. The lines between the virtual and real worlds blur, and the destiny of both realms hangs in the balance.

    17 Chs 47 Collections

  • The Vengeful Deity's Chosen Hero original

    The Vengeful Deity's Chosen Hero

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE MAGIC HAREM ANTIHERO CAMPUS

    William was left in front of the orphanage gates when he was only a new born child. The orphanage's nun found him inside a basket , a red ruby with image of a mighty black dragon raping itself around a red black colour sword image was drawn on it. There were some trails of blood and foot prints outside the orphanage gates but no dead body found. The nun assumed that some people where chasing after the person who left this baby here. and that person was heavily wounded by their chasers and to protected this child they must have gone somewhere else to confuse their chasers. The nun who was the caretaker of the orphanage had taken William under her and was taking care of William with other children at orphanage. The orphanage was sponsored by the baron of the city Manalo but due to corruption, the money received by the orphanage was very little, even then the nun was somehow managing the orphanage by treating sick people with her holy magic and sometimes she also do home visits. The nun was a 30 year's old kind lady who had given up her priestess position in church and came to this orphanage to take care of the children's because she wanted to feel the blessing of becoming a mother as she never had her own child because churches never permits marriage of any priest or priestess, as to use holy magic the one has to have a pure body and have affinity of holy magic. There are holy knights who also have to follow this rule to use their holy powers but there are some exceptions such as heroes. Yes, here in this world we have heroes and people also uses magic and healing magic is only can be performed by the priests and holy knights but there are some special ones who can also heal them self's and hold strong powers given by the gods and we call them Heroes or Gods chosen one and here in this world, we have 12 heroes chosen by the 12 different gods and each god has a Empire who believes and offer there prayers to them and in retune the god chose a person among the people of their Emperies and give powers to that person to fight against the invaders of other world which also have 12 demon gods who send their champions to conquer this was going on from 10,000 years and after every 1000 years Gods choses their Heroes. The hero selection ends after 18 years from its starts , a very large bell rang when the selection starts and there are total 12 bells had been placed at every head church of the 12 Gods these bells are called world announcers because when even a single bell ranges its sound can be heard to the every corner of the world. The bells 2 times simultaneously after every 1000 years first time all the bells rang simultaneously to inform everyone of starting of the selections of heroes and every person who born on this year already become a hero candidate second time it rang simultaneously when the selection was over it happens after 18 years from the first bell rang and in between the bell rang when a god chosen a hero but this time only a single bell rang came out from the respective god's head church and the head priestess or priest can hear the name of the chosen hero and their location and to confirms the chosen hero's identity the priests/priestess asks the hero to show their stigma on their body which is given by the gods to their chosen heroes and the priest or priestess can also confirm it if the hero can also activates the holy weapon or not. the holy weapons are passed down from generation to generation to heroes and these weapons' are given to the holy priest or priestess who haves the responsibility to keep it safe in the meantime until the next owner of the weapon chosen. The names of chosen heroes and their where about are kept hidden by the head church from other empires and also from the other god's churches.

    6 Chs 5 Collections