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Ophelia is a girl who most in her home town would quickly look over and never know that she was there. Her parents don't really acknowledge her and her sister hates her for a reason she has yet to figure out. Her family moves to a new town where she will find her first friend and possibly even her first love.
The only problem is will that love really be what she thinks it is or is there a secret that could ruin it all. Will her hope of getting away from her family be enough to get her through something that she thought would only happen in books?
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Amazing, the shortest story in web novel I had read but the best. Thanks a lot writer, love your story very much
This is a gentle story about a girl standing up for herself and the bullies that get her there. the story is missing major development of the world, characters and over all story. But it was a really nice quick read.
Really enjoyed this short, yet fast-paced story! Was happy to not have to spend a ton of coins to purchase the remaining chapters. There were a couple of continuity issues that I chose to overlook. The story can afford to be re-edited. Overall, this was a good read (1 day)! *;-)
skip it.. it isn't worth the money. the FL is dragged down by everyone and the ML is trash! writer has potential. I would try something else from her.
The book stops being interesting and turns into teenage diary basically . Rather disappointed in the storyline, especially from a titular standpoint.
I love this book so far has some typos tho and commas in random places it's really captivated my attention which is sometimes hard to do but I've not wanted to put the phone down
short and sweet just the way I like it... very well written I could have wished for more! tragic love to a beautiful life it makes me all warm and fuzzy... thanks
Great book I hate that Cole doesn’t get his happy ending I get it but still hate it but overall love the book. I would definitely recommend the book
This is such a beautiful story about a girl with a beautiful heart who has lived a hard life with a family who treat her horribly. And how she leaves it all behind and finally gets her happily ever after.
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Very nicely written. I enjoyed the entire book. I could see a second book or others with the other characters from this book. Kudos to the author!
I have thoroughly enjoyed the book. It did bring out what happens in school bullying and how family is not perfect. Love is not easy but it is great when you find a true love.
I enjoyed this and was eager to read more. I feel the last few chapters were rushed and jumped ahead to an ending. I would have enjoyed a few more chapters with more details to finish.
Thought this was a great read. I'm glad she didn't end up with Cole. He screwed her sister so he didn't deserve her. I do hope there will be a sequel and Cole finds a good woman.
A qiuck read for a lazy weekend. The build up to the climax was emotional but the letdown was uneventful and a bit predictable. The ending was cliché but welcomed at the same time.
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Story has the potential to be great (some editing is needed) but when the main character marries basically a no name character at the end that blew it for me.
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Great short story, I’m in tears with this ending! So happy she found her happinees and true love 💕💕. Sometimes we(Cole) live with our misstakes for a lifetime! Well done!! Binge worthy 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️