HeyKATO_1514

HeyKATO_1514

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HeyKATO_1514
HeyKATO_1514
29 days ago
Replied to Laetitia_Astolfi

This has happened with other novels on this site. Seems to be a new wrinkle. Tech-based? #makeitstop

She vented her anger and frustrations on them even though her body was aching all over but she didn't stop until they begged for her to stop which she did.

Rebirth; Illegitimate Daughter Turns Tides

Rebirth; Illegitimate Daughter Turns Tides

Fantasy · Kim_Li_0078

HeyKATO_1514
HeyKATO_1514
1 months ago
Replied to Tanya_Albury

...or she had an accomplice from "her team" bring her a rifle when they came to the hospital, more likely.

Qingwu stood on the rooftop, with her silenced sniper rifle aimed at the three snipers in the window.

The Hidden Heiress Is a Secret Big Shot

The Hidden Heiress Is a Secret Big Shot

Urban · Zhuozhuo Meow

HeyKATO_1514
HeyKATO_1514
1 months ago
Commented

"Smack! Smack! Smack!" They deserve it! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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The intense flame war seemed, through the screen, to be audible with a resounding "smack! smack!" of faces being slapped.

Overnight Hit: Vicious Stepmother and Genius Son

Overnight Hit: Vicious Stepmother and Genius Son

Urban · Ruo Li

HeyKATO_1514
HeyKATO_1514
1 months ago
Commented

"are" not "is"

"You Vanessa Reeds, is a very unique and magnificent woman who only deserves the best of what the word has to offer, and I'll keep telling it to you, until you believe it, too."

After Divorce, She Bloomed

After Divorce, She Bloomed

Fantasy · Paz9091

HeyKATO_1514
HeyKATO_1514
2 months ago
Commented

"her" not "here". Seems like the editor(s) is/are relying on spell-check. The problem with relying on spell-check is the words in error are spelled correctly. However, the correct words are not being used. The editor has to READ the material, as well as have a good understanding of English.

"Before she could finish, Ethan's cold voice interrupted her. "Serene," She froze upon hearing how serious he sounded. Не sounded nothing like the man who usually made love to here while whispering sweet nothings into her ear.

After Divorce, She Bloomed

After Divorce, She Bloomed

Fantasy · Paz9091

HeyKATO_1514
HeyKATO_1514
2 months ago
Commented

Delete "of"

"I'm pregnant?" The happiness of evident in her voice, which only grew at the thought of telling Ethan.

After Divorce, She Bloomed

After Divorce, She Bloomed

Fantasy · Paz9091

HeyKATO_1514
HeyKATO_1514
2 months ago
Commented

"sit" not "seat"

"How about you seat, I'll run some tests on you."

After Divorce, She Bloomed

After Divorce, She Bloomed

Fantasy · Paz9091

HeyKATO_1514
HeyKATO_1514
2 months ago
Commented

"her and Ethan" not "she and Ethan"

Serene was more than pleased with this, even becoming ecstatic at the thought of it belonging to she and Ethan soon.

After Divorce, She Bloomed

After Divorce, She Bloomed

Fantasy · Paz9091

HeyKATO_1514
HeyKATO_1514
2 months ago
Commented

"was" not "way"

Serene was taken aback, not only by the fact that Lorraine knew her name, but also because of how serious the aura around her way. "Y-you know?"

After Divorce, She Bloomed

After Divorce, She Bloomed

Fantasy · Paz9091

HeyKATO_1514
HeyKATO_1514
2 months ago
Commented

Should be "throughout" not "thorough"

Teacher Margaret was the teacher who taught most of the lessons for Aurora. She had great knowledge for these as she had been the tutor for many nobles thorough her life. Now that she was already in her fifties, she no longer took so many assignment. 

Villain Princess.

Villain Princess.

History · Sorahana