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dark of night and waxing moon come to us a single pool hear us sing our witches' song and send us moonlight clear and strong earth and water, wind and fire one and all you must conspire to banish bad for goodness sake cos I need moonshine for my cake weary travelers long ago shared their bread and made a vow that they will be forever friends and so shall be until time ends
Harem, protagonist basically has no choice in what he is doing. In the begging he can't feel emotions. I am out (didn't read further). Maybe it gets better later
still prefer the original book because it has more chapters and I think someone made a 1star review on this one with like a million acounts... like whaaaaa
Good story.................. Op but not too op........... World building is good.......... Character development is good except several son and daughter actually reincarnated anime character which bring out its previous life experience.
Giving it 5 stars to offset the 1 star other people give without even reading the whole story. Though I really thnk it should be 4 star or more. At the start, everything was still so random. Mc suddenly teleporting, even sometimes going through time etc. I even considered dropping this at some point. But the latter half of the story more than makes up for it. I love it when the mc uses loop holes in the system in order to make themselves stronger. It's also a refreshin take on multiversal travel as mc does not take wives from every world he visits, with the current number only being seven with little to no chance of adding more. The world portrayed by the author was also believable even though it's just fiction. Although it's more like a slice of life now in the later chapters with him just trying to resolve family problems amd travelling around universes, but hey, what can you do when you are already the strongest and growing more in the whole multiverse.
Based on what I’ve read so far, the book seems rushed. It focuses on adding more characters and worlds but not adding world building or details. It often feels mundane like for example, The Akame Ga Kill world. The MC just finds the “love of this world’s life,” and literally left it once he got what he came for in a short span.
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After reading this fanfic make me feel mc n his harem is unstable n some **** mind an all 😤 1st what they want and second later they f*** it all Cannt seem enjoy this one😡 So this one is not for me i guess
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I read the fanfiction one but I read this cause it's a rewrite I like the characters anyway I hope you keep updating till the end of the story
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I love that kind of novels because it's so lovely interesting you're never get bored I'm so excited 😍😘😍😘😍...............................
Well the grammar is good but what irritates me is the most of how so many parts of the story contradicts each other and when something is different no explanation is given. And the so called “gAmER sYsTEm” is no where near the system from the Manga the gamer it’s more of dating system for all it’s worth and the only similarities between it is the gamers body and mind. Atleast the updates is constant.
Really great book so far. It's a good twist of light gamer novels. The mc is more realistic of what people would really do giving the power of gaming system.
It's a nice fanfic. But all of this author mc have some problem. Like crippling depression, unstable mentality, etc. It's kinda weird seeing his mc but the story is nice along with the harem building.
I like I like I like I like i like I said i like I said I was wondering if you are not an intended recipient of the Emperor manga the same time as the first time in the morning of my favorite part of the most important thing in the world of the doctor
Really good story line. A different spin on other game element novels. More realistic in terms what a average person would do. Action, comedy, horror and many more tied into the novel.
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well this novel is fun enjoyed reading it💕 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻☝🏻☝🏻☝🏻☝🏻☝🏻☝🏻☝🏻☝🏻☝🏻☝🏻☝🏻☝🏻☝🏻☝🏻☝🏻☝🏻☝🏻☝🏻☝🏻
Basically its a good setting but ruined by Harem, Forced smut and basically every skill has a fucking plotholes. He can just sleep to get full health but he instead use his healing power on himself which he also describe that it can't be used on the user on earlier chapters. Like dude?WTF
dark of night and waxing moon come to us a single pool hear us sing our witches' song and send us moonlight clear and strong earth and water, wind and fire one and all you must conspire to banish bad for goodness sake cos I need moonshine for my cake weary travelers long ago shared their bread and made a vow that they will be forever friends and so shall be until time ends
Harem, protagonist basically has no choice in what he is doing. In the begging he can't feel emotions. I am out (didn't read further). Maybe it gets better later
still prefer the original book because it has more chapters and I think someone made a 1star review on this one with like a million acounts... like whaaaaa
Good story.................. Op but not too op........... World building is good.......... Character development is good except several son and daughter actually reincarnated anime character which bring out its previous life experience.
Giving it 5 stars to offset the 1 star other people give without even reading the whole story. Though I really thnk it should be 4 star or more. At the start, everything was still so random. Mc suddenly teleporting, even sometimes going through time etc. I even considered dropping this at some point. But the latter half of the story more than makes up for it. I love it when the mc uses loop holes in the system in order to make themselves stronger. It's also a refreshin take on multiversal travel as mc does not take wives from every world he visits, with the current number only being seven with little to no chance of adding more. The world portrayed by the author was also believable even though it's just fiction. Although it's more like a slice of life now in the later chapters with him just trying to resolve family problems amd travelling around universes, but hey, what can you do when you are already the strongest and growing more in the whole multiverse.
Based on what I’ve read so far, the book seems rushed. It focuses on adding more characters and worlds but not adding world building or details. It often feels mundane like for example, The Akame Ga Kill world. The MC just finds the “love of this world’s life,” and literally left it once he got what he came for in a short span.
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
After reading this fanfic make me feel mc n his harem is unstable n some **** mind an all 😤 1st what they want and second later they f*** it all Cannt seem enjoy this one😡 So this one is not for me i guess
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I read the fanfiction one but I read this cause it's a rewrite I like the characters anyway I hope you keep updating till the end of the story
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Not bad.............................................................. Not bad..............................................................
I love that kind of novels because it's so lovely interesting you're never get bored I'm so excited 😍😘😍😘😍...............................
Well the grammar is good but what irritates me is the most of how so many parts of the story contradicts each other and when something is different no explanation is given. And the so called “gAmER sYsTEm” is no where near the system from the Manga the gamer it’s more of dating system for all it’s worth and the only similarities between it is the gamers body and mind. Atleast the updates is constant.
Really great book so far. It's a good twist of light gamer novels. The mc is more realistic of what people would really do giving the power of gaming system.
It's a nice fanfic. But all of this author mc have some problem. Like crippling depression, unstable mentality, etc. It's kinda weird seeing his mc but the story is nice along with the harem building.
I like I like I like I like i like I said i like I said I was wondering if you are not an intended recipient of the Emperor manga the same time as the first time in the morning of my favorite part of the most important thing in the world of the doctor
Really good story line. A different spin on other game element novels. More realistic in terms what a average person would do. Action, comedy, horror and many more tied into the novel.
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Basically its a good setting but ruined by Harem, Forced smut and basically every skill has a fucking plotholes. He can just sleep to get full health but he instead use his healing power on himself which he also describe that it can't be used on the user on earlier chapters. Like dude?WTF