ARIFURETA: The Otherworldly Alchemist

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Granville4554

This story is really well written and the flow is pretty good. It's an interesting story i would recommend. Writing quality was really good. The background was set up nicely. The development did kind of become a typical shounen troupe after a while but main character was interesting enough to keep me committed to finishing the story. All in all, it's a story I'd say you should definitely give this story a shot!

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Primordiales

57 chapters and we still don't see the protagonist's progress, the story is boring and smooth from chapter 37 onwards it's almost a copy of the canon just that with another character the very disappointing truth ..

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DaoistJXYJcm

I like interesting story the character can stay with yue and not harem please or very little maybe just two and you could give him powers of alchemists from other anime thanks keep up the good work

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BulletHell_Newb

Full disclosure, I have only read up to chapter 55. The grammar /writing quality is pretty good, to be honest really high by this sites standards. Updates also seem to be pretty stable and chapters are of a decent length each so no problems there for me. Start development, now this hurts to say ok, but as far as I have read most of the story is just a revthread of arifureta with a somewhat different mc with different powers. Most scenes aren't original, though the few that are are done decently. This is just like that avenger arifureta fan fic as in they both follow the original scene by scene, though the avengers one even more so than this one. If you haven't read arifureta then it should be enjoyable, but if you have it's like re reading that book all over again just with it being less edgy. I wish things were more original, I really do, but to add on yo that the mc seems to be weaker than what the original Hagime was at the point of the story I stopped at with the intro of Teo. The mc has such an amazing ability with his alchemy but it is barely explored at all, how the he'll is he a researcher?,he has barely even scratched the surface if what could be done, but he just calls it a day... Mc isn't too smart or dumb, he kind of leans both ways though more towards dumb for comedic purposes. Also I just hope that the adopted daughter and her mother from the original book don't have anything to do with the mc, like whyyyy would he adopt some girl and get into a relationship with her extremely normal mother. If you want cuteness get a pet instead of a daughter that isn't actually yours and a mother who hascexperience with someone else. That was one of the things that stumped and annoyed me the most in the original and I hope it doesn't happen here again. Also, the stat/skill plate exists, the author seems to try to make you forget about it since the last time the mc s srats were shown was like chapter 10 and I'm on chapter 55. It's not that hard ok, just summarise reasonable stats and skills, what's so hard about it? Still salty that the mc is weaker than the original arifureta mc. Character design is OK since most of the characters are copy pasted from arifurets since it's a fanfic Same with world background. Could have been so much better if the author took some creative liberty, rather than going scene by scene after the original. Why does this have to keep happening with every arifureta fic. I feel like this isn't made for arifureta fans, the more you know about the original the less you like this since it's just too similar, I came to read a fanfic not a rewrite with a slightly different mc, but you know what I got. Too bad, hahhh

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Sirrow

Ugh i am very disapointet in the story there is no status plate that let you see the progress of the mc and there is no monster meat that gives you monstrus boost in stats and a mana manipulation skill that is nedet for the things that the mc can do but he schouldn‘t have like the mana hands for transmutation ect the story progress is ….. eh yea i don‘t want to talk about it and mc armor…. He is an f…… alchemyst not a warior why does he need cringe as f.c. Armor something akin too haijmes or something alike would be good but no !!! This was very very disapointing he ist even using the full potential of transmutation ect he could macke explosion potion magic guns ect but he needs mana manipulation a skill that can only be atained by eting a monster …..

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Theboneofmysword

Nice fic in general. Stable update schedule and a good story plot line. As well as the different alchemic powers and ideas the mc has and I like his character quite a lot- not as edgy as most webnovel mcs

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Boroxx

The idea for the story is great. But sadly the mc ruins it all for me, interesting concept with alchemy however the author utilizes it in a way that keeps the mc as weak as possible. The original novel had a mc with strong power and a strong mind who literaly carried the entire world to victory against the evil god. While this mc is the opposite, weak of will, redicilously low strength with almost zero improvements over the course of the novel and just plain stupid as the author makes him so. Everything Hajime breezed through while having a much worse start than our mc is a deathly experience for the mc to the point where even a small group of ordinary soldiers takes a great amount of fanfare and consumeables to beat. Simply put this ff is the same as the original but with a weak and stupid mc. Only read for those who like novels where the mc is carried by sidecharacters and stays weak and stupid for like 100 chapters with zero development

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schizocat

Interesting premise, hopefully the Alchemy ability will be similar to the one in FMA. Other than that, the spellings need some work, the "Alcehmist" in the title is misspelled

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Zizozero

very good one of the best Arifureta fanfictions in my opinion

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nayonayo

Logical, not contrived, and I don’t feel like it’s getting out of hand in anyway like the author lost the pace of the novel and it’s either going to fast or to slow. The only thing I want more of is epic action scenes and downright despairing hail Mary levels of leaps of faith because I wanna see some huge epic surprising transmutations done the behemoth had some of it but not enough Oh yeah pain he needs to get hurt in someways you can’t expect him to just flawless the whole thing. Actually losing might be good character growth he has taken what he would consider a W in every fight or altercation. A Lot of authors miss that and just go for plot armor instead.

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Frog_God_Mentor

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

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access11

amazing its one of the best I've read with cool and innovative powers and an amazing non perfect NC. Also the cover picture is amazing. .

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Crystal_Cat

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creatorGod

honestly its a very good novel tho i put 5 star update time in hopes that the author updates more he has or she has a very interesting concept and story thats well written id love to read it more often

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enheDwerdnA

I will say this is the thing I'm looking forward to updating the most on this site. Mostly because you do such a great job at meshing alchemy into the world, and because alchemists are one of my favorite fantasy settings.

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Lao_Stev

Best Arifureta fanfic I have ever read.

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CaveSquirrel

One of the best arifureta fanfiction in this platform. Would read again if I have time, even if it is a little slow-paced. And it's already about to finish.

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Elysiae

This fanfic really good! This fanfic suit my taste! The story development really interesting for me. Mc character really uniq(idk what to describe mc personality but his personality really uniq for me). And the update is stable. Welp Idk why people keep complain about harem and follow the original story where I keep saw when I reading this fanfic. huh this is fanfic that base on anime arifureta and this is not orginal novel. Author just write this fanfic for fun.

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lapis

Read till Chapter 38. Writing quality - 5/5 - Great writing quality. Story Development - 4/5 - Great development at the beginning, like it upto the part where MC fakes his death to enter Orcus dungeon. After that, found the story to be a bit stagnant but still good enough. Felt that MC never took inspiration from animes that he had watched. Could have tried flame alchemy like Roy Mustang from FMA. Otherwise, imo, this FF is much better than majority arifureta ffs on this website/app. Character Design - 4/5 - MC seems obsessed with alchemy in general and creating life in particular. I am unsure whether he ever remembered the first assistant he had (the OC maid) after he entered the dungeon. He thought of that maid as his 1st friend ever, so hope there is development there, like last I read it was mentioned that she wanted to avenge MC by killing Hiyama but the empire was keeping tabs on her and then after some more than 10 chapters it's all about MC in dungeon. Would have been great if interludes about what's happening outside would be a bit regular (like after every 5 or 10 chapters). Updating Stability - 5/5 - Great updating Stability. World Background - 5/5 - For me Arifureta is one of the best isekai anime/webnovel as it was the first harem fic that ended with MC having married his women. This, have happy memories related to this and given 5/5. Overall - 4.6/5.0 - I find the buildup of this FF to be interesting and will continue reading further. Keep up the great work author 👍.