Reviews of A Strawberry Hidden in the Leaves by Demigod_Patronus - Webnovel

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Little_El

Bro! This fanfiction is great! I loved the fact that the beginning is different from other SI fanfics, we didn't have to hang around reading about a baby who's just been born. Ichigo is realistically OP and that's great. I love his attachment to Sakura. I hope the author will continue the story.

8mth
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Humbuub

aside from the monthly updates everything is

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AGreatSage

Author have you dropped this story? awaiting for updates

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Trollface

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1yr
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Enziii

awesome fanfic, its a refreshing read since we actually follow the perspective of other characters, not the mc

1yr
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Mohamedk123

Not for me can be for others I fine something just annoying or things that just not enough info at least for me to really like it but I see why other would ( and Before and say I am just Sakura hater I will like say belive what u believe)

1yr
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MasherDon

Good original work. Especially the storytelling style. Good luck author. Thank you for your hard work. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Feebling

Even if the story is interesting, I can't really like it because there is no stability of updates whatsoever And it will end up dropped on hiatus for year or something again. Author has bad-rep

1yr
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AuroraFlower30303

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1yr
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K_Lemon
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I like the way the story is structured, and all the POVs we get to see. It's a unique storyline and I am excited to see more.

1yr
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MAJESTY1

like how the perspective was different from the normal perspective .......keeps it interesting and letting us know how people see and interact with the Mc πŸ”₯ [img=update][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move]

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AinzO0alGown

The taste of miniature strawberry is great They grow in the mountains/valley where my grandma lives yum yum

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typicalanimewatchr

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2yr
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Bullshitter

I have read my fair share of Naruto fan fictions but this definitely at the top of my list. I definitely was sleeping on it . Loved every second reading it.

2yr
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demigod0414

A good move with inserts from of view of all other characters.This is first time I've seen this.Thank you.

2yr
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aragis

awesome...............................................................................................................................................................................................................I hope story does not ignore prophecy about naruto-same time mc doesnt totally count on in.

2yr
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True_Vanity

It’s an actually good read, WOW πŸ₯³ ………………………………………………………

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PurpleMuse

Update more please.

2yr
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Capivara_Brasil

I had never read an ff like this, I really liked the only problem and updates but the author has his bills to pay so I'm going to pass the cloth. (Google translator)

2yr
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PurpleMuse

Please continue this It’s good.

2yr
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Edu_6182

............................................................................................ so amazing ................................................................

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skiptail

Everything about this fanfic is great! To the perfect sentence structuring and grammar, the author’s understanding on the og characters of the series, the well thought out plot and its progression will surely make you unable to stop reading it just like I did. The chapters aren’t short too but the author is still able to keep the quality of the chapters impeccable and enjoyable to read. Even at this early stage of this fanfic I can confidently say this will be a top notch naruto fanfic as long as author continue the fanfic on a similar pace and development. Lastly thanks for making such a great fanfic author-san!!!!

2yr
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ghost_kuro

PLEASE DON'T WRITE A HAREM. PLEASE DON'T WRITE A HAREM. PLEASE DON'T WRITE A HAREM. PLEASE DON'T WRITE A HAREM. PLEASE DON'T WRITE A HAREM.

2yr
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Heavenlynigga

Excellent, this story is a rare gem within a sea of terrible wish fullfillment naruto fanfics. The story is well thought out and the pacing is perfect. it probably wont have a harem too so its a plus for people who hate harem , the downside is that the update time is slow since the author aint a bum KEKW

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lovemeganegals

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2yr
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shanks30_

Hey man, please update this story regularly. When is the next chapter releasing........,......,........... ...........,.......,..........................................

2yr
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AdamNovel

Best Sakura I’ve ever read in a fanfic. Love the MC/OC and his team. Love oc/Mc being a swordsmen and training Sakura and Ino shows he cares more for sister that he even helped with her friendship with her. Just really enjoy this fanfic. Great job to the creator and highly recommended to any readers.

2yr
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SSan1212

love to see some quality content in this platform. love your work. 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

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no_sleep

I only read 3 chapters of the ff while the writing quality is phenomenal. The entirety of it is written from others perspective with no explanation on how the mc got to be the way he was or any of his motivations to do literally anything. Also there are minor plot holes in the story that don’t really get explained other than it being part of the butterfly effect. While I didn’t enjoy reading it I would still recommend others to due so.

2yr
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Little_El

Bro! This fanfiction is great! I loved the fact that the beginning is different from other SI fanfics, we didn't have to hang around reading about a baby who's just been born. Ichigo is realistically OP and that's great. I love his attachment to Sakura. I hope the author will continue the story.

8mth
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Humbuub

aside from the monthly updates everything is

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1yr
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AGreatSage

Author have you dropped this story? awaiting for updates

1yr
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Trollface

Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo

1yr
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Enziii

awesome fanfic, its a refreshing read since we actually follow the perspective of other characters, not the mc

1yr
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Mohamedk123

Not for me can be for others I fine something just annoying or things that just not enough info at least for me to really like it but I see why other would ( and Before and say I am just Sakura hater I will like say belive what u believe)

1yr
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MasherDon

Good original work. Especially the storytelling style. Good luck author. Thank you for your hard work. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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1yr
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Feebling

Even if the story is interesting, I can't really like it because there is no stability of updates whatsoever And it will end up dropped on hiatus for year or something again. Author has bad-rep

1yr
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AuroraFlower30303

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1yr
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K_Lemon
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I like the way the story is structured, and all the POVs we get to see. It's a unique storyline and I am excited to see more.

1yr
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MAJESTY1

like how the perspective was different from the normal perspective .......keeps it interesting and letting us know how people see and interact with the Mc πŸ”₯ [img=update][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move]

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1yr
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AinzO0alGown

The taste of miniature strawberry is great They grow in the mountains/valley where my grandma lives yum yum

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1yr
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typicalanimewatchr

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2yr
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Bullshitter

I have read my fair share of Naruto fan fictions but this definitely at the top of my list. I definitely was sleeping on it . Loved every second reading it.

2yr
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demigod0414

A good move with inserts from of view of all other characters.This is first time I've seen this.Thank you.

2yr
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aragis

awesome...............................................................................................................................................................................................................I hope story does not ignore prophecy about naruto-same time mc doesnt totally count on in.

2yr
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True_Vanity

It’s an actually good read, WOW πŸ₯³ ………………………………………………………

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2yr
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PurpleMuse

Update more please.

2yr
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Capivara_Brasil

I had never read an ff like this, I really liked the only problem and updates but the author has his bills to pay so I'm going to pass the cloth. (Google translator)

2yr
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PurpleMuse

Please continue this It’s good.

2yr
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Edu_6182

............................................................................................ so amazing ................................................................

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2yr
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skiptail

Everything about this fanfic is great! To the perfect sentence structuring and grammar, the author’s understanding on the og characters of the series, the well thought out plot and its progression will surely make you unable to stop reading it just like I did. The chapters aren’t short too but the author is still able to keep the quality of the chapters impeccable and enjoyable to read. Even at this early stage of this fanfic I can confidently say this will be a top notch naruto fanfic as long as author continue the fanfic on a similar pace and development. Lastly thanks for making such a great fanfic author-san!!!!

2yr
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ghost_kuro

PLEASE DON'T WRITE A HAREM. PLEASE DON'T WRITE A HAREM. PLEASE DON'T WRITE A HAREM. PLEASE DON'T WRITE A HAREM. PLEASE DON'T WRITE A HAREM.

2yr
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Heavenlynigga

Excellent, this story is a rare gem within a sea of terrible wish fullfillment naruto fanfics. The story is well thought out and the pacing is perfect. it probably wont have a harem too so its a plus for people who hate harem , the downside is that the update time is slow since the author aint a bum KEKW

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2yr
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lovemeganegals

HAREM PLS , HAREM PLS , HAREM PLS , HAREM PLS , HAREM PLS , HAREM PLS , HAREM PLS , HAREM PLS , HAREM PLS , HAREM PLS , HAREM PLS , HAREM PLS , HAREM PLS , HAREM PLS , HAREM PLS , HAREM PLS , HAREM PLS , HAREM PLS ,

2yr
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shanks30_

Hey man, please update this story regularly. When is the next chapter releasing........,......,........... ...........,.......,..........................................

2yr
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AdamNovel

Best Sakura I’ve ever read in a fanfic. Love the MC/OC and his team. Love oc/Mc being a swordsmen and training Sakura and Ino shows he cares more for sister that he even helped with her friendship with her. Just really enjoy this fanfic. Great job to the creator and highly recommended to any readers.

2yr
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SSan1212

love to see some quality content in this platform. love your work. 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

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no_sleep

I only read 3 chapters of the ff while the writing quality is phenomenal. The entirety of it is written from others perspective with no explanation on how the mc got to be the way he was or any of his motivations to do literally anything. Also there are minor plot holes in the story that don’t really get explained other than it being part of the butterfly effect. While I didn’t enjoy reading it I would still recommend others to due so.

2yr
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