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Write a reviewit's a good system story, but the facted the author just ended the story and didn't complete it is a waste of time. Don't read u will be mad and disappointed at wasting so many resources on a incomplete story.
Estoy viendo muchas reseñas de gente que critica esta obra como aburrida o genérica, sin embargo, tiene muchas vistas y gente leyéndola, estoy pensando si leérmela y no sé si fiarme de los datos o de los comentarios, leeré los 100 primeros capítulos y decidiré.
it's great seriously why are people reviewing only to say useless words, I read the comic first.
This story really sucks, MC lacks personally and gets boring as you read further, don't waste your time with this.
This novel is terrible. I read more than 100 chapters but I don't understand half of the story. The author is constantly throwing out new information, but this is only half information. The main character has zero character development. The main character's IQ level does not reach that of an average person, and despite the fact that he said that after his father's accident he is no longer a frivolous child but an adult, I still don't see that. He doesn't use cheating properly and always gets very lucky because the author can't solve the character's progress any other way. Not to mention the fact that once the novel says that the character would be outstanding in one thing (in this case, defensive skills), then in the next chapter he can describe that he wants to be outstanding in everything, be it attack or defense, etc. In summary: The progress of the story is slow for me, the important information of the story cannot be understood because we only get half information and the author rushes over it or we don't even get the important information, the character has a personality disorder and IQ=0 person which greatly impairs the experience. However, the cheating system and the energy thing are not so bad, there would be potential in this.
This is absolute rubbish, I regret wasting my time reading this until now. Lots of loopholes, stupid character development, good material but Chinese-style welded garbage.
Honestly, this story do be kinda mid, as in it's not especially outstanding or anything of the like. However, I wouldn't say that it's trash or even all that bad. There are several screw ups on grammar here and there, but I don't personally feel like it's all that terrible. The world building in terms of explaining why things are the way they are definitely could've been improved upon. The story is slow in some places. MC is kind of an idiot in using the system efficiently, but I still think it's a decent story overall. Also, when there's sections where the words are stuck together, I'm not quite sure of the reason for it. Because if you find a section that they're stuck together on and pull up the paragraph comments for that section, they're not stuck together in the header. Just thought I'd throw that out there cuz there's a bunch of people who had complained about it.
No se porque Hay personas que se quejan. Creo que las personas que han dejalo malas críticas ni siquiera han leído una historia china de mala calidad general. Pero definitivamente está novela no es mala es bastante decente. Tu el que Lee este comentario no hagas caso a los demás tu sigue con la historia.
after around chapter 200 story gets confusing and such a chore to read. i still tried pushing through and got to chapter 270+ but with no change and dropped it. thanks author!
Really good story. Quality of the writing itself is good. It's often difficult to follow along and get into it because it's so freaking wordy. It'll explain the same thing a dozen times in a row. Half a chapter explaining something that should've only taken 2-3 sentences. So frustrating
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was good for its time. Don't hype it, don't hate it. it was one of the early novels i read as a kid. it was very fun back then. Although it feels lacking now that i have read too many novel. its like a childhood crush, seems foolish now, however it was Fun.
are you kidding me ? the mc wants to have a backer yet every chance he gets he ignores it . after upgrading the system into his consciousness what else is he afraid of. is he stupid? every decision he makes is more stupid than the one before. i at least want a reason for him to hide his power a good reason
the story is not that good the mc doesn't have any reason to hide his power he only needs to hide his cheat and there is so many useless information
This is a real review rather than rating 1 star because they are mad, and not 5 star, because it isn't a 5 star novel. If you enjoy system novels you will like this for sure. This is one of those "op mc" novels where basically the whole novel is about the mc getting op skills and abilities, having plot armor and so on... But that is literally the point. Did you read an op mc with a system novel expecting "the novel's extra" or similar novel quality? This is not for everyone, but anyone rating this less than 3 star is biased against op mc novels. This is the truth: This novel is really enjoyable for anyone that enjoys anything similar to Reincarnation of the strongest sword god to around chapter 400, after that it goes down hill fast. This is because the author stops focusing on the thing that made the novel enjoyable in the first place: op mc and cool skills, and instead focused on boring characters that will stop mattering in a 50 chapters. TL:DR People are not comparing this to similar novels, but are rating it 1* because they don't want it to be rated high.
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The novel's not finished. The whole novel is like a mashup of 3 different stories to be honest with it. A blade runner style first arc, then the second arc that sounds like the matrix, and the third arc of, I don't know what the third arc was suppose to be cause it's not a finished book. Sad
Honestly it was quite good for the first 400 chapters or so then it turned bad, the plot completely got destroyed and the story basically had no relation to the other parts. The power levels didn't make sense either after chapter 500 or so.
i dont understand how this is so popular.its one of those stories that you gotta turn your brain of to enjoy and it isn't even that good at best it's mid.
I'm reading purely because of how many negative reviews vs how many views this story has. Even if I have to suffer, I'll get to chapter 40-50 and let yall know.
I really like this kind of novel :P Anyone on here have any recommendations for similar afk-ish farming style? Typing a bit more just to post..
I regret it, but I stuck through around 600 chapters before I couldn't bother attempting to stomach the mediocre story and characters. After chapter 500 it becomes an actual chore to try and keep up with the inconsistencies present in every sentence. It's meh at best and just headache inducing at worst.
Reveal SpoilerI Don't know I jast like thes kind of story so much for my 5 ⭐ please if you also have the kind of story novel please tall ma🥺..............
the character is completely stupid it says he is a normal and ordinary kid but his dad is a highish rank in the military he is sweethearts with a goddess beauty can fully awaken after killing a few bugs acts all high and mighty after someone says something to him is looked down by people after his dad's leg problem all of this is from the frist 5ish chapters
translation is fine, the author appears to have dementia as they forget their own story, as they tend to change things or just forget about things they write about earlier in the story. It's clear the author is an amateur as they don't appear to keep notes on their own creation.
it's a good system story, but the facted the author just ended the story and didn't complete it is a waste of time. Don't read u will be mad and disappointed at wasting so many resources on a incomplete story.
Estoy viendo muchas reseñas de gente que critica esta obra como aburrida o genérica, sin embargo, tiene muchas vistas y gente leyéndola, estoy pensando si leérmela y no sé si fiarme de los datos o de los comentarios, leeré los 100 primeros capítulos y decidiré.
it's great seriously why are people reviewing only to say useless words, I read the comic first.
This story really sucks, MC lacks personally and gets boring as you read further, don't waste your time with this.
This novel is terrible. I read more than 100 chapters but I don't understand half of the story. The author is constantly throwing out new information, but this is only half information. The main character has zero character development. The main character's IQ level does not reach that of an average person, and despite the fact that he said that after his father's accident he is no longer a frivolous child but an adult, I still don't see that. He doesn't use cheating properly and always gets very lucky because the author can't solve the character's progress any other way. Not to mention the fact that once the novel says that the character would be outstanding in one thing (in this case, defensive skills), then in the next chapter he can describe that he wants to be outstanding in everything, be it attack or defense, etc. In summary: The progress of the story is slow for me, the important information of the story cannot be understood because we only get half information and the author rushes over it or we don't even get the important information, the character has a personality disorder and IQ=0 person which greatly impairs the experience. However, the cheating system and the energy thing are not so bad, there would be potential in this.
This is absolute rubbish, I regret wasting my time reading this until now. Lots of loopholes, stupid character development, good material but Chinese-style welded garbage.
Honestly, this story do be kinda mid, as in it's not especially outstanding or anything of the like. However, I wouldn't say that it's trash or even all that bad. There are several screw ups on grammar here and there, but I don't personally feel like it's all that terrible. The world building in terms of explaining why things are the way they are definitely could've been improved upon. The story is slow in some places. MC is kind of an idiot in using the system efficiently, but I still think it's a decent story overall. Also, when there's sections where the words are stuck together, I'm not quite sure of the reason for it. Because if you find a section that they're stuck together on and pull up the paragraph comments for that section, they're not stuck together in the header. Just thought I'd throw that out there cuz there's a bunch of people who had complained about it.
No se porque Hay personas que se quejan. Creo que las personas que han dejalo malas críticas ni siquiera han leído una historia china de mala calidad general. Pero definitivamente está novela no es mala es bastante decente. Tu el que Lee este comentario no hagas caso a los demás tu sigue con la historia.
after around chapter 200 story gets confusing and such a chore to read. i still tried pushing through and got to chapter 270+ but with no change and dropped it. thanks author!
Really good story. Quality of the writing itself is good. It's often difficult to follow along and get into it because it's so freaking wordy. It'll explain the same thing a dozen times in a row. Half a chapter explaining something that should've only taken 2-3 sentences. So frustrating
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I strongly recommend HACKMART to any one with credit issues. I spent 3 years looking for a legit credit repair company. Not until last few months I saw a review about HACKMART with their excellent work. I inbox them through email HACKMART 242@GMAIL .COM which they listened to my complains. Few days later my credit score was finally fixed, I can now apply for a fresh loan. Thanks guys. WWW. HACKMART. ORG
was good for its time. Don't hype it, don't hate it. it was one of the early novels i read as a kid. it was very fun back then. Although it feels lacking now that i have read too many novel. its like a childhood crush, seems foolish now, however it was Fun.
are you kidding me ? the mc wants to have a backer yet every chance he gets he ignores it . after upgrading the system into his consciousness what else is he afraid of. is he stupid? every decision he makes is more stupid than the one before. i at least want a reason for him to hide his power a good reason
the story is not that good the mc doesn't have any reason to hide his power he only needs to hide his cheat and there is so many useless information
This is a real review rather than rating 1 star because they are mad, and not 5 star, because it isn't a 5 star novel. If you enjoy system novels you will like this for sure. This is one of those "op mc" novels where basically the whole novel is about the mc getting op skills and abilities, having plot armor and so on... But that is literally the point. Did you read an op mc with a system novel expecting "the novel's extra" or similar novel quality? This is not for everyone, but anyone rating this less than 3 star is biased against op mc novels. This is the truth: This novel is really enjoyable for anyone that enjoys anything similar to Reincarnation of the strongest sword god to around chapter 400, after that it goes down hill fast. This is because the author stops focusing on the thing that made the novel enjoyable in the first place: op mc and cool skills, and instead focused on boring characters that will stop mattering in a 50 chapters. TL:DR People are not comparing this to similar novels, but are rating it 1* because they don't want it to be rated high.
Good job! Continue in the same spirit. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
The novel's not finished. The whole novel is like a mashup of 3 different stories to be honest with it. A blade runner style first arc, then the second arc that sounds like the matrix, and the third arc of, I don't know what the third arc was suppose to be cause it's not a finished book. Sad
Honestly it was quite good for the first 400 chapters or so then it turned bad, the plot completely got destroyed and the story basically had no relation to the other parts. The power levels didn't make sense either after chapter 500 or so.
i dont understand how this is so popular.its one of those stories that you gotta turn your brain of to enjoy and it isn't even that good at best it's mid.
I'm reading purely because of how many negative reviews vs how many views this story has. Even if I have to suffer, I'll get to chapter 40-50 and let yall know.
I really like this kind of novel :P Anyone on here have any recommendations for similar afk-ish farming style? Typing a bit more just to post..
I regret it, but I stuck through around 600 chapters before I couldn't bother attempting to stomach the mediocre story and characters. After chapter 500 it becomes an actual chore to try and keep up with the inconsistencies present in every sentence. It's meh at best and just headache inducing at worst.
Reveal SpoilerI Don't know I jast like thes kind of story so much for my 5 ⭐ please if you also have the kind of story novel please tall ma🥺..............
the character is completely stupid it says he is a normal and ordinary kid but his dad is a highish rank in the military he is sweethearts with a goddess beauty can fully awaken after killing a few bugs acts all high and mighty after someone says something to him is looked down by people after his dad's leg problem all of this is from the frist 5ish chapters
translation is fine, the author appears to have dementia as they forget their own story, as they tend to change things or just forget about things they write about earlier in the story. It's clear the author is an amateur as they don't appear to keep notes on their own creation.