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Amazing story even better then the last you should definitely give it a try and I hope he doesn’t drop it
Authors works are always good just hope he finishes this one. I like this one a little more than the Dr Doom fic and a lit less than the wonderer fic.
Haven’t started yet, i will update this if it’s bad,if it stays as five stars then it’s good(hopefully the author doesn’t drop this mid way like the rest of his works)
MYSTERY, YOU FALSE PROPHET, YOU GIVE US SACRED TEXT TO STUDY THEN LEAVE THEM UNFINISHED. PROMISES OF VERDANT VALLEYS AND CLEAR WATER LEFT UNFILLED. YET YOU RETURN AGAIN AND EXPECT US TO FOLLOW. YOU WILL LEAD US TO AN OASIS, BUT THE WATER WILL DRY AND SAND WILL COVER THE ONCE GREEN GRASS. I HAVE FOLLOWED YOUR MANY CAMPAIGNS AND I WILL FOLLOW THIS ONE AS WELL, KNOW MY RAGE FOR YOU, KNOW MY ANGUISH, KNOW MY TEARS. KNOW THAT WHEN YOU LEAVE, I HAVE STAYED WAITING, HOPPING, PRAYING, KNOW THAT MY HEART IS JADED BY YOUR HAND. YET I WILL FOLLOW, NOT BY DUTY, NOT BY LOVE, NOT BY HOPE, BUT BY THE SHEER PERSISTENCE. I WILL FOLLOW TILL YOUR LEGS GIVE AND THE BEAST CONSUME YOUR FLESH. I WILL FOLLOW WHILE THE SUN BLEACHES YOUR BONES. I WILL FOLLOW AS YOU LEAD ME TO HELL. I WILL FOLLOW AS MY BODY IS LACERATED. I WILL FOLLOW. I KNOW THE NATURE OF THIS SISYPHEAN TASK, BUT I WILL UNDERTAKE IT ONCE MORE AND I WILL ENJOY EVERY STEP. LEAD ME FALSE PROPHET. LEAD ME TO THE VERY END. LEAD ME TILL THE WORLD IS DUST, AND THE VERY STARS ARE NOT BUT ASH. I WILL WALK THROUGH YOUR DEAD WORLDS AND SMILE AT THE BODIES OF THE DEAD, FOR I SHALL REMEMBER WHAT ONCE WAS, WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN, I WILL REMEMBER MY FELLOW SOLDIERS WHO MARCHED UNDER YOUR BANNER. THEY MAY LEAVE BUT I WILL STAY. I WILL STAY TO RECORD YOUR SINS, AND TO REMEMBER THE LOST. LEAD FORWARD FALSE PROPHET AND KNOW I WATCH EACH AND EVERY STEP
Reveal Spoiler
Author here! This is my new fanfic that follows the same concept as my last, only with mythology now rather than anime characters. (As well as far better and skilled writing) The first few chapters may seem slow, but the pacing improves and it dives into the big plot pretty quickly. So enjoy! (I’ll answer any questions you ask below)
Amazing story even better then the last you should definitely give it a try and I hope he doesn’t drop it
Authors works are always good just hope he finishes this one. I like this one a little more than the Dr Doom fic and a lit less than the wonderer fic.
Haven’t started yet, i will update this if it’s bad,if it stays as five stars then it’s good(hopefully the author doesn’t drop this mid way like the rest of his works)
MYSTERY, YOU FALSE PROPHET, YOU GIVE US SACRED TEXT TO STUDY THEN LEAVE THEM UNFINISHED. PROMISES OF VERDANT VALLEYS AND CLEAR WATER LEFT UNFILLED. YET YOU RETURN AGAIN AND EXPECT US TO FOLLOW. YOU WILL LEAD US TO AN OASIS, BUT THE WATER WILL DRY AND SAND WILL COVER THE ONCE GREEN GRASS. I HAVE FOLLOWED YOUR MANY CAMPAIGNS AND I WILL FOLLOW THIS ONE AS WELL, KNOW MY RAGE FOR YOU, KNOW MY ANGUISH, KNOW MY TEARS. KNOW THAT WHEN YOU LEAVE, I HAVE STAYED WAITING, HOPPING, PRAYING, KNOW THAT MY HEART IS JADED BY YOUR HAND. YET I WILL FOLLOW, NOT BY DUTY, NOT BY LOVE, NOT BY HOPE, BUT BY THE SHEER PERSISTENCE. I WILL FOLLOW TILL YOUR LEGS GIVE AND THE BEAST CONSUME YOUR FLESH. I WILL FOLLOW WHILE THE SUN BLEACHES YOUR BONES. I WILL FOLLOW AS YOU LEAD ME TO HELL. I WILL FOLLOW AS MY BODY IS LACERATED. I WILL FOLLOW. I KNOW THE NATURE OF THIS SISYPHEAN TASK, BUT I WILL UNDERTAKE IT ONCE MORE AND I WILL ENJOY EVERY STEP. LEAD ME FALSE PROPHET. LEAD ME TO THE VERY END. LEAD ME TILL THE WORLD IS DUST, AND THE VERY STARS ARE NOT BUT ASH. I WILL WALK THROUGH YOUR DEAD WORLDS AND SMILE AT THE BODIES OF THE DEAD, FOR I SHALL REMEMBER WHAT ONCE WAS, WHAT COULD HAVE BEEN, I WILL REMEMBER MY FELLOW SOLDIERS WHO MARCHED UNDER YOUR BANNER. THEY MAY LEAVE BUT I WILL STAY. I WILL STAY TO RECORD YOUR SINS, AND TO REMEMBER THE LOST. LEAD FORWARD FALSE PROPHET AND KNOW I WATCH EACH AND EVERY STEP
Reveal Spoiler
Author here! This is my new fanfic that follows the same concept as my last, only with mythology now rather than anime characters. (As well as far better and skilled writing) The first few chapters may seem slow, but the pacing improves and it dives into the big plot pretty quickly. So enjoy! (I’ll answer any questions you ask below)