keep working hard, I don't mean to diss you, creating is hard work takes time and practice
I guess to start it off the bolding of character names makes it seem like it was ai generated, You made toji into a perfect character with no flaws, flawless characters can exist, but they are hard to write. next off there is a lot of exposition, which isn't a bad thing, you just haven't had and work shown in the novel, you said toji trained, but you never described what he did or how he did it. The entire story feels more like a summary of a story than an actual story
The entire story feels rushed and practically screams ai generated
Thanks for the chapter
COME BACK AUTHOR YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME AGAIN
Ignore the haters continue to cook author
why no update? 😭
I don't think it actually says what his character is
In the next second, Isaac squeezed. Simultaneously, Marshall dropped to the ground, his neck turned in an unnatural direction.
A Wanderer's Lies
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come back, perfect time to capitalize on black myth wukong
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original The Time Of Adventure
I keep seeing abunch of adventure time jjk art and this book is heavily inspired by them. expect brainrot of the finest caliber and infrequent updates so far apart you think I left to get milk PS there will be a Yandere or two but that's because they are peak fiction I'll try to release 3 chapters a week at least 1 Enjoy3 Chs 1 Collections
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I Want Powers Too (Dropped)
Mc reborn into ATLA (Avatar The Last Airbender) and doesn't get bending, so he tries his best to survive.15 Chs 199 Collections
I'm pretty sure it was added only to nerf Naruto
Sage Mode, something that all of the children within the top 5 of the Brotherhood had mastered already. The Number 4 Assassin's strength reached an entirely new level, going far above those achievable by normal humans.
Naruto: The Blind Swordsman
Anime & Comics · VeganMaster