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I normally don't read first person novels but this one was entertaining. The writing quality is top notch and flowing. I have read a similar story to this before where an author gets transmigrated into their novel but I didn't follow through with it like this one. I can't say much about the characters. Main character feels like....The main character! Overall pretty good book, would totally recommend
Very good pacing nice characters and of course tropes, well planned so far, expecting more to come soon especially with how fast the chapters are being released. Nothing beats some good old stats and a school setting to start things off. [img=More pls]
Amazing! Peak writing; I'm left in awe... Oh, please, go on with the story! Haven't seen much on the World background, so no detail about that! But the story is intriguing...
Can I have some fast pass chapters please? I'm omw running for those chapters. This web novel is quite entertaining so far. It's very interesting, with much inspiration from other amazing pieces of work out there. I can't wait to see how Mav improves and learn about the other types of powers that can be obtained in this fantastical world.
alright, the story is actually good so far... the way the character is described is perfect and just like that the other essential things like pace and descriptions are good too.. the only problem is... why's there so many 'I' in that thing T-T my poor lil eyes... they were tortured by I's but yea aside that, if you're cool with reading first person books, then this book is for ya!
W my friend this was a splendid piece of literature. I loved it hope you can keep up the good work. Slide me the next chapter plssssssssssssssss also great plot btw
Prety good, I mean I am just writting this because I have yet to actually read the book, but I wanna give u a good review anyway so it gets more attention
Shameless author self-review. God knows I need the self-review if none of my readers are ever gonna' review my book LMAO I really like where I'm going with the story. I have a lot of ideas and a rough plan of where the story is going but.... I am listening!!! If you have ideas or cool fight scene choreography or ANYTHING! Comment! Review! Power stones! Communicate with me somehow! Please! I'm lonely as heck! Anyways, as always, keep reading, keep reviewing and commenting, and last but not least... Keep spiting!
I normally don't read first person novels but this one was entertaining. The writing quality is top notch and flowing. I have read a similar story to this before where an author gets transmigrated into their novel but I didn't follow through with it like this one. I can't say much about the characters. Main character feels like....The main character! Overall pretty good book, would totally recommend
Very good pacing nice characters and of course tropes, well planned so far, expecting more to come soon especially with how fast the chapters are being released. Nothing beats some good old stats and a school setting to start things off. [img=More pls]
Amazing! Peak writing; I'm left in awe... Oh, please, go on with the story! Haven't seen much on the World background, so no detail about that! But the story is intriguing...
Can I have some fast pass chapters please? I'm omw running for those chapters. This web novel is quite entertaining so far. It's very interesting, with much inspiration from other amazing pieces of work out there. I can't wait to see how Mav improves and learn about the other types of powers that can be obtained in this fantastical world.
alright, the story is actually good so far... the way the character is described is perfect and just like that the other essential things like pace and descriptions are good too.. the only problem is... why's there so many 'I' in that thing T-T my poor lil eyes... they were tortured by I's but yea aside that, if you're cool with reading first person books, then this book is for ya!
W my friend this was a splendid piece of literature. I loved it hope you can keep up the good work. Slide me the next chapter plssssssssssssssss also great plot btw
Prety good, I mean I am just writting this because I have yet to actually read the book, but I wanna give u a good review anyway so it gets more attention
Shameless author self-review. God knows I need the self-review if none of my readers are ever gonna' review my book LMAO I really like where I'm going with the story. I have a lot of ideas and a rough plan of where the story is going but.... I am listening!!! If you have ideas or cool fight scene choreography or ANYTHING! Comment! Review! Power stones! Communicate with me somehow! Please! I'm lonely as heck! Anyways, as always, keep reading, keep reviewing and commenting, and last but not least... Keep spiting!