Unfortunately, people can only learn magic from the same affinity Mav will gain more magic in the future though
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The worldbuilding is really interesting, even though it remains true to the classic isekai genre Updates are consistent, but i want moaarrrrrrr Writing quality, its not for everyone. The paragraphs are longer than most webnovels, but as someone who came from reading traditional novels (the kind that are on paper) this is good stuff Characters are pretty cool, not much more to be said. They're pretty realistic for an isekai novel, where normally things start testing your suspension of disbelief as much as possible I want to see more of the story, so that's already one thing the novel's got going for it. I'm really looking forwards to the character development that Logan will get as he progresses!
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The hints of world background that we get are paint a picture of a mildly dystopian world and I really like where this is going Characters feel real, if irritating sometimes (but that's part of what makes them feel real!) and the designs are varied and interesting. None of the names feel out of place considering the setting Story is going places. This shit bangs Writing quality. It's pretty good, but the formatting makes me feel funky, like the underscores on either side of text to indicate thoughts? Not the greatest fan, but I'm probably gonna keep reading this. Overall? It's fire, go give it a try
Oh right, and don't worry about worldbuilding. We'll get there in due time :)
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The writing quality wavers between really good and some questionable, immersion breaking typos and random capitalization and strange moments in dialogue Overall the novel is good, not my favorite type of novel, but for its genre, it is definitely a gem Give it a try!
This acc is sus as heck bruh :sob: 4 read books, and 0 hours read :skull:
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original Why Did I Write So Many Tropes?!
The author has found himself within his own work of fiction. A tale as old as web novels. Transmigrated into the body of an unknown side character, Mav is forced to come to terms with the world he created and the characters within. Flying cars, magical technology, and Gates leading to corrupted worlds? Mav only has one goal: survive. In order to accomplish this goal, he must grow, or he will die in the onslaught of the incoming Apocalypse-- according to the original plot, millions of Gates will open up across the world in four years and the demonic corruption will spread beyond the Gates. Many people will die and Mav’s existence indicates an unstoppable butterfly effect that may end with the main characters’ deaths. But he can’t help but start getting attached to the main cast. The stakes are rising as the people he has come to love are threatened. And Mav might be the only one who knows about the mysterious organization that is determined to tear everything down.28 Chs 61 Collections
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The Alchemy Emperor Lives In My Head
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"Developing the mind alone will leave you with all the answers with no means to accomplish them; developing the body alone will leave you with power and misguided purposes; developing both body and mind is the true path towards splitting the seas." Talent and money are the two key resources for cultivation. Chu Yunfan has neither. The elimination of poverty after the Catastrophe Era doesn't mean that there aren't any class differences; the rich will be rich and the poor will be poor. However, his fate takes an unexpected turn when he discovers the soul of the Alchemy Emperor from the Kunlun Realm preserved from beyond the death of his fleshly body. This marks the beginning of his journey towards the pinnacle of martials arts, while uncovering more secrets behind the Ancient Zenith civilization that gave rise to the era of cultivation on Earth.21 Chs 18 Collections
We call him... the main character :sob:
Technically, the exploding measuring device was the System's fault. Gauss currently had affinity with all magic that could possibly be learned with the human body and the device had no method to represent that overwhelming and universe-defying talent.
Why Did I Write So Many Tropes?!
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