well, the future is currently very uncertain since the MC is interfering lol to us, he might as well know the future, but in his personal opinion, how can he predict everything
Seemingly excited that he had been trusted with something so important (though he didn't know that the secret was completely wrong), Perseus seemed to be much more cheerful than before.
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thank you for your kind words!
We call him... the main character :sob:
Technically, the exploding measuring device was the System's fault. Gauss currently had affinity with all magic that could possibly be learned with the human body and the device had no method to represent that overwhelming and universe-defying talent.
Urban · ATLS
Unfortunately, people can only learn magic from the same affinity Mav will gain more magic in the future though
Thank you for the review!
The worldbuilding is really interesting, even though it remains true to the classic isekai genre Updates are consistent, but i want moaarrrrrrr Writing quality, its not for everyone. The paragraphs are longer than most webnovels, but as someone who came from reading traditional novels (the kind that are on paper) this is good stuff Characters are pretty cool, not much more to be said. They're pretty realistic for an isekai novel, where normally things start testing your suspension of disbelief as much as possible I want to see more of the story, so that's already one thing the novel's got going for it. I'm really looking forwards to the character development that Logan will get as he progresses!
Thanks for the review!!!!
The hints of world background that we get are paint a picture of a mildly dystopian world and I really like where this is going Characters feel real, if irritating sometimes (but that's part of what makes them feel real!) and the designs are varied and interesting. None of the names feel out of place considering the setting Story is going places. This shit bangs Writing quality. It's pretty good, but the formatting makes me feel funky, like the underscores on either side of text to indicate thoughts? Not the greatest fan, but I'm probably gonna keep reading this. Overall? It's fire, go give it a try
Oh right, and don't worry about worldbuilding. We'll get there in due time :)
i highkey stg its not 😭😭😭
Why Did I Write So Many Tropes?!
Urban · ATLS