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okay shadow I got a great story idea for you, it's technically a comedy. so the mc is reincarnated into black clover but instead of being reborn in asta or evens yami's timeline he is reborn in juiles timeline. (now this is where it gets interesting) he is reborn as king from OPM. He has no grimoire and no magic like asta. He looks Ike King and even has the same heart problem like him. and he entered magic knights due to his over scary face 😂the birds won't land on him cause how scary he looks. anyways, he becomes wizard king and people believe he is so strong that he doesn't even need to pull out his grimoire so when they see him they get scared. (you can obviously work out the kinks of the story if you decide to create it, it was just an idea for a comedy story lol)
Generally speaking I give these fics the benefit of the doubt then read them even though they have bad reviews and sometimes you can find a gem or two that just gets heated on for no reason but this is not one of those starts off with a good cool premise the second I read that he can let other people read his grimoire immediately pushed down my optimism for this constant wasted opportunity the second he actually finished the test to become a doctor the tester wanted to marry her daughter to him and she does so by forcing him so I decided to drop the fic for that but I just read the next chapter cuz I already had it loaded then it proceeds to waste the rest of the intrigue I had for the novel prestige to show him that he apparently absolutely humiliated himself because he got drunk and so everyone in the Black Bull it basically bullying him over it which was the only reason why I'm writing this review
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irritating novel which just follow the same shit as other fic of this writer..which is harem and just followw the plotline without any possible improvement
Doing unreasonable nerfs during battle is ridiculous, if you don't want to make him look too strong then just keep him out of the fight and make this a slice of life story HAHAHA.
I myself am a fan of the anime. Black Clover too and I really like your writing about this novel. So I would like to request permission to translate this novel from yours into my language.
My first Dr strange story that too in bc world....cool author....strated with the ash fenix story to here.... please try to finish this story to the end..... looking forward to it
Disappointed,he was a grown man but after reborn he became childish .He shares his power to someone he just met. No change in story,and forced in everything .He risked his life for someone whom he just met .
a good fanfic. keep it up author. vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv
At first I saw that this fanfic had good potential, but after I read several chapters, this story still follows the original plot without any changes to the storyline, which I think is the essence of a fanfic.
Forcing a harem between every female character he meets is very dissapointing and giving access to his powers is even more of a no go. i should have realised at the start instead of wasting 3 hours of my life
The book is excellent, interesting, funny, no need to strain your brain the only thing I don't really like is the harem hints and thanks for the great story, I will follow and wait for the continuation
keep going author-san. a very good black clover fanfic. also waiting for the danny phantom fanfic since it was related to my childhood. plus you should also make fanfics about animated shows like 'american dragon: jake long' and 'randy cunninghum: 9th grade ninja'. both are good shows and were related to mine and many other's childhood. also stay safe and sound.
I usually like reading the author's other books, but they kind of ruined this one before it even got started. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
i am so annoyed with myself for not reading the reviews, after volume 1 i am just shocked at how it became something with potential to absolute trash, especially how the story was "forcing" the "awful coupling" of mc and vanessa, and how the character of the mc was being slowly ruined up to that point where it just disappeared to the dumps. just the fact it included vanessa proves its garbage
Beginning was a little shaky but the story seemed interesting plus the whole mystic arts in black clover. But everything went downhill after secre reveal. He only knows her as an intelligent bird for about 10years, I can see him trusting her little bit. But straight up giving access to his magics and revealing the secrets about his grimiore is downright bad. From a normal person's pov, if you found out the pet you've been keeping with you is actually a person, especially one with horns in a magical world where demon kings lived. You would atleast have some doubts about this person and her origin. But nothing like that happens, just asks her name and be luffy about it. Sorry for the rant, mc should've waited a bit or get to know her story before giving her full access to his library. That's just my perspective, you do you. Atleast the if MC was aware of black clover plotline, then the problem wouldn't have risen. All the best Author, I'll save this novel for later.
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it's another shadow story what else is there to say... BUT PERCY JACKSON- SON OF HADES RAIN SUPREME...
I can't rate 5 stars on the world background since it's a fanfic but I loved the rest without a doubt the best black clover fanfic I have ever read (translator)
Ruin the whole story just because someone can read his grimoire. The author needs to understand that doing “fanfic” isn’t the same as their “own” book. Fanfic is to get the reader's interest in the story already written and use the existing work to express their view of the original work. Original work expresses your imagination
Absolutely amazing imo I started this morning and I’m already at chapter 22. I can’t wait to see what happens in the next chapters author you’re doing a really really good job.
I read it, and it's trash. Like the other comment said might as well make secre a main character. This is just popular because the author has so many followers 🤢
Not sure why everyone’s hating on it—I’m actually really enjoying it so far! Maybe my taste in fics is just quirky, lol. But seriously, as I’ve said before, I’m loving the novel. Keep up the great work, author!
author do you even sleep? with all this goated fanfics writing them and constantly updating is hard Thats why you deserve a perfect 5/5 ⭐stars
La pura verdad me gusta la historia he...............................................................................................................................................................................
okay shadow I got a great story idea for you, it's technically a comedy. so the mc is reincarnated into black clover but instead of being reborn in asta or evens yami's timeline he is reborn in juiles timeline. (now this is where it gets interesting) he is reborn as king from OPM. He has no grimoire and no magic like asta. He looks Ike King and even has the same heart problem like him. and he entered magic knights due to his over scary face 😂the birds won't land on him cause how scary he looks. anyways, he becomes wizard king and people believe he is so strong that he doesn't even need to pull out his grimoire so when they see him they get scared. (you can obviously work out the kinks of the story if you decide to create it, it was just an idea for a comedy story lol)
Generally speaking I give these fics the benefit of the doubt then read them even though they have bad reviews and sometimes you can find a gem or two that just gets heated on for no reason but this is not one of those starts off with a good cool premise the second I read that he can let other people read his grimoire immediately pushed down my optimism for this constant wasted opportunity the second he actually finished the test to become a doctor the tester wanted to marry her daughter to him and she does so by forcing him so I decided to drop the fic for that but I just read the next chapter cuz I already had it loaded then it proceeds to waste the rest of the intrigue I had for the novel prestige to show him that he apparently absolutely humiliated himself because he got drunk and so everyone in the Black Bull it basically bullying him over it which was the only reason why I'm writing this review
[img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][imp=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]
irritating novel which just follow the same shit as other fic of this writer..which is harem and just followw the plotline without any possible improvement
Doing unreasonable nerfs during battle is ridiculous, if you don't want to make him look too strong then just keep him out of the fight and make this a slice of life story HAHAHA.
I myself am a fan of the anime. Black Clover too and I really like your writing about this novel. So I would like to request permission to translate this novel from yours into my language.
My first Dr strange story that too in bc world....cool author....strated with the ash fenix story to here.... please try to finish this story to the end..... looking forward to it
Disappointed,he was a grown man but after reborn he became childish .He shares his power to someone he just met. No change in story,and forced in everything .He risked his life for someone whom he just met .
a good fanfic. keep it up author. vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv
At first I saw that this fanfic had good potential, but after I read several chapters, this story still follows the original plot without any changes to the storyline, which I think is the essence of a fanfic.
Forcing a harem between every female character he meets is very dissapointing and giving access to his powers is even more of a no go. i should have realised at the start instead of wasting 3 hours of my life
The book is excellent, interesting, funny, no need to strain your brain the only thing I don't really like is the harem hints and thanks for the great story, I will follow and wait for the continuation
keep going author-san. a very good black clover fanfic. also waiting for the danny phantom fanfic since it was related to my childhood. plus you should also make fanfics about animated shows like 'american dragon: jake long' and 'randy cunninghum: 9th grade ninja'. both are good shows and were related to mine and many other's childhood. also stay safe and sound.
I usually like reading the author's other books, but they kind of ruined this one before it even got started. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
i am so annoyed with myself for not reading the reviews, after volume 1 i am just shocked at how it became something with potential to absolute trash, especially how the story was "forcing" the "awful coupling" of mc and vanessa, and how the character of the mc was being slowly ruined up to that point where it just disappeared to the dumps. just the fact it included vanessa proves its garbage
Beginning was a little shaky but the story seemed interesting plus the whole mystic arts in black clover. But everything went downhill after secre reveal. He only knows her as an intelligent bird for about 10years, I can see him trusting her little bit. But straight up giving access to his magics and revealing the secrets about his grimiore is downright bad. From a normal person's pov, if you found out the pet you've been keeping with you is actually a person, especially one with horns in a magical world where demon kings lived. You would atleast have some doubts about this person and her origin. But nothing like that happens, just asks her name and be luffy about it. Sorry for the rant, mc should've waited a bit or get to know her story before giving her full access to his library. That's just my perspective, you do you. Atleast the if MC was aware of black clover plotline, then the problem wouldn't have risen. All the best Author, I'll save this novel for later.
Reveal Spoiler it's another shadow story what else is there to say... BUT PERCY JACKSON- SON OF HADES RAIN SUPREME...
I can't rate 5 stars on the world background since it's a fanfic but I loved the rest without a doubt the best black clover fanfic I have ever read (translator)
Ruin the whole story just because someone can read his grimoire. The author needs to understand that doing “fanfic” isn’t the same as their “own” book. Fanfic is to get the reader's interest in the story already written and use the existing work to express their view of the original work. Original work expresses your imagination
Absolutely amazing imo I started this morning and I’m already at chapter 22. I can’t wait to see what happens in the next chapters author you’re doing a really really good job.
I read it, and it's trash. Like the other comment said might as well make secre a main character. This is just popular because the author has so many followers 🤢
Not sure why everyone’s hating on it—I’m actually really enjoying it so far! Maybe my taste in fics is just quirky, lol. But seriously, as I’ve said before, I’m loving the novel. Keep up the great work, author!
author do you even sleep? with all this goated fanfics writing them and constantly updating is hard Thats why you deserve a perfect 5/5 ⭐stars
La pura verdad me gusta la historia he...............................................................................................................................................................................