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This fanfic makes one of the biggest mistakes a fanfic can have in my opinion, that is sharing powers, I honestly hate that, if the mc shares his specialty, what stops a person with greater talent than the mc from overcoming the mc in his own power/cheat'? it really takes away the vibe for me, if you don't like that, skip this fanfic
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Really good fanfic. Although the integration of some characters looks weird, it's still good. I recommend reading it.
I like the background you're trying to create by mixing Marvel and Black Clover. I think if you go that route, you'd need to power up the canonical characters to a certain extent, considering the threats Strange has to face as the Sorcerer Supreme. On the other hand, I don’t dislike the idea of him giving access to his library—original Doctor Strange would do that too. Also, in the end, all the power belongs to the protagonist, and only he can reach the peak of the Sorcerer Supreme. The classic Strange could confidently speak with the Living Tribunal, and even the Black Priest version makes him unbeatable against any challenge. The only downside I see—and I say this as a harem fan—is that the way he wins over the heroines needs more refinement. It’s not bad, but there’s room for improvement.
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I do hope you make a one piece story as Luffy or an oc mc of with the Nika fruit or maybe a Berzerk story as guts or an oc mc
Not worth it, just follow the original canon [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
He’s a saint a bleeding heart mister free for all power giving good boy his principle is - If all of us are special ( Dr. Strange magic and knowledge ) then NO ONE is -
just the fact someone else can read his book is so off putting. and the fact there were sorcerers before him. man you are pulling dissapoinments after dissapoinments
Just step away and don't bother with anything written here. All of the stories are either harem trash, follow the og plot with no changes, the story having people make the dumbest decisions you will ever witness or God forbid all the above. RUN AND DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME
This is just a black clover story that follows the original work, There are no changes made by the MC, Like fighting Mars which requires the MC and Asta to work together.... Too weird
Keep it up the novel is great 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪
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Buena base, mal desarrollo. El hecho de que el protagonista comparta su habilidad con los demás le quita todo lo que tiene de especial como personaje, preferiría que sea egoísta y no comparta su habilidad. Si esto se mejora de alguna manera a posteriori por favor que alguien me lo diga y le daré otra oportunidad, hasta entonces me parece la calificación más adecuada
I love most of your books... so let's write the series to 100 episodes as soon as possible author-san. (Threat)
The writing quality has some grammatical error other than that its a good read but don't judge like how I did at the very first chapters. The bad thing however is important details are spoiled at first. It doesn't have new plot till chap 23 same canon plot. not sure about future. Honestly I don't like idea about having 6 clover, a unique idea nonetheless
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My review is simple. The story is amazing, like all the other ones. So I'm happy
finally, a Dr strange powers fic, oh I've been waiting for this, hope it's worth that it makes a name for itself here
A nice black clover fic... strange is one of Marvel's strongest characters and to put all his powers in a 15year old without making the character too op but also strong enough is cool.... Also black clover deserves good fics and this one has the potential to be
the mc is strong but not overpowered that can have the strength to beat the wizard king in 5 chapter. The mc is also need to work hard to master the magic he got unlike other ff mc where the they master the ability without doing anything.... TRY IT....
It's really good. You know, somehow I want cry of happiness. I was here when the author first start writing fanfic. It's was not good but I was potential in him. Although I was disappointed because of not seeing much improvement but this makes all that better. I can continue to read you work again author. I am sorry for words in past. Hope you forgive me. But this one is really good! I will be eagerly waiting for every update!
Autor tem como fazer uma história de dualu dalu 2 com protagonista com Golden Dragon King Spirit 😶😶with a summon-less system .,.,.,.,...,.,.,.,..,.,.,,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,..,.,.,.,...,.,.,..,.,.,...,.,.,..,.,.,.,m.,
there's not many Black clover ff now days. ill just waiting for more chapter knowing the author only writing peak novel. more more more more more chapter please
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Здравствуйте! Кто любит клише добро пожаловать! Очередной фанфик про гарем, где главный герой крадёт всё у основных персонажей и возвышаются, а остальные кушают то что поедет с его стола, то есть объедки
author do you even sleep? with all this goated fanfics writing them and constantly updating is hard Thats why you deserve a perfect 5/5 ⭐stars
This fanfic makes one of the biggest mistakes a fanfic can have in my opinion, that is sharing powers, I honestly hate that, if the mc shares his specialty, what stops a person with greater talent than the mc from overcoming the mc in his own power/cheat'? it really takes away the vibe for me, if you don't like that, skip this fanfic
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Really good fanfic. Although the integration of some characters looks weird, it's still good. I recommend reading it.
I like the background you're trying to create by mixing Marvel and Black Clover. I think if you go that route, you'd need to power up the canonical characters to a certain extent, considering the threats Strange has to face as the Sorcerer Supreme. On the other hand, I don’t dislike the idea of him giving access to his library—original Doctor Strange would do that too. Also, in the end, all the power belongs to the protagonist, and only he can reach the peak of the Sorcerer Supreme. The classic Strange could confidently speak with the Living Tribunal, and even the Black Priest version makes him unbeatable against any challenge. The only downside I see—and I say this as a harem fan—is that the way he wins over the heroines needs more refinement. It’s not bad, but there’s room for improvement.
Reveal Spoiler I do hope you make a one piece story as Luffy or an oc mc of with the Nika fruit or maybe a Berzerk story as guts or an oc mc
Not worth it, just follow the original canon [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
He’s a saint a bleeding heart mister free for all power giving good boy his principle is - If all of us are special ( Dr. Strange magic and knowledge ) then NO ONE is -
just the fact someone else can read his book is so off putting. and the fact there were sorcerers before him. man you are pulling dissapoinments after dissapoinments
Just step away and don't bother with anything written here. All of the stories are either harem trash, follow the og plot with no changes, the story having people make the dumbest decisions you will ever witness or God forbid all the above. RUN AND DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME
This is just a black clover story that follows the original work, There are no changes made by the MC, Like fighting Mars which requires the MC and Asta to work together.... Too weird
Keep it up the novel is great 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪
Reveal Spoiler Buena base, mal desarrollo. El hecho de que el protagonista comparta su habilidad con los demás le quita todo lo que tiene de especial como personaje, preferiría que sea egoísta y no comparta su habilidad. Si esto se mejora de alguna manera a posteriori por favor que alguien me lo diga y le daré otra oportunidad, hasta entonces me parece la calificación más adecuada
I love most of your books... so let's write the series to 100 episodes as soon as possible author-san. (Threat)
The writing quality has some grammatical error other than that its a good read but don't judge like how I did at the very first chapters. The bad thing however is important details are spoiled at first. It doesn't have new plot till chap 23 same canon plot. not sure about future. Honestly I don't like idea about having 6 clover, a unique idea nonetheless
Reveal Spoiler My review is simple. The story is amazing, like all the other ones. So I'm happy
finally, a Dr strange powers fic, oh I've been waiting for this, hope it's worth that it makes a name for itself here
A nice black clover fic... strange is one of Marvel's strongest characters and to put all his powers in a 15year old without making the character too op but also strong enough is cool.... Also black clover deserves good fics and this one has the potential to be
the mc is strong but not overpowered that can have the strength to beat the wizard king in 5 chapter. The mc is also need to work hard to master the magic he got unlike other ff mc where the they master the ability without doing anything.... TRY IT....
It's really good. You know, somehow I want cry of happiness. I was here when the author first start writing fanfic. It's was not good but I was potential in him. Although I was disappointed because of not seeing much improvement but this makes all that better. I can continue to read you work again author. I am sorry for words in past. Hope you forgive me. But this one is really good! I will be eagerly waiting for every update!
Autor tem como fazer uma história de dualu dalu 2 com protagonista com Golden Dragon King Spirit 😶😶with a summon-less system .,.,.,.,...,.,.,.,..,.,.,,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,..,.,.,.,...,.,.,..,.,.,...,.,.,..,.,.,.,m.,
there's not many Black clover ff now days. ill just waiting for more chapter knowing the author only writing peak novel. more more more more more chapter please
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Здравствуйте! Кто любит клише добро пожаловать! Очередной фанфик про гарем, где главный герой крадёт всё у основных персонажей и возвышаются, а остальные кушают то что поедет с его стола, то есть объедки
author do you even sleep? with all this goated fanfics writing them and constantly updating is hard Thats why you deserve a perfect 5/5 ⭐stars