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Dr_Chad

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and every ones opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

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XIANJING

It has become a family tradition to fully support Akkikan's work, I do this just because it is a tradition, [img=eksplorasi][img=eksplorasi][img=eksplorasi]

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indroid

Pros: + Updates consistency Cons: - Good premise but poor execution, the interactions between characters were too stiff. You can check the Siscon fanfic, that story has the best interactions between characters. - Monologue, too much monologues! - Almost every monologue paragraph always ends up with ANNOYING 'right? right? right?' - Akikan didn't know much about the original story of One Piece. Like the MC (without Hakis) managed to subdue Moria easily. The MC killed Blueno without taking his DF because Akikan didn't know how OP door-door devil fruit was or he didn't even know that Blueno was a DF user.

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EyeOfSilver

I will keep this here until the ending since I can't trust akikan to deliver a good ending anymore.

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InfinityAndBeyond

I love this Akikan's new book, it's concept was unique y'all should give it a try. SPOILER: So there are not only one mc, but many at different worlds. There's Masa(mc's name) from One Piece world, there's Masa from Mahouka, and there's Masa from Dxd, and from what i see Akikan planned to add more. Think of them as what if Mc was sent to "this" world. These Masas can share power with each other and use all abilities from other masa. Pretty unique right

akikan40's new story already gets full marks from me. akikan40's new story already gets full marks from me. akikan40's new story already gets full marks from me. akikan40's new story already gets full marks from me.

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EternalEden

The story does have it's positives. The quality of it is pretty good, the character of the MC is somewhat likable, and I was interested in following along with the story. Honestly, I'd really like the story if it weren't for two major downsides that it has. There's no real tension. The MC is basically immortal as he can come back to life pretty much as many times as he wants. He also has dozens of other powers that he got from other worlds, and the ability to eat multiple devil fruit. I much prefer a main character that actually EARNS their power instead of being handed dozens of powers at the beginning of the story with no effort on his part. Now people will never worry about the MC's well being since he'll just respawn right after. Death has no consequences. The other issue is sudden brain rot. The main character is actually pretty smart, and has used his brain fairly often to achieve his goals. Which just makes it so much worse when his IQ basically drops to -69 when the author wants him to. The MC can disguise themselves, disable surveillance, and steal people's bodies. I tell you this because the main character used NONE OF THESE POWERS when openly killing a Celestial Dragon. Only disabling the surveillance around him after he'd been spotted killing them. In fact, the MC has actively stated multiple times that he wants to steal the body of a Celestial Dragon. So the author is making the main character go AGAINST his own goals just to throw in a forced plot.

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darkwhite

one of my most favorite novel is akikan's chat group. if we compare writing qualty of chat group to whatever shit this novel is like comparing naruto with boku no pico. i think some translation r better than this trash

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Keyaruga_Tsuki

so I just found out this dude is known for Harem and that's why everyone is hyped.I already know what this story will be..so anyone reading through the ratings just uh...goodluck?Goodluck?. I'm gone

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DevilDzishan

#akikan40 please one masa from #Tensura world as a demon lord , True dragon or as a Archdaemon 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

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Lucien_Daybreak

Is this one of those possessions dojin I've read? the one where fat bro get into the blond girl but this time it's reverse lol

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Nonamenoname

Okey, I do like the story, although I may not agree with some of the stuff the author has done or described in the world of One Piece I can accept this since it is in fact an AU world and not 100% canon, so there is a certain leeway that the author can use to do what he wants. All in all, a good fanfic but keep in mind that there are several things like devil fruits and the powers of others that you may not agree with.

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Daoist6T2S0y

akikan40's new book must automatically supported asap! Although Fairy Tail fic when? Natsu was meant to be a villain because he was the E.N.D and a good ol Riser Phenex might do the trick :)

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Dark19

If it's an Akikan story, it deserves full marks from the start. ...... Z Ss S S S S S S S S S S S S S ........... ........................ .......... .........

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stellaryu

This genre of multiple avatars is just pure annoyance. Bet it became popular because its easier for AI to start bunch of random plots than to develop and focus a single good one

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Leon_Walt_4098

A very good 👍 fanfic but knowing the author it will probably a another unfinished work like all his work. The author writes some really good fanfic but he never finished his work

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Sp33dy961

Absolute Cinema

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Denver_0631

Full marks to a New Beginning. ... .. .. ... .

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MrSimo

just add a harem tag brother . . . . . . . .