The story feels off, a lot of the time it doesn't feel natural, and seems a little forced. The story also goes out of its way to try and show the MC as a "badass" in a rather sloppy Chinese main character way. Then there's the romance, which also isn't great. The MC and Dr. Strange talk about Gwen's age and whether or not she's old enough to avoid legal trouble. This is played off as a laugh... Next is the Scarlet Witch who is left traumatized after the death of her brother and goes to see him for help. They have an immediate connection because of plot and having "similar powers". Like a few days later, she ends up making out with him which is definitely weird. Even worse, is that the MC PLANNED to get with her, so this comes off as incredibly manipulative. Like using his psychiatrist position to benefit from her vulnerable state.
The group sent to find him could only find a bloody splat in his last known location, and he was gone for a long time. There is no "Just Missing" as if it were some minor detail. Especially since this was so convincing, his mom died out of worry.
Nah this time the dad is in the right. For all he knows, his son is weak and nearly got attacked by someone who would cripple him because he was mouthing off. Then criticizes his dad for lack of control of the clan because he was so distraught after his son's death. Y'know for a monk, the MC sure isn't being very understanding...
Uh...
"Never let him surpass you, Shisui," Elder Shinji said, his voice carrying a note of finality, like making a verdict. "No one from the Uchiha will ever be outdone by a Yamanaka. Is that understood?"
Anime & Comics · TheDreamofSomeday
Powerful enough to bring peace to the ninja world with his food.
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Anime & Comics · TheDreamofSomeday
That's...a bit of a leap...
I'm also the Legendary Super Saiyan, aren't I?
Video Games · Koyon
One of the rare intelligent "young masters".
"Brother Yun, there is very little in this world that you lose by treating situations like these carefully."
Fantasy · VeganMaster
You see but you don't understand, you listen, but you don't hear. Basically, you read what I'm saying but somehow miss the meaning. Yes the reincarnates originally belonged to that continent and they are influenced by the cultivation and their new memories. However, like I pointed out in my very first comment, there is a big difference between knowing something and doing something. This is shown when despite having the knowledge the cultivation and combat techniques none of the reincarnates are able to use the skills very well at the start. They need to take time to adjust and learn how to wield them despite already having years of knowledge ingrained in them. Furthermore, being able to instantly adapt to this stressful situation despite only being literal keyboard Warriors in our world doesn't make any sense. And cannot simply be slept under the rug by saying: "Oh they're just not normal." Of course there's also the matter of the being turned into a slave. You seem to somehow have missed the point of me bringing it up. I was saying that character had no legitimate reason to act on their suspicions. The story goes out of its way to tell us that person wouldn't use their power to bully someone far weaker than them. And we even hear this person's thoughts saying that they don't care about the secrets of the MC. Do you understand? I'm saying that the story went out of its way to say that the granny wouldn't do such a thing, and then immediately contradicted itself the very next moment. And I'm quite certain that you are aware of this little bit of common sense. You are just choosing to ignore it because you really like the story. And that's fine, you can like a story even if there are issues with it. However, don't come crying to me after you cover your eyes to ignore the errors and pretend that they don't exist. Honestly, I would prefer if you don't respond to me again.
"This not one of the junk novels where Mc gets op in 2 chaps . This is a great piece of work which takes time to build characters and the world." Yeah that's great, except my 2nd complaint is literally that the MCs are adapting too fast to the scenario. Rather funny how you say I lack the patience to read the story, when apparently you lack the patience to even read something as short as my review. Your words are worthless.
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[Wake up big guy! It's time to go and eat until we can't walk!]
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Fantasy · RinoZ