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I think Aria and Ryan's journey is worth the time.. A different novel.. Though I'll be the first to accept that I expected more from our beloved military Dr. Putting aside Ryan's acclimatisation to the apocalyptic environment, I thought Aria will be more powerful even if she's not equal to Ryan...
A solid 4. The writing is excellent. It’s too fluffy for me. The chapters are too short with little to no progress in each chapter. I think I read 10-20 chapters of them running initially. the best chapter is the first one. After that my hopes were dashed. The MC is weak, and is a Book bag for the ML literally she rides around on his back asking questions. I don’t see any value in her apocalyptic story so far. She’s cannon fodder that is JUST that. I haven’t even smelled a redeemtion for her. The monsters being unkillable (immortal) is too much. Grrrrr, creek, crash, chase blah blah blah. Shooting bullets for what reason it can’t die. And the MC is a weak link even getting bit by a rabbit. The story gets your hopes up to lead you no where. With lots of heart pumping and subtle flirting between the leads. For what?? He picked up a chick and has literally had to carry her the whole time. It’s not attractive whatsoever and the MC isn’t someone I admire. That’s what makes a good fantasy novel. Admiring the MC and being satisfied with their actions. Everything this chick has done so far have been down right silly and without the authors excellent penmanship I wouldn’t have made it past the first 20 chapters. Dear author I’d love to see your take on a generic trope. Your banter and world building is top tier. A strong but delicate female who’s quick on her feet beautiful resourceful and admirable. The male lead should actually need her or benefit from her being around other than for food. And some enemy that can be killed lol Rant over!
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there is a good foundation and character development. The story progresses smoothly with good interaction.
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looks interesting, I just hope the female characters actually get to have their own space in the story
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The story is interesting. I dint know how to feel about it. All in all, all the best author.
setting is interesting, though the battlefield medicine shown is inaccurate the overall feel is solid and engaging.
Review for an FP. I did read the fantasy. I think the idea of the character going to the future is a nice change. I’ve been reading a lot of novels where the character is in the past
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I have mixed feelings about the characters. The MC and ML's interactions are interesting. He thinks very much like an apocalyptic survivor and I get where he is coming from. Aria, on the other hand, seems to lose her military and medical training after getting flicked into the future. Lots of training builds muscle memory, but it seems like her brain and body aren't in sync or her engrained instincts never kick in. Perhaps they will once she gets a moment to familiarize with her surroundings? I better read some more 🤔🤔
Hello everyone ~ As the author I would give the book a 5 star review, so this book is about an apocalypse but this isn't the classic zombies, this book apocalypse is filled with monsters (mutants), so at least read the first 10 chapters, i know my MC is a soldier but the firsts chapters made her look weak, read through the story and u won't be disappointed and lastly please vote, comment and send gifts. if you have any questions, say them. Bye~~~
I think Aria and Ryan's journey is worth the time.. A different novel.. Though I'll be the first to accept that I expected more from our beloved military Dr. Putting aside Ryan's acclimatisation to the apocalyptic environment, I thought Aria will be more powerful even if she's not equal to Ryan...
A solid 4. The writing is excellent. It’s too fluffy for me. The chapters are too short with little to no progress in each chapter. I think I read 10-20 chapters of them running initially. the best chapter is the first one. After that my hopes were dashed. The MC is weak, and is a Book bag for the ML literally she rides around on his back asking questions. I don’t see any value in her apocalyptic story so far. She’s cannon fodder that is JUST that. I haven’t even smelled a redeemtion for her. The monsters being unkillable (immortal) is too much. Grrrrr, creek, crash, chase blah blah blah. Shooting bullets for what reason it can’t die. And the MC is a weak link even getting bit by a rabbit. The story gets your hopes up to lead you no where. With lots of heart pumping and subtle flirting between the leads. For what?? He picked up a chick and has literally had to carry her the whole time. It’s not attractive whatsoever and the MC isn’t someone I admire. That’s what makes a good fantasy novel. Admiring the MC and being satisfied with their actions. Everything this chick has done so far have been down right silly and without the authors excellent penmanship I wouldn’t have made it past the first 20 chapters. Dear author I’d love to see your take on a generic trope. Your banter and world building is top tier. A strong but delicate female who’s quick on her feet beautiful resourceful and admirable. The male lead should actually need her or benefit from her being around other than for food. And some enemy that can be killed lol Rant over!
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looks interesting, I just hope the female characters actually get to have their own space in the story
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The story is interesting. I dint know how to feel about it. All in all, all the best author.
setting is interesting, though the battlefield medicine shown is inaccurate the overall feel is solid and engaging.
Review for an FP. I did read the fantasy. I think the idea of the character going to the future is a nice change. I’ve been reading a lot of novels where the character is in the past
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I have mixed feelings about the characters. The MC and ML's interactions are interesting. He thinks very much like an apocalyptic survivor and I get where he is coming from. Aria, on the other hand, seems to lose her military and medical training after getting flicked into the future. Lots of training builds muscle memory, but it seems like her brain and body aren't in sync or her engrained instincts never kick in. Perhaps they will once she gets a moment to familiarize with her surroundings? I better read some more 🤔🤔
Hello everyone ~ As the author I would give the book a 5 star review, so this book is about an apocalypse but this isn't the classic zombies, this book apocalypse is filled with monsters (mutants), so at least read the first 10 chapters, i know my MC is a soldier but the firsts chapters made her look weak, read through the story and u won't be disappointed and lastly please vote, comment and send gifts. if you have any questions, say them. Bye~~~