interesting setting and worldbuilding ideas.
setting is interesting, though the battlefield medicine shown is inaccurate the overall feel is solid and engaging.
Interesting concept and excellent artwork to draw people in.
FP reasoned review, but the loop setup with limited information and disinformation combined allows for a lot of interesting encounters, mysteries, and interactions.
Fascinating premise, will see how it goes.
interesting read with an excellent cover.
Review mostly for FP, but the premise is engaging and the story starts entertaining.
Review mostly for FP, but read the first few chaps. Could use an editing pass, tenses change arbitrarilly, and many things seem over-the-top, to the point of it being immersion-breaking. Decent premise though, and can see what the author is going for. Just would benefit a lot from some polish.
I kinda don't miss the bodyguard duo. Like, they weren't annoying or anything, just they wore out their welcome? Like, this was a satisfying end to their involvement. Our new companion on the other hand... I dunno. We'll see.
Interesting anð well-developed pair of MCs
Frozen Flame of Dawn
Fantasy · SHADEWHISPER