How to Survive as an Uchiha

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noname_marco

I'm almost 95% sure this is a chinese story and if thats the case, put the link and say it as well instead of saying it's your own work -----------------------------------

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OtakuSad0

nothing that interesting, after all if copying other kekkei genkai were so easy, Orochimaru wouldn't have to research so much, and to tell the truth an Uchiha who lived in Madara's period being so "weak" at 17 years old is even a bit pathetic

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ZoroTraineeWriter

I tried to give this fanfic chance because your FS fanfic are very good, however this story is quite boring and I dont really understand his golden finger. Maybe other people like this novel but not me. Im sorry.

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Xiphos_Gladius_03

This is fire! I like how the MC's power is still not fully clear to us, but I hope it will be made explicit in the future. _________________________

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SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

This is best Translation and best Uchiha reincarnation fic I've read in years. I've been hooked every chapter so far, and it's got 40 chapters posted at this moment. I have not been this excited about a Naruto fic in years.

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Thenorthernstar

The lexicon is good and the story interesting. please keep it up

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lazy_gamer23

By the way novel has interesting character development,power system seems reasonable till chap.20,just character of obito does't feel extreme enough could be influence of mc and black zetsu does't seem cautios or maybe he is too confident etc. Story is nice and writing quality is excellent. Chapter length is also long enough

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Nishanthvyas123456

Quite good........ Just read the first chapter and u shall know................................. ...................................................................

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Chaddts

The writing is mid. It's not bad in any respect, just very bland. Much of the setting and locations just get the generic descriptions. The character is just an unknown. We don't really know all his capabilities prior to a fight, so everything feels like plot armor, because he learned everything off-screen. The reader, not knqojnv his capabilities make all the fights feel very contrived, and the more we learn, the more o.p he becomes. It starts to feel very much like a "wish fulfillment" story in disguise. The story is a fanfic so no real grading deserved here. With all that above said, there are problems that become readily apparent in chapter 13. Namely the continuity issue with Obito. It is mentioned that Obito was sent on a mission to the bridge where he supposedly "dies" our Mc tried to get assigned as a swap for Obito during this, but it fails. Based on the conversations this mission had yet to conclude and the events of the mission have yet to happen. And then suddenly a few chapters later, we have a "Madara" sighting. AFAIK this CANNOT, be the actual Madara as he is stuck. and based on context of the scene it seems to be Obito, which contradicts the time-frame of the timeline. Furthermore, the timeline is POST third ninja war, when Obito's mission to the bridge was DURING the war. The more I dig into this facet, the more the story unravels. Fix the continuity and I'll update my review. It can be fixed easily, by changing the conversation the Mc has with the fourth hokage, to instead be one with the Third, who was the acting Hokage when Obito was assigned the mission and died. Furthermore, the fourths conversation about the kanabi Bridge mission, was done in a "jovial" tone. Completely at odds with the fact two of his students died on that mission, which by context, further supports my claim that the author is unaware the events should have already passed at this point in time.

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Evil_History

Эта история мне очень понравилась. Главный герой подкупает своим спокойствием и умением смотреть на любую ситуацию с юмором. Большое спасибо автору за возможность прочитать столь прекрасную историю.)

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showdawn

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Machete_007

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Cyber_Ninja_8665

Good. Very good.

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Itsuka_Tobio

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zenku

Whether it is translation or original creation, is in question. Nonetheless it is rare find in domain of Naruto fanfictions, with quite novel path, as to how Uchiha MC should develop, with undertone of politics (but not overly much), and quite lot backstory, which is slowly being unraveled. The story is not rigid, and contains comedic undertones lightening tone of story and many conflicts therein. Overall this strory is worth reading, and relative to other novels in this domain, remains a gem.

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Opal_professor

Awesomeness and a beautiful soulful story Awesomeness and a beautiful soulful story Awesomeness and a beautiful soulful story Awesomeness and a beautiful soulful story Awesomeness and a beautiful soulful story

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Mastersun

This story is boring as hell. 🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱 ........................................................................

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Action_Potential

for anyone hesitating to read the story it is very fun. the main character is smart and strong but not op. the characters are also smart, and the dialogue feels good. there is just a very small critic, but it is just my opinion. the author seems to downplay a lot of dark spots that are already established in canon by giving made up excuses and justifications. but I think these are just small adjustments so that the story flow better and the mc can do certain actions without conflicting with his personality. anyways 9/10 I recommend this

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